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Striking back from torture (tribute comic - f/f belly, feet, breasts, face)

Khali

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WARNING - Once more this series is linear versions only, very little background/shading/color present at all for now. I also have lacked speech bubbles...read the panel descriptions below. You are warned.

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A long time has passed since Kelyn, Safira and myself/Khali have vanished, taken somewhere by Scavenger's inquisitor Kitzalia and tortured in a delightful, er, dire manner...

Someone forgotten by Kitzalia (...and most of my fans...) has not forgotten their screams in the distance echoing in the night. Someone actively missing her friends, whom knows that the vile inquisitor has taken them, desperately wishes to find and rescue them...

...and have revenge as well.

So, with all of Khali's sneaky thief-types taken (if you say Keiko, I say shut up)...you send the next best thing to infiltrate a dungeon. Someone who can track; is at home in dark, wild places; someone who can hunt...PREY.

And Mistress Kitzalia herself is the best source of information of the prisoners' wherabouts...the victim IS the prey...

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PAGE 1:
Panel 1 - The expert tracker finds Kitzalia has resorted to the biggest cliche of dungeon complexes: back doors leading into equally dark forests surrounding their walls. Moonlit trees surrounding the dusty stone precipices offer ample spots for one so attuned to the wilds to patiently watch and wait. The poorly hidden door begins to creak open, letting a small amount of torch light from within upon the dark grasses outside. The shadow in the trees tenses up as it observes.

Panel 2 - A slim, cloaked figure with one gauntleted hand quietly emerges from the depths, her visage enshadowed by the hood and darkness. The figure's stance displays an attitude of power, dominance...and cruelty.

Panel 3 - Her quarry in site, the form amidst the branches silently moves her lithe fingers to the shaft of an arrow nestled in her quiver. She slowly slides the dart from its sheath, a small strange pouch tied to the wooden shaft.

Panel 4 - Part of the hooded person's face comes into view...her prey. The mistress has a vile smirk...what horrible things could she have done this evening deep within the dungeon.

Panel 5 - An equally nasty smile spreads across the lips of the hunter. Spiky strands of brown hair fall around her chin as she pulls back on her bowstring...arrow aimed directly at the target.

Panel 6 - The dart is released from the shadowed figure's grasp as the cloaked one shuts the barely concealed doorway and turned into the cool night air.

PAGE 2:
Panel 1 - THIP! The arrow makes barely any sound as it sinks into the grass between Mistress Kitzalia's boots. Unaware that she's been tracked, the surprise of an attack makes her step back, arms to her sides as her hood drops off. Immediately the impact with the ground jars the small pouch tied to the dart...and a white mist quickly spreads from it up towards Kitzalia's face.

Panel 2 - Shocked at the speed and accuracy of the attack, the inquisitor finds the gas quite effective as it swirls around her cycloptic face. She coughs harshly as it fills her lungs, becoming light-headed rather quickly. Clean air is hard to gasp...

Panel 3 - THUMP. The sleeping mist takes its full effect as consciousness seeps from Kitzalia's mind. Her now asleep body collapses to the ground, breathing a little more normally. Silently, her attacker drops to the ground in front of her, her slightly tan bare legs striding up to the prey...

PAGE 3: <Tickling/Torture starts here>
Panel 1 - [Note: Yes, that's supposed to be Kitzalia's view as her eye opens...the top and bottom parts would be black if I shaded this]. Groggy and her head reeling a tad, the inquisitor awakens an indeterminate time later...feeling pressure and some strange sensations on her body. The view of her single eye as it opens is somewhat hazy, but the sight is quite unique if she indeed is awake and not merely fantasizing: A strong looking bare foot directly in front of her face. And a strange bladed boomerang latched in a thigh-pouch beyond it...

Panel 2 - As the rest of her body slowly revives from its nap, aware of strange feelings here and there, Kitzalia stares in shock at the view before her. Two strong female legs are right in front of her. One rigidly is lodged directly between her ample breasts, the lovely foot only inches from her chin. The other ped makes its presence also felt as its rather dextrous toes curl, feather and flex against and around her left breast. Kitzalia actually feels her nipple(s) harden slightly as the soft yet strong toes press and swish about its tip through her thin leather top. She is less aware that she is missing certain items of clothing and accessories as she realizes her wrists are tied above and behind her head and her legs and waist are held, keeping her in a laying position. Even her neck is tied, not enough to choke but strong enough to keep her from doing the first thing that comes to mind: attemping to reach that near foot with her mouth. However, the bindings are just one reason why she can't do it...

