The Science of Surrender (a Victorian era tale; MFFF/FFF)

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I know I have at least two running stories in the forums right now, and I still intend to finish them, but in what little time I've had over the holidays I have quickly become intrigued with the idea of writing on Chat GPT. It was quite limiting at first, but I learned that if you train it carefully, it can become an incredibly effective creative writing partner.

What follows is a 16-page story I completed start-to-finish in the course of two goddamn days. Something like this would normally take me weeks, but after spending the first day doing a little research and training the AI on my themes, settings, and characters, the first draft took less than an hour on day two. After that came several hours of manual revision. After that came the story below, better than I could have ever written on my own.

Overall, I'm extremely happy with the result and very excited about the process.

Hope you like it too.

Happy holidays and take care,
-Q.

p.s. I used the series Downton Abbey as part of the AI's training for this, if that helps you picture the story.

 

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Scene 1: The Soirée

The ballroom of Everleigh House glowed like a gilded temple to Victorian elegance. Gaslight chandeliers spilled their golden radiance across polished floors and draped walls, where swaths of deep red damask caught the flickering light. Laughter and conversation filled the air, buoyed by the soft strains of a string quartet that played from an alcove lined with ivy and orchids. The guests, cloaked in finery, moved like a constellation of stars, their polished shoes gliding, their voices blending in a chorus of privilege and intrigue.

Lady Evelyn Harker stood near the periphery of the crowd, her dark eyes sweeping over the assembled guests with the precision of a hawk. She was slim and regal in her midnight blue gown, the intricate beadwork along the bodice shimmering like starlight against her graceful frame. Yet there was an edge to her beauty, a sharpness of mind and wit that always seemed poised to strike when provoked. She took a slow sip from her champagne glass, the faintest curve of a smile on her lips.

“Have you seen him yet?” Arabella Fairchild’s voice broke the reverie. She appeared at Lady Harker’s side, her youthful energy practically vibrating in the air. Arabella’s emerald-green gown clung to her like an invitation, her auburn curls spilling over her bare shoulders. Her eyes were alight with mischief, but there was something deeper there—an eagerness, a hunger for something beyond what this glittering room could offer.

“Seen whom?” Lady Harker asked coolly, though her tone betrayed curiosity.

“Dr. Abernathy,” Arabella said with a conspiratorial grin. “He’s here, you know. Everyone’s been whispering about him. A man of such… particular talents.”

Lady Harker arched an eyebrow but said nothing. She had heard the whispers, of course. The enigmatic new arrival to Bampton, a doctor whose practice in treating women’s ailments had stirred curiosity and controversy in equal measure. His reputation as a wealthy world traveler and a practitioner of unconventional methods had spread like wildfire through the village. Lady Harker had dismissed much of the gossip as idle nonsense. And yet… something about his reputation lingered in her mind, a spark she could not ignore.

Before she could respond, Mrs. Beatrice Winslow joined them, her blonde curls perfectly coiffed, her pale pink gown understated yet elegant. She held a lace fan in one hand, her fingers trembling faintly as she glanced around the room. “I hear he’s quite… magnetic,” she said in a hushed tone. “Though, of course, his work is terribly improper.”

Arabella smirked. “Improper, yes. But doesn’t that make him all the more intriguing?”

Lady Harker shot Arabella a warning glance. “Let us not lose ourselves to idle speculation.”

“And yet,” Arabella said, tilting her head, “you’re curious.”

Lady Harker said nothing, though the spark in her eyes betrayed her. She turned her gaze back to the crowd, and there he was.

Dr. Percival Abernathy stood near the hearth, a figure of undeniable presence. His tailored black suit, with its subtle gleam of silk lapels, fit his tall frame perfectly, the crisp white of his shirt a stark contrast against his tanned skin. His silver-streaked hair was combed neatly back, and his face, with its strong jaw and piercing blue eyes, was framed by a neatly trimmed beard. He held himself with the ease of a man who had seen the world and conquered its secrets.

He was speaking to Lord Everleigh, but his gaze swept the room with an air of polite detachment, as though he measured the worth of each guest in a single glance. When his eyes fell upon Lady Harker, Beatrice, and Arabella, they lingered for just a moment longer than propriety dictated.

Arabella’s breath caught. “He’s looking at us.”

Beatrice fanned herself furiously. “Oh, my.”

Lady Harker’s lips curved into the faintest of smiles. “Then let us not keep him waiting.”

With the grace of a queen, Lady Harker led the trio across the room, weaving through clusters of guests who cast curious glances as they passed. When they reached him, Dr. Abernathy turned, his gaze sharpening as it met Lady Harker’s. He inclined his head, the gesture smooth and practiced.

“Lady Evelyn Harker, I presume,” he said, his voice rich and resonant, with just the faintest trace of an accent that hinted at faraway places. “And your companions?”

Lady Harker introduced them with the same cool composure she carried in all social matters. But even she could not ignore the weight of his presence—the way his gaze seemed to pierce her, to see something beyond the surface.

