putri@nila
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Hello, ...
let me introduce my self first. My name is Putri.Nila, an asian female from asia continent. from a far east country that you never want to visit heheheheh
I'm here want to request a story.
I really hope and wish someone would take my last request
this request kinda long ...
i really hope you could take my humble request.
thank you.
please PM me if you interested
let me introduce my self first. My name is Putri.Nila, an asian female from asia continent. from a far east country that you never want to visit heheheheh
I'm here want to request a story.
I really hope and wish someone would take my last request
this request kinda long ...
i really hope you could take my humble request.
thank you.
please PM me if you interested
1. Character
Victim:
Jane, a daughter from wealthy family, she's 26. she's married with one of successful bussinesman, Henry, 28 years old.
She's hot tempered, arrogant, and bitchy. Come from wealthy family. Her family as rich as Henry family. Asian, black stright hair, 168 cm height, slim with S-line body.
Jane has a habit. whenever or wherever her most ticklish spot get hit by fingers (or tickle tool), she said: " I’M BARE FEET - SO TICKLISH - CAN’T STAND IT! NAKED FEET – BARE SOLES – NEED SANDAL" automatically.
Tickler:
Annabelle: Henry's mother. She's Jane’s mother in law. Her character is strict and uncompromise. 55 years old, wealthy person.
2. Outfits
Because the setting is engagement of marriage, the outfits and dress is very formal. Jane wear thight red short gown with her most expensive shoes: Christian Louboutin high heels (nude color with red soles bottom).
Annabelle wear blue long dress show her dignity and charisma as a mother in law.
Jane has two high heels: nude color Christian louvoutin’s for engagement and diamod louboutins for wedding party
3. Plot
And as far as i know, a story about wife vs mother in law never made by all TMF story author. It will be the first one and the only one. The main idea is: daughter in law vs mother in law, tickling at engagement event. Setting place at Church, and the tickle scenerio just like counselling session.
Lets kick off the plot:
Jane get proposed by Henry, the wealthy young rookie bussinesman. Annabelle, mother from Henry dislike Jane because of her immature attitude, arrogant and very bitchy. Eventhough Jane has perfect figure as a woman: pretty, sexy and of course wealthy. Annabelle want to stop the engagement but she cant because Jane' father is a bussines partner with her husband.
Annabelle know that Jane is an bitch with expert shoeplay skill for making all man gives all her wants. Even she’s rich, Jane is a bad woman for Annabell. One thing she hate her is her smile, her arrogant and wicked smile, and the main thing she hate Jane, her daughter in law, is her flawless feet and her shoe collection.
During the engagement, Jane is brave enough to doing full actionpacked of shoeplay display infront off her parents in law. She even undo her heel strap just for dangling and shoeplaying.
Annabelle pick her sit just behind Jane to see whole shoeplay show. After the engagement is over, Annabelle with the help of both of Henry’s brother and big fat sister trap Jane feet behind so her soles up facing her mother in law.
Annabelle find every ticklish spot on Jane’s soles by asking Jane personally and test it to find the truth.
As a mother in law, Annabelle enjoying Jane ticklish feet while she ask for demand.
*Jane has a habit that she like to driving her car with bare foot. So, maybe you could mention that thing. Jane come to her engagement party with her luxury car and driving bare foot. her soles will be a little bit dirty, and at the tickling scene, Annabelle ask Jane why her feet dirty?
The tickling will start after Annabelle clean Jane's soles with ice cube
4. The climax, Annabelle's demand and ending
I'm thinking of climax point and i believe this one is suit for the climax. Annabelle demand making Jane frustration:
a. Annabelle will stop the tickling if:
• Jane say: " my feet bare, i dont need sandal, i dont need shoes, please tickle my bare feet" fifthy times in front of Annabelle.
• Jane agreed to make a charity event at her wedding party.
• Jane agreed to give all her shoes for charity. Jane has more than 25 expensive high heels and 50 fancy flat shoes. She must give all those shoes for charity.
b. Annabelle allowed Jane to marry Henry if:
• She must live with Annabelle.
• During stay with Annabelle, Jane should not wearing any foot wear, she must bare foot all the time.
• She left all her wealth behind and starting her new life with zero money. She even must left all her fancy clothing behind.
• She not allowed to take a money from Henry, her husband. She must make money for her self.
• At her wedding: she only allowed to wear standard wedding dress with short lower gown, and of course bare feet and no shoes, not even stocking or socks
Ending:
the wedding party will held at Ritz Carlton Hotel Ballroom, the flooring made from marble, and with Annabelle request, the flooring will not covered with carpet. When the bride enter the hall, Annabelle instruct the hotel manager to rise the cool temperature. Jane will feel cold because she wear open thin wedding shirt, short skirt and bare foot.
Jane and Henry get married at church. Its very unique wedding since Jane only wear simple and cheap wedding dress, bare feet without shoes.
Jane already prepared her expensive wedding dress and the christian louboutin lady peep toe pumps white diamond, but Annabelle confiscate/seize all her expensive wedding set, even the diamond louboutin.
both of Jane's christian louboutins in front of the wedding stage (so Jane can see her shoes clearly with her eyes) and written there: for charity auction start from $.5.
The charity.
All Jane shoes are given to charity, all her flat shoes and sandals are given for free, but for two christian louboutins high heels (the one she wear at engagement and the diamond one for wedding) are given for auction and the revenue will given to orphan.
After the wedding party, Jane saw all her fancy and expensive shoes displayed in front of church. She look her own feet, and from now on, no footwear covered her feet until her mother in law grant it.
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