Panel 3 - A few soft moans from the toes tickling her nipples soon break into screeches of laughter. The young female huntress...Aello...is literally laying atop the tied up Kitzalia...inverted. The amazon archer's legs are tantalizingly close to Kitz's face and shoulders while Aello's own face is somewhere in the other direction. The victim laughs hard and long as she realizes why her own feet suddenly feel cool: her boots have been removed and something soft is stroking her now exposed soles. Aello herself is still silent as she lay atop the mistress, somewhere high in a not-so-healthy tree illuminated by moonlight.

PAGE 4:
Panel 1 - Quite aware from the coos and then screams of her prey, Aello begins asking questions. Softly at first, but her voice is clearly one of seduction, masking any hate at the moment as she writhes atop Kitz's form. With the inquisitor's poor feet restrained and her own breasts resting upon her victim's ankles, Aello begins methodically feathering each arch with the plumes of her arrows. As Kitz whines and chortles louder and harder, Ael responds to the thrashing form beneath her by augmenting the tickling. Feathers feverishly running up and down one sole, Aello presents an evil grin as she observes the wildly splaying and stretching toes...then beings to thread another plume quickly between each of the ten digits. All along her own foot is temptingly clenching and trailing its lovely toes all over Kitz's nipples. The rigid response tells her that the tables have clearly been reversed. The torturer Kitzalia is now enduring some of her own medicine.

Panel 2 - Tears begin streaming down her cheek as the frantic tickling on her feet and breasts increases. A line of drool drips from Kitzalia's constantly in motion lower lip. The amazon's left leg, formerly lodged between her heaving breasts, suddenly rises and Kitz can feel Aello's talented toes sliding under her chin...and then actually curling rapidly to tickle it! The archer was actually tickling Kitz's chin with her own toes! Perhaps if the poor victim was of a more stable mind she might realize how enticing and yet torturous this method would be...perhaps even to use herself. But Kitzalia was already far gone to think of it like that: the barrage of questions which she barely had enough gasping-laughing air to even try to answer was being cut off by the intense torture at her legs and the desire for those feet so close yet so far to her view. She found it hard to focus or contain herself...sweat was pouring from her brow...

PAGE 5:
Panel 1 - Aello suddenly shifted her weight and the pressure was off Kitzalia's frame. Giving her opponent no respite, but knowing full well what Kitz 'enjoyed', Aello sat next to her prey and raised her strong tan legs. She moved one set of toes right to Kitzalia's belly...and began feverishly wiggling her digits against the bare flesh. The mistress's stomach immediately quivered as it was tickled and fresh laughter bursted from Kitz's lips. With a purely SADISTIC expression, the amazon huntress raised her other leg and shoved her bare foot forcefully upon the tied up inquisitor's wet face, near her single eye but still well out of reach of the screaming mouth. She knew well what Kitzalia 'enjoyed' and this was it...but without the ability to touch one of Aello's precious feet, it would drive Kitz INSANE. Ael moved one arrow plume to the hardened nipples and then begin dragging and feathering directly between the heaving, bouncing breasts.

Kitzalia lost her mind...it was truly blown by the sensations racking her form high in the trees. It didn't matter if the air was cool, the temperature all around the two women seemed steamy. Chilled as it may have been soon after being emitted, sweat, saliva and tears flowed freely from Kitzalia. Torturous pain of tickling and seductive pleasure of temptation (not to mention being extremely turned on, apparently, looking at her raised nips) that this Aello was engulfing her with threatened to make her pass out again. The plume was agonizing as it spread its feathers crisply against each bountiful breast. The bouncing tootsies near her belly were now deliberaly moving down her waist and pushing her pant-waist downwards...Ael was moving those digits to Kitz's nether regions...which were already rather wet. And that sexy foot upon her face...the smooth, warm sole pressing firmly there. If only she could get her tongue to it for a second, but even that muscle was already extended and panting with drool gushing from her moaning lips, unable to even get close.

Pure...torture...Aello was clearly showing...dominance...

Aello smirked with vile, sadistic glee. She would get her answers...and her prey would not soon forget this night or this position. She spoke, her talented foot pressing even harder as it wiggled its cute toes.