“We have been most eager to meet you, Doctor,” Arabella said boldly, her green eyes sparkling. “Your reputation precedes you.”

Dr. Abernathy smiled faintly. “I can only hope it does not exaggerate.”

Beatrice fidgeted with her fan. “Your… work. It’s said to be quite… unusual.”

“Unusual, perhaps,” Dr. Abernathy replied, his tone measured. “But effective.”

Lady Harker tilted her head, her dark eyes narrowing slightly. “And what exactly does your work entail, Doctor?”

Dr. Abernathy’s smile widened, though it remained enigmatic. “A gentleman does not speak of such things at a soirée. Suffice it to say, my practice addresses matters of the mind and body—those afflictions often overlooked or misunderstood.”

Arabella leaned forward, her curiosity barely contained. “And have you found success in treating such… afflictions?”

“I have,” he said simply. “Though true success lies not in the treatment but in the willingness of the patient to confront herself.”

His words hung in the air like a challenge, and the three women exchanged glances, each of them acutely aware of the layers beneath his statement.

“Well,” Lady Harker said at last, her voice steady, “perhaps we might learn more. Would you be amenable to hosting us at your estate?”

Dr. Abernathy inclined his head. “It would be my honor. Shall we say Thursday at two o’clock?”

The women agreed, their voices a carefully composed chorus of politeness, though their hearts beat faster at the prospect of what lay ahead.

As Dr. Abernathy turned to rejoin the party, the women retreated to the edge of the room, their minds alight with speculation. Arabella grinned. “Well, that promises to be an adventure.”

Beatrice fanned herself more furiously. “Oh, I don’t know if I can…”

Lady Harker said nothing, but her gaze lingered on the figure of Dr. Abernathy as he moved through the crowd, his presence like a shadow cast across the room. For the first time in a long while, she felt the stirrings of a curiosity long repressed and forgotten.

To be continued...

 

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Scene 2: Rosemere Hall

Thursday arrived, and the carriage rumbled softly along the tree-lined drive, the crunch of wheels against gravel a quiet rhythm in the stillness of the early afternoon. The ladies inside sat in silence, their thoughts as heavy as the mist that clung to the sprawling grounds of Rosemere Hall. Lady Evelyn Harker, seated with her back straight and her gloved hands folded neatly in her lap, cast a sharp glance at the estate ahead. The building rose from the mist like a great, slumbering beast, its stone facade darkened with age, ivy curling along its edges like veins of shadow.

“It’s magnificent,” Arabella Fairchild murmured, breaking the silence. Her emerald-green eyes sparkled with curiosity as she leaned closer to the window. “And yet… so remote.”

“Appropriately so,” Lady Harker replied, her tone clipped. “A man with a practice such as his would find seclusion convenient.”

Beatrice Winslow, seated opposite, shivered despite the warmth of the carriage. “It’s too remote for my liking,” she whispered, clutching her shawl. “Too quiet. It feels… unnatural.”

Arabella laughed softly, her tone edged with mischief. “Oh, Beatrice, you’re always so dramatic. It’s only a house.”

“It is not only a house,” Lady Harker corrected, her voice sharp. “It is the home of a man who has intrigued half the village with his peculiar methods.”

“And the other half,” Arabella added with a grin, “with his peculiar charm.”

The carriage slowed, finally halting before the grand entrance. A uniformed footman appeared as if from the mist itself, opening the door with a bow. Lady Harker was the first to step out, her movements precise, her gaze scanning the entrance with cool appraisal. Arabella followed, her sleek, stylish gown swirling around her ankles as she craned her neck to take in the towering facade. Beatrice hesitated before stepping down, her gloved hand trembling as she gripped the footman’s arm.

The heavy doors of the estate creaked open, revealing the imposing figure of Mr. Harding, Dr. Abernathy’s butler. His posture was impeccable, his expression carved from stone, yet his voice was a smooth balm. “Ladies, welcome to Rosemere Hall. Dr. Abernathy has been expecting you. Please, follow me.”

The trio entered, their footsteps echoing against the marble floors of the entrance hall where a trio of efficient maidservants collected their wraps and gloves. The interior was a study in contrasts—grand yet restrained, its decor dominated by dark wood paneling, rich tapestries, and the faint, flickering glow of sconces that lined the walls. A scent of beeswax and leather lingered in the air, as if the house itself breathed history.

“This way,” Mr. Harding said, leading them down a corridor that seemed to stretch endlessly. Their heels clicked against the stone floor, each step drawing them further from the comfort of the outside world.

They were ushered into a sitting room, a chamber of surprising warmth despite its opulence. A fire crackled in the hearth, its golden light dancing across plush armchairs and a mahogany table set with crystal glasses, decanters of deep red wine, and an assortment of hors d’oeuvres arranged with meticulous care. The room seemed to invite intimacy, its air heavy with expectation.

“Please, make yourselves comfortable,” Mr. Harding intoned before retreating silently.

Arabella wasted no time, settling into one of the armchairs and reaching for the nearest decanter. “Well,” she said, pouring herself a glass of wine, “this is certainly more inviting than I expected.”

