Taking a shot at art

[bumtickler2000]

Alright the other day I finally sat down and told myself that I have drawing ability and hammered out a little tickle comic. I'm hoping to turn it into a series but that all depends on numerous factors.

Anyway in the words of Ron Burgundy "I'm gonna put it out there; if you like it, you can take it, if you don't, send it right back."

 

[Low_Roads]

Ready, aim, fire! It's so much fun to see new artists present fresh material! And you're right, you really can draw! I'm particularly enthusiastic about comics, and you have a good sense for comic strip progression. A cute, uncomplicated little plot; I'd love to see this grow and your characters develop their personalities! Good third page: the laughing face inset really sells the scene! And I like the little stand-alone joke on the forth page: shows a clever non-linear approach! Glad we got to a see bit of foot tickling... it makes my day complete! I hope you try a few continuing story scenarios. Those are always fun! At any rate, let's please see a lot more, and soon!

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

You have a good, optimistic view about yourself as an artist; be sure to keep it.

This was pretty good for a first try. I actually like the last page the most though, with the old man complaining.

 

[scavenger]

Indeed, indeed! This looks promising, the more because this is a comic, and we don't see those too often! Keep on drawing! 🙂

 

[rajee]

Great comic. I believe the 2 bottom panels in the 1st panel are reversed. Keep it up. 😀

 

[Hungarian21]

A very telented first try! Keep it up! :happy:

 

[Budweiserbob!]

Yeah! I lubbed it! 😛

 

[Darth Godflesh]

Nice initial effort!
Good work and it's a comic, sequential art is more difficult, just check Littlebighead's latest work.
You know, the difficult part of making art, is taking the chance, the risk, the first step, and you already did it, I agree on Scavenger and Littlebighead's comments (That seems like, if you like metal music, that Mike Portnoy (of Dream Theater) and Max Cavalera (of Soulfly/ex-Sepultura) have already listened to your demo and said it sounds OK.
so if they approve, I'm agree completely.
There's a lot of work to do, but you seem to have the "chops" to perform it
A good first effort
Keep the drawing board busy"""!!!

 

[c_tickler]

Nice shot! would love to see more, maybe some foot or sock tickling?? 🙂

 

[Dragon321]

yep, not bad indeed for a first try! keep at it and you will rise, my son!

 

[cyclypse]

Great job for a first try! I'd like to see more! Keep it up! XD