"Let me ask one more time...where...are...THEY?!"

<end?>

*****

So sue me, it was practically a story. 😉 I'll dump some more comments later, but I think you can assume my personal favorite page/panel was the last...especially Aello's expression (and foot use).

Of course, many thanks to the talented Scavenger for his tribute images and for creating the delightfully evil Kitzalia. ^^

Enjoy.

Khali
 

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OH WOW! What a story!! :super_hap :super_hap (ESPECIALLY the last part 😉 )
Even though this is an unshaded version it suggests a delightfully dark atmosphere; quite fitting for a merciless inquisitress like Kitzalia. Never before I have seen the tables been turned so... intensely for her. Being a foot-lover myself (hey I created Kitzalia, so a little of myself went into her personality 😀 ) I can imagine how turned on Kitzalia gets -despite the torment of her ultra-ticklish body- having those beautiful feet so close to her face, on her nipples and down to her "nether regions" 😉 :super_hap

Some really original elements in this comic, like the camera angle when Kitzalia opens her eyes (really cool point of view shot) and some exellent fore-shortening in the last shot, poses (Kitzalia coughing -such a "casual" pose, but nonetheless posed in a really natural way) The tree-setting -can't say I've seen something like this before- also the dungeon (seen from above) with its castle elements (not just a mere door entrance in a hill)
The expressions are great too: I'll never forget that groggy look on Kitzalia's face in the last panel; sweating, drooling, tears streaming down her face as she is torn between hysterical extacy and ticklish extacy... :super_hap

Thank you so much, Khali, for this great piece of art. I know how much effort goes into drawing a comic, and I appreciate it greatly.
I will of course hope you do a coloured version someday, though this is already a special addition to my collection.

Thank you Khali!!! :super_hap :super_hap
 
Khali, that was a wonderfull piece of work - very hot and very naughty. I love the setting and the delicious helplessness of Kitz's condition. What a wonderfull and fitting fate! Wonderful! 😀
 
Sue you for writing a story? Not hardly, and not a story as brilliant as that one, especially when accompanied by drawings of that sort. Now, I can't critique the art very well (at all is more apt) and all I can say is that 'it's good' which is not terribly specific, at least as specific as I'd like to be.

But as to your writing, well... absolutely brilliant, I must say. Your use of words is quite evocative and having an entire paragraph of text to go along with every single panel makes it more than just a comic to be viewed in a minute but a story to be savored and let linger as long as possible.

To be short, I'm quite highly impressed. I've always liked your work, but I felt compelled to comment on this one simply because I found all elements of the story, the tactile and the erotic, to be intriguing in a way I haven't seen in a while. Excellent work.
 
O.O Unfreakin'believeable! That is a nice piece Khali. Nice to see you back ^^
 
The generous mountain of explanatory text is all but unnecessary... these comic pages unwind with perfect pantomime clarity (still, the verbal presentation renders the storytelling all the sweeter, defining and supplying depth! A second bite of so scrumptious an apple is never unwelcome!) Kitzalia may complain, but she suffers no complaint at your hands, Kali! A fascinatingly thorough examination of the haughty Inquisitress, as she prowls, passes out, endures luxurious abuse and leaks erogenous overflow from every convenient orifice! The aforementioned foreshortening and unique first-person view add visual sparkle to a wealth of fine graphic detail and erotic body contact! The only flaw: Aello may be doing her work too well! It's hard to believe Kitzalia will ever offer confession... she'll never want this heavenly treatment to end!
 
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Great work!

This probably took a ton of time (I know doing comic panels is sooooooooo time consuming). But the final result is so amazing!

Loved page 5 the best - of course 😉

I really enjoyed this one - thanks!

B
 
Here goes, thanks everyone so much for the comments.