Lady Harker perched on the edge of her chair, her posture rigid, her gaze fixed on the fire. “It is a facade,” she said, her tone low. “Every element carefully chosen to disarm us.”

“Disarm us for what?” Beatrice asked, sinking into her seat, her voice barely above a whisper.

Before Lady Harker could reply, the door opened, and Dr. Percival Abernathy entered. His presence filled the room immediately, a commanding figure in tailored black, his silver-streaked hair gleaming in the firelight. He greeted them with a slight bow, his piercing blue eyes scanning each of their faces with an unsettling intensity.

“Ladies,” he said, his voice rich and resonant, “thank you for joining me. I trust your journey was pleasant?”

Arabella smiled boldly, her glass poised in her hand. “It was enlightening, Doctor. Though, I daresay, we’re more curious about the destination.”

Dr. Abernathy’s lips curved into a faint smile. “Curiosity is a powerful motivator, Miss Fairchild. It is often the first step toward discovery.”

Beatrice shifted uncomfortably in her chair. “We’ve heard so much about your work, Doctor,” she said hesitantly. “Your methods… they’re rather unconventional, aren’t they?”

“Unconventional,” Dr. Abernathy repeated, his tone thoughtful. “Perhaps. But effective. I have found that true healing often requires one to step beyond the bounds of convention.”

“And beyond the bounds of propriety?” Lady Harker asked, her tone pointed, though her gaze betrayed her intrigue.

Dr. Abernathy met her eyes directly. “Propriety is a construct, Lady Harker. One that often stifles more than it protects. My work seeks to liberate.”

The words hung in the air, their weight undeniable. Arabella leaned forward, her emerald eyes alight with excitement. “And how, precisely, does one achieve such liberation?”

Dr. Abernathy smiled, though it did not reach his eyes. “I find it best to show rather than tell. If you are truly curious, I would be honored to demonstrate my methods. Of course,” he added, his tone softening, “only if you are willing.”

Lady Harker’s lips pressed into a thin line, her gaze sharpening. “You mean to treat us?”

“If you wish to understand my work, yes,” he said simply. “I can accommodate all three of you today, if you choose. The decision, of course, is yours.”

Arabella grinned. “All three of us? How efficient.”

Beatrice’s voice wavered. “But… what would it entail?”

Dr. Abernathy stepped to the table, retrieving a small stack of papers. “Before we proceed, you would each need to sign a consent form, acknowledging your voluntary participation and understanding that the process must be completed once begun. This is to ensure transparency and trust.”

Lady Harker took the papers, her dark eyes scanning them with precision. The language was a vague mix of legalese and medical terminology, but even so it hinted at dark intentions. Her propriety and natural caution jousted with a deep inward curiosity as she considered the document. She knew her friends were looking to her for guidance, and would follow her lead.

Her rational mind screamed that this entire endeavor was far too risky a prospect, fraught with uncertainty and a seductive danger that could ruin her social status. At the same time, the setting felt remote and disconnected from her everyday life, and Dr. Abernathy offered a comforting and compelling sense of authority. More than anything—as she could barely admit to herself and would never, ever show—she was annoyingly excited and deeply intrigued.

She said nothing for a long moment, then set the papers down with a decisive nod. “Very well.”

Arabella smiled and clapped her hands lightly. “Oh, this promises to be delightful!”

Beatrice hesitated, her fingers trembling as she reached for a pen. “I… I suppose, if we’re all doing it…”

One by one, the women signed their names, the faint scratch of pen on paper the only sound in the room. When it was done, Dr. Abernathy gathered the forms and returned them to the bureau drawer, his expression calm but satisfied.

“Excellent,” he said. “Shall we begin?”

The room fell silent, the weight of their decision settling over them like a shroud. For better or worse, they had crossed a threshold, and there would be no turning back.

To be continued...

 

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Scene 3: The Laboratory Revealed

The corridor stretched long and cold ahead of them, its polished stone walls glistening faintly in the flickering light of the wall sconces. The air here was different—heavier, quieter—as though the very stones of Rosemere Hall knew to keep secrets hidden within this wing. Lady Evelyn Harker, Mrs. Beatrice Winslow, and Miss Arabella Fairchild followed Dr. Abernathy in silence, their footsteps echoing ominously in unison. The grandeur of the estate seemed to have given way to something sterner, more clinical, and the subtle shift was not lost on any of the women.

Dr. Abernathy walked ahead, his posture erect and commanding, his calm presence guiding them deeper into the heart of his domain. “This way,” he said, his voice low but carrying, as though the hall itself listened. “The laboratory is designed with efficiency and privacy in mind. I trust you’ll find it suited to the seriousness of my work.”

Arabella, her curiosity as irrepressible as always, could no longer hold her tongue. “Privacy?” she said, her tone carrying an edge of nervous amusement. “I should think this entire house feels private enough. What exactly is it we’re walking into?”

Dr. Abernathy glanced over his shoulder, his expression unreadable save for a faint glimmer of amusement in his eyes. “It was fully described in your consent form, Miss Fairchild, but you will see for yourself soon enough. I prefer to let my work speak for itself.”

Lady Harker’s lips tightened at his evasiveness, though she said nothing. She was too composed to show doubt, though it simmered beneath her stern exterior. Beatrice, however, let out a soft, involuntary whimper, her fingers clutching her skirt. She glanced at her companions as if seeking reassurance, but neither Arabella’s defiance nor Lady Harker’s stoicism gave her the comfort she sought.

At last, they reached the end of the hall, where a set of double doors loomed tall and foreboding. Dr. Abernathy withdrew a key from his coat pocket, the metallic click of the lock echoing sharply in the silence. He turned the handle and pushed the doors open, revealing the laboratory beyond.

The room was vast and immaculate, its polished surfaces gleaming under the bright, even light of gas fixtures mounted on the walls. A fireplace on the far side of the room provided some warmth and a measure of comfort. Shelves lined with instruments and jars stood meticulously arranged, and the charged air was cool, tinged faintly with the scent of both leather and antiseptic. Three crisply dressed maidservants stood attentively to one side of the door. But it was not the modernity of the space or the maidservants that held the women’s attention—it was the chairs.

Three imposing chairs stood at the center of the room, their design stark and purposeful. Their leather padding gleamed darkly against the metal framework, and each chair was reclined slightly, its form both inviting and intimidating. Straps hung neatly at the wrists, torso, knees, and ankles, their presence a silent promise of control. The seats of the chairs were cut away in an unsettling manner, and one's legs would rest at an angle providing access to the seated in a way that left nothing to the imagination regarding their intended purpose, were one inclined to imagine rather than overlook.

Arabella froze in the doorway, her usual bravado evaporating as she stared at the chairs. “What in God’s name is this?” she whispered, her voice almost drowned by the sudden pounding of her own heartbeat.

Beatrice gasped audibly, her hand flying to her mouth. “Doctor,” she stammered, “this… this is… surely this isn’t what we agreed to?”

Lady Harker’s face was a mask of icy fury. She stepped forward, her gaze locking onto Dr. Abernathy with a glare sharp enough to cut steel. “Explain yourself,” she demanded, her voice low but laced with authority. “What exactly are these… devices, and what purpose do they serve?”

Dr. Abernathy, undisturbed by their reactions, stepped to the side of one of the chairs, his hand resting lightly on its armrest as though to demonstrate its benign nature. “These chairs,” he began, his tone calm and steady, “are tools. Nothing more. They are designed to provide safety and stability during the course of treatment.”

Arabella let out a bark of nervous laughter, her fingers gripping the doorframe as if to anchor herself. “Safety? You expect us to believe that?”

Beatrice’s voice rose in a desperate tremble. “Doctor, this is… this is positively indecent! We cannot—this isn’t…”

Dr. Abernathy’s gaze softened, though his tone remained firm. “Ladies,” he said, “I understand your reservations. It is natural to feel apprehensive when faced with the unknown. But I assure you, there is nothing here to fear. These chairs are designed to allow you to relax fully and to facilitate the process of release.”

“Release?” Lady Harker repeated, her voice sharp as glass. “And what exactly does that entail?”

Dr. Abernathy met her gaze with unshakable calm. “It entails the liberation of mind and body, Lady Harker. It entails freedom. I do not expect you to trust me entirely—trust takes time. But I ask that you trust the process. You have come this far, after all.”

His words hung in the air, their weight undeniable. The women exchanged glances, their emotions writ large on their faces—Arabella’s defiance, Beatrice’s fear, Lady Harker’s fierce pride. But beneath their surface reactions lay something deeper, something unspoken: curiosity, intrigue, and a longing they scarcely understood.

Finally, her curiosity triumphant over caution, Lady Harker straightened her spine, her decision made. “Very well,” she said coldly. “If this is what it takes to see things through, then so be it.”

Arabella hesitated, then grinned nervously. “Well, if Evelyn’s in, I suppose I might as well be, too. God help us.”

Beatrice wrung her hands, her voice barely audible. “I… I’ll do it. But only because you both are.”

Dr. Abernathy inclined his head, his expression serene. “Excellent," he replied, gesturing toward the trio of women standing quietly beside him. "My servants will help prepare you.”

The women moved reluctantly toward the chairs, each accompanied by one of the maidservants, now acting as lab assistants, whose calm professionalism was a sharp contrast to their growing unease. The servants guided them gently but firmly into the recliners, adjusting the angles with practiced hands. Leather straps were secured at the ladies’ wrists, knees, and upper torsos, the soft click of buckles punctuating the silence.

Arabella flinched as her servant tightened the strap around her wrist. “This feels like something out of a penny dreadful,” she muttered, though her bravado was thin.

Beatrice whimpered softly as her knees were strapped in place. “This is… I can’t believe we’re doing this…”

Lady Harker remained silent, though her lips pressed into a thin line as her restraints were secured. Her composure, though shaken, held firm as her thoughts raced in circles.