Scavenger:
*smiles* I'm very happy you enjoyed it so much. I really hope my rendition of Kitzalia was good enough to be liked and didn't detract from the series. 🙂
While the scene wasn't shaded, it was supposed to be a moonlit tree setting, something wild befitting Aello (and the emotions probably raging in this scenario). And of course Kitzalia's been pretty nasty in the past...so she deserved an even moreso tormenting fate.
Again, I knew that she (and you 😉 were into foot-action, so Aello just HAD to flaunt her assets: she loves showing off and using her legs/feet (and their 'skills') and this is just the type of captive audience that could appreciate that. Oh so lovely feet so close yet so much out of reach...poor Kitzalia (and maybe poor viewers...bet some of you would like to touch them as well 😉 ). And again, they're very 'talented', so I just had to use them to actually do the tickling in some cases...hopefully a tad erotically. ^^
The POV shot was a fun idea that came to mind when I thought of Kitz only having one eye usable...imagine waking up to a 'dream' (that lovely sight) that became a naughty REAL nightmare. I know the drawing of the dungeon complex wasn't too special, but, eh, I wanted to keep the medieval feeling of your style present in some sense...more than a hole in the hill.
Foreshortening...well, I did want the lovely view of Kitzalia with that sexy foot pressing against her wet cheek to be very prominent (and memorable)...and who can complain not seeing Ael's sole even closer? 😉
Expression in page 5: one of my favorites (for both girls actually). Kitz is literally supposed to be so out of her mind (from both pain and pleasure) that's she's all but gone. 😉
It took awhile, but I'm very happy you enjoyed it so much. You deserve a lot of credit for the inspiration (and your excellent tribute pics this responded too). ^^

Feathers:
Thank you. Yeah, I really tried to make things 'naughty' here, hopefully slightly erotic with how Aello is using her legs, laying on Kitz, and of course where she's trying to cause 'sensations'. 😉 A nice 'wild' setting to fit a wild girl torturing someone that deserves it. 😀 (and one crazy thing is Aello might be not so 'fantasy' actually...)

Jaynin:
I thank you very much for the comments on the comic. I really was worried that, well, I wrote 'too much' for each panel. If it was truly a comic, the images and just a little text should've sufficed to get the point and story across. But as you said, I really think I needed a paragraph for each panel just to help the emotions and feelings each little element of the images present. I really hope they didn't overshadow the images though and merely accentuated the entire comic by making it more thorough and 'complete' (?).
It did help make the thing...hotter though. 😉

Abadon XXX:
*smile* Thankee. Glad you were impressed. I wasn't really away...just thinking a lot lately over things...

Littlebighead:
Hee, hee...your response is almost a story itself. 😀 I'm happy to hear the large 'story' didn't detract from the drawn scenes...I was really worried about that. But if they added depth and more detail to the pics and tale, I'm pleased. ^^
Kitzalia and Aello's body contact was intended to look steamy...to make this torture in both senses. Something that Kitz would want to end, yet, also something that she'd want not to stop. It's hard to say if she'd burst from the pressure of tickling (especially like that with Ael's tootsies) or the pleasure of Ael's foot being so close yet so far. ^^ Either way, I think Kitzalia (and hopefully you viewers) won't forget Aello's 'methods' anytime soon. 😉

Bandito:
Thanks. Yeah, this one took ages, but I'm so happy that people enjoyed it so much (I hope). Any bits of page 5 that made it the favorite in your eyes? ^^
 
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story before clicking on the thumbnails. It's the first time I've seen a ler being posed in a way to allow the feet to be used to tickle different parts of the body (the breasts and the neck) very interesting.

The opening shot (where Kitzalia regains her consciousness) is my fav of the bunch 🙂 I just love that angle, seeing the feet approaching the neck... then pulling back and seeing her expression as the nipple-teasing registers… then her guffawing as the neck-tickling starts along with the foot tickling. Deliciously sadistic.

Awesome work, can't wait for the next part of this tale XD
 
I'm still unsure if I'm going to shade this series or not...

Rtl:
Again, I really hope the story didn't overshadow the images...or worse, draw attention away from them. I know it was a long tale, but I had a lot to 'describe'. ^^ As said above, Aello was REALLY taking care to 'exploit' how much she loves to use her legs/feet (not just counting tickling here) and to make things...hotter...she knew how to positing things to both tempt and torture poor Kitz. 🙂
I had to do the POV shot for that scene. Just to surprise (everybody?) with what Aello was about to do...and then follow through in a way to turn on Kitzalia while simultaneously making her squeal. 😉
As for being continued? Hm...we'll see...unsure really...
 
Lol magnificent series of piccies. Great story to go with it.
Unusual sig though Oo; ^^
 
Darth Vegeta:
Heh, thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
The sig...eh, I'll be changing it again eventually. Kind of a mood thing (although Rayne's expression makes it work)
 
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