The servants stepped back, their tasks complete, leaving the women restrained at all points save their ankles. The women’s faces were tense with anticipation and dawning dread, each tempered by a touch of curiosity. Dr. Abernathy stepped forward, his hands clasped behind his back, his gaze serene.

“You are now ready,” he said, his voice low and resonant, “to proceed to the next step.”

And with that, the women were left suspended in a liminal space, their resistance waning, their curiosity burning brighter than their fear.

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Scene 4: The Stripping Away

Lady Evelyn Harker, Mrs. Beatrice Winslow, and Miss Arabella Fairchild sat bound in their chairs, their bodies taut with indignation and unease. The straps that held their wrists, knees, and torsos in place were soft yet unyielding, a quiet reminder of their helplessness.

The laboratory seemed to grow more menacing as Dr. Abernathy’s pronouncement settled over the restrained women like a velvet noose. As they acclimated to their predicament, the clinical sterility of the room, once merely unsettling, began to feel mildly ominous. Dr. Abernathy stood before them, calm and composed, as though impervious to the rising tempest of protests he saw brewing on their faces. His voice, low and deliberate, carried the weight of knowledge and certainty. He knew from experience that his next pronouncement would generate howls of protest.

“Ladies,” he began, “the next phase of your treatment is crucial. To release your inhibitions, we must begin by sensitizing the soles of your feet.”

For a moment, the silence was absolute. At the mention of their feet, the muscles in each woman’s legs seemed to spring into action, spinning three pairs of dangling shoes into paroxysms of thrashing.

Arabella’s voice broke through the frenzy, sharp and incredulous. “The soles of our feet? What on earth are you talking about?” She yanked at her straps, her cheeks flushing as the realization of her vulnerability sank in. “This is absurd! I won’t allow it!”

Beatrice let out a strangled gasp, her face paling. “No… no, you can’t mean… Doctor, please! That’s too much—I can’t, I just can’t!” Her words tumbled out in a desperate torrent, her voice breaking with each syllable. She wriggled in her seat, her movements restricted but frantic. “Please, this is too humiliating!”

Lady Harker’s expression darkened, her fury a stark contrast to the panic rippling through her companions. “Dr. Abernathy,” she said, her voice ice-cold, “this is highly inappropriate. You cannot expect us to sit here and endure such an indignity.”

Dr. Abernathy met her gaze with unflinching calm. “Lady Harker, I assure you, this step is essential. The reaction it induces is not merely physical; it is transformative. It is the key to unlocking the barriers you have so carefully built around yourselves.”

“That’s preposterous!” Lady Harker snapped, but there was a faint tremor in her voice. “This is nothing but an exercise in humiliation!”

Arabella kicked her legs futilely, her dangling heels drumming thin air. “You can’t do this! I will scream, I swear I will!”

With a nod from Dr. Abernathy, the servants stepped forward, their expressions serene, their movements measured and precise. Each servant knelt before a woman, their hands reaching for the wildly gyrating ankles before them. The protests escalated instantly.

“Don’t you dare!” Arabella shrieked, her body twisting as much as the restraints allowed. She kicked her legs in futility, her knees jerking against the unyielding leather straps. “Stop! Stop this right now!”

Beatrice gasped and began to whimper, her voice rising in a plaintive wail. “No, please, don’t! Don’t touch my shoes—leave my feet… oh, this is too much!” She thrashed her feet as best she could under the restraints, the motion desperate and childlike.

Lady Harker, though less frantic, glared daggers at the servant before her. “You will cease this nonsense at once,” she demanded, her voice brittle with rage. But as the servant proceeded undaunted, even Evelyn could not stop her feet from twisting in a vain attempt to pull away.

The servants worked with quiet efficiency, undeterred by the ladies’ protests. Arabella’s servant deftly unfastened the laces of her boots, the soft leather pulling away to reveal the silken stockings hiding her shapely and delicate feet. Arabella clenched her toes, curling them protectively, but her servant continued without pause, pulling down the stockings and baring her soles completely, the skin smooth and pale except for the faintest flush of pink at her heels.

Arabella let out a furious cry and twisted against her restraints, but then channeled her anger into sarcasm. “Do you like what you see?” she snarled at the doctor, drawing back her toes to fully reveal her soles. “Are these what you dream of sensitizing?” She wriggled her toes angrily in frustration, but the straps held her firmly in place, leaving her feet naked and vulnerable.

Beatrice whimpered softly as her servant removed her shoes and stockings, her narrow feet trembling as the cool air kissed her skin. Her toes were long and slender, the nails trimmed and polished to perfection. The delicate pinkness of her soles betrayed the luxury of her lifestyle. “Don’t look! Don’t you dare look at my feet!” she cried, attempting to hide one foot behind the other, but the straps at her knees and angle of her legs made the maneuver impossible. Her soft feet dangled helplessly, her flexing toes doing little to hide them from the doctor’s and servant's view.

Lady Harker’s servant worked methodically, removing her heels and rolling down her stockings with a deliberate care that seemed almost apologetic. Evelyn's feet, large, high-arched and regal, bore the elegance of a woman who had always carried herself with dignity. The skin of her soles was ivory-soft, a faint blush spreading from her toes to her insteps as they were bared. She flexed her toes instinctively, then pointed them forward, an unsuccessful attempt to conceal her embarrassment. She was inwardly mortified, although her voice and visage remained stoic.

“This is outrageous,” she hissed, her cheeks flushing a deeper shade of red. “You cannot expect me to—” forgetting her words, she lost control, left only to buck and strain violently under the restraints. “Stop this at once!”

The final act of the servants was to secure the ankles of their charges with the remaining straps. The effect was to hold each woman’s bare feet firmly in place, soles facing forward, heels suspended over the ends of the leg rests. The women squirmed and writhed, their protests becoming a cacophony of outrage and desperation.

Arabella’s voice rose above the others, a mix of anger and panic. “You are all mad! Do you hear me? Completely mad!”

Beatrice’s begging continued, her pleas dissolving into incoherent murmurs as she tugged weakly at her restraints. “Please… please, no…”

Lady Harker, still glaring, clenched her jaw tightly, her chest rising and falling in sharp breaths as she fought to maintain what little composure she had left. “This is barbaric,” she spat, though her voice faltered. “Completely barbaric.”

Dr. Abernathy stepped forward, his gaze sweeping over his patients with an air of calm authority. “Ladies,” he said, his voice steady and commanding, “I urge you to trust the process. What you feel now—this discomfort, this resistance—is temporary. What lies beyond it is freedom.”

The women’s protests grew dangerously quiet, their breathing heavy and uneven, as the weight of his words settled upon them.

To be continued...

 

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Scene 5: The Sensitization

The laboratory was hushed, save for the soft crackling of the fire that still flickered weakly to one side, casting long, trembling shadows on the walls. The air was heavy, thick with anticipation and dread, as if the room itself held its breath for what was to come. Lady Evelyn Harker, Mrs. Beatrice Winslow, and Miss Arabella Fairchild sat in their respective chairs, their bodies bound by soft leather straps that seemed both gentle and unyielding. Their bare feet dangled just past the edges of their leg rests, ankles cuffed, soles exposed to the cool air. Each of the women in her own way grappled with the growing realization of her vulnerability.

Dr. Abernathy moved to the center of the room, his measured steps the only sound breaking the silence. He stood with the confidence of a conductor before an orchestra, his calm presence at once soothing and unnerving. His voice, low and resonant, carried a quiet and irresistible authority. “Ladies, the next phase of your treatment begins now. Trust in this process. Though often quite intense, it is necessary for your liberation.”

Arabella snorted, her green eyes wide with defiance. “Liberation?” she spat, her voice rising. “Just say it, doctor. You’re going to tickle our feet like children at a nursery game! This is madness!”

Beatrice’s breath came in short, panicked gasps, her body trembling as she tugged futilely at her restraints. “No, no, please… don’t do this… don’t tickle me…” Her voice shook as tears of panic welled in her eyes. “You don’t understand—I can’t… I won’t… it will drive me mad!”

Lady Harker, ever the composed matriarch, tried to steady her breath, her jaw set in an iron line. “Dr. Abernathy,” she said, her voice cutting through the room like a blade, “this is beyond absurd. I demand that you stop this nonsense at once.”

Dr. Abernathy’s expression remained serene, his tone calm but firm. “I remind you, Lady Harker, as I remind all of you, that the process is now in motion and unstoppable. Your signatures affirmed your consent. What comes next is not about endurance—it is about release.”

He gave a subtle nod, and the servants moved forward. Each knelt with quiet purpose at the foot of a chair, their expressions serene as they lifted their hands toward each lady's desperately squirming but firmly cuffed feet to carry out their task. Their nails, manicured to perfection, hovered over the women’s exposed soles, a threat of unbearably light touches teasing the air.

The ladies' faces were studies in suppressed panic as sounds of their quiet whimpers floated in the air.

Arabella let out a strangled cry before the first finger even brushed her skin. “No, no, you can’t do this! You will regret it—I swear! I will scream!” Her voice broke into the promised high-pitched shriek as her assistant’s nails grazed her delicate arches, trailing down softly toward the heels of each foot. “Ahh! Stop it! Stop it now! I’ll—oh, oh no!”

Her body thrashed against the restraints, her bare toes curling and flexing in a desperate, futile attempt to escape. The servant's fingers moved with precision, teasing the sensitive pads of her toes before sliding back down to the soft insteps. Arabella’s laughter exploded from her like a dam breaking, wild and uncontrollable. “No! No, you wicked thing—ahh! Hahaha! Stop it—stop it, I say!”

Beatrice was next. Her servant's nails began their cruel dance across her soles, starting with a light, circular motion along the heel. Beatrice let loose her own scream—a panicked, desperate sound that filled the room. “No, no, please! I beg you! Don’t—oh, oh no! Please!” Her pleas dissolved into helpless laughter, her body jerking violently as the sensations overwhelmed her.

Her long, slender toes twitched helplessly, the soft, pink skin of her soles blushing a deeper hue as the servant's nails worked over every inch. Beatrice’s head thrashed from side to side, her golden curls tumbling from their pins as her composure shattered completely. “Oh, oh God, I can’t—I can’t take it! Stop it, please! Hahaha! Stop!”

Lady Harker’s eyes blazed with fury and indignation as her servant's fingers moved inexorably toward her bare soles. The moment the manicured nails caressed her high, graceful arches, her body jolted as though electrocuted. “Ah!” she gasped, her steely facade cracking as the maddeningly soft stroking began. She clenched her jaw, her lips beginning to quiver as she fought back a rising tide of laughter. But as she struggled to master her expression, her feet belied her agony, shifting and dodging in vain to avoid the tickling.

The servant was unrelenting, her fingers skimming along the tender pads beneath Lady Harker’s frantic toes, then down the arches and into the hollow of her insteps. The sensations built, relentless and infuriating, until Evelyn could no longer contain herself. Her laughter broke free, rich and throaty, a sound that reverberated through the room like music. “No! Oh, stop! Oh, I—I can’t—oh, this is—HAHAHA!”

Her voice rose with every touch, her bare feet twitching and flexing, her toes splaying in surrender. “Oh, oh heavens, stop! Hahaha! Stop this at once, you hear me! Hahaha!” But even as she cursed and screamed, her laughter grew deeper, her body trembling as the sensations coursed through her.

The room became a symphony of sound: Arabella’s high, frantic giggles, Beatrice’s breathless, screaming cries, and Lady Harker’s rich, defiant laughter. The servants worked methodically, their hands moving like artists crafting a masterpiece. No inch of skin was spared, no sensitive nerve overlooked.

Each woman, despite her protests, began to lose herself in the chaos of sensation. Arabella’s wild thrashing slowed, her laughter becoming almost delirious. Beatrice’s screams gave way to a strange, breathless joy, her cries mingling with gasps of release. Lady Harker, the proudest of them all, slumped in her chair as her laughter took on a deep, almost sensual quality, her body surrendering to what she could no longer fight.

By the time the servants withdrew, the women were a vision of disheveled exhaustion, their bodies slack against the restraints, their faces flushed and tear-streaked. The room was silent save for the sound of their labored breathing, their laughter still echoing faintly in the air.

Dr. Abernathy stepped forward, his voice calm and soothing. “You have done well, ladies. The barriers are falling. The final step awaits.”

None of them spoke. None of them could. They had been stripped bare, not just physically but emotionally, and as they sat there, trembling and vulnerable, they could not deny the strange, forbidden exhilaration that lingered beneath the shame.

To be continued...

 

[quinn65]

Scene 6: The Ecstasy of Release

The fire in the laboratory was little more than a flicker now, its light casting faint shadows on the walls, shadows that seemed to echo the turbulence that had been roiling within the room. Lady Evelyn Harker, Mrs. Beatrice Winslow, and Miss Arabella Fairchild sat restrained in their chairs, their bodies still trembling from the ordeal of laughter that had shattered their composure moments before. The air was heavy with unspoken tension, the kind that comes from anticipating the inevitable.

Dr. Abernathy stood before them like a sentinel, his presence commanding and strangely comforting. His calm gaze swept over his exhausted patients, lingering on each woman as if to underscore the significance of what was to come.

“You have done beautifully,” he said, his voice soft but resonant, a warm caress to the rawness they felt. “But there is one final step—a culmination of everything you have endured here today. It is the moment of your release, a freedom you have long denied yourselves.”

Arabella, ever the bold one, lifted her head, her lips parted in a mixture of apprehension and curiosity. “What… what does that mean?” she asked, her voice a breathy whisper, her words edged with an excitement she didn’t bother to hide.

Dr. Abernathy smiled faintly, though his expression remained professional. “It means, Miss Fairchild, that you are about to experience the unburdening of every inhibition, every constraint. This final phase will allow you to embrace yourself fully, without fear or judgment.”

Beatrice’s voice trembled as she spoke, her hands gripping the armrests tightly. “But how? What… what will happen?”

The doctor inclined his head toward the servants, who approached the ladies silently, their movements precise and deliberate. They stepped up to the chairs, each carrying a sleek metallic device in the shape of a stout candle topped with a small sphere.

Lady Harker, her pride still intact despite the cracks in her composure, narrowed her eyes at the activity. “This…” she began, her voice sharp but unsteady. “This is utterly… what are you doing, Doctor?”

Dr. Abernathy met her gaze with unshakable calm. “Allow me to assure you, Lady Harker, that what lies ahead is not an indignity but a gift. You have trusted the process so far; you must trust it still.”

Her response was a scoff, but the sound was hollow. Trust? she thought. How can I trust this? And yet, something in his voice, his presence, silenced her objections. She let out a shaky breath, her eyes closing briefly as though steeling herself for what was to come.

Each of the women now restrained had known deep down what was coming from the moment they saw the odd configuration of the chairs in the laboratory. In fact, they had known it since hearing the earliest rumors of the mysterious and magnetic Dr. Abernathy’s practice. In the full light of honesty, any of them could answer for themselves the questions they had just posed. But each of them had also blinded herself to the inevitable conclusion of this day’s activities. Deep in their minds, each woman both denied and accepted her agency in what was transpiring.

It was this, alongside their physical and emotional exhaustion, that induced the ladies to quietly yield to this final leg of their journey.

With practiced hands, the servants pushed aside the folds of the ladies' fine dresses. They then attached and adjusted the mechanisms beneath the cutaway seats of the chairs, positioning them carefully. Once locked in place, the metal spheres pressed gently against the ladies’ most sensitive flesh through the thin, silken fabric of their undergarments. From long experience, the servants were not surprised to find in each case a wetness forming where metal touched silk, often coerced from their patients by both stimulus and anticipation. This was in fact part of the doctor's design, as moisture and silk served to both conduct and buffer the subtle electrical pulses to come.

The women squirmed and blushed and muttered in surprise at the intimacy of this procedure, but their inner voices insisted that they were too wrung out to protest, and far beyond the point of polite decorum.

Finally the servants stepped away, each bearing a small box sporting two dials. Wires trailed from the boxes back to the seats. The servants knelt once more at the foot of each chair, ensuring a clear view of the ladies’ facial expressions as well as their bare feet, both of which they had found from past experience to be quite telling. Once each servant had nodded her readiness to the doctor, he threw a switch on the wall.

When the devices were activated, a soft hum filled the room, vibrating through the very air. The first sensation the ladies felt was subtle—a gentle, warm, and tingling tremor that teased against their bodies, exploring, awakening. Arabella gasped, her head falling back against the chair as her body arched instinctively and her toes clenched. “Oh!” she cried, her voice breaking into a surprised laugh as she began to squirm alluringly. “Ohh, that’s… Mmm, oh my… I may scream again.”

Beatrice’s reaction was quieter at first, a sharp intake of breath as the irresistible vibrations found her. “Oh…” she whimpered, her voice trembling as she tried to shift her hips. “Ah! I can’t pull away! I don’t…” But the words faded into a soft, desperate moan as the sensations deepened, her resistance melting away. Her feet writhed helplessly and seductively as she began to lose control.

Lady Harker’s reaction was immediate and unguarded, her sharp gasp cutting through the room like a blade. “Ahh!” she cried, her body jerking frantically against the restraints and her feet kicking wildly as though she might escape the intensity. “Oh, what is… oh, my heavens!” Her voice rose, unrestrained, rich and resonant as it filled the space. She had been the strongest, the most composed, but now with that strength unraveling, her cries grew wild and uninhibited. “Oh! Oh, stop—I'm going to—I can’t take this!”

The servants’ hands were busy on the dials, their veiled expressions smug and slightly devious. They adjusted the rhythm and intensity of the devices with perfect precision, coaxing each woman to the brink of ecstasy, and then holding her there. The insistent warmth and tingling vibrations emanating from each sphere seemed to attune themselves to the women’s needs, their bodies responding with unfiltered wanton honesty.

Moans and cries of unbearable pleasure filled the room and gradually reached an apogee as the women writhed in delirious erotic torment. The servants shared a sly glance, silently agreeing that the time had arrived. Together, they each pushed a small red button at the top of their control box.

Arabella let out a high series of breathless shrieks, her head tossing from side to side as the sensations overwhelmed her. “Oh, oh yes! Yes! This is… oh, I can’t believe… OHHH!” Her voice was a song of pleasure, her laughter mingling with gasps as she surrendered fully to the experience.

Beatrice’s voice, quieter but no less profound, wavered between moans and helpless cries, tears of pleasure streaming freely. “Oh… oh my… I’ve never… oh, yes, YES!” Her hands clenched and released violently and she screamed as she gave in, the tight coil of tension within her breaking into a flood of warmth and release.

Lady Harker’s howls were the loudest of all, her voice deep and throaty as it echoed through the room. “Oh! Oh, yes—oh, heavens, yes! I can’t… I can’t stop…” Her body convulsed and she threw back her head as she was overcome, her dignity cast aside in favor of raw, unbridled sensation. “Oh, oh, OH MERCY!”

Their final crescendo built in unison, the women’s voices rising together in a symphony of ecstasy that seemed to shake the very walls of the laboratory. Their cries were not just of pleasure but of liberation—decades of restraint, propriety, and repression breaking apart in the space of moments.

When the devices powered down, the silence that followed was electric, alive with the aftershocks of what had just transpired. The women slumped in their chairs, panting, their bodies limp, their faces glowing with a mixture of relief, exhaustion, and joy. Lady Harker, her breath ragged, turned her head slightly, her eyes meeting Beatrice’s, then Arabella’s. In that moment, no words were needed. They had seen one another stripped to the core, and in that vulnerability, they found strength.

Dr. Abernathy stepped forward, his tone quiet and reverent. “You have done beautifully, ladies. What you have felt today—this freedom, this release—is yours to carry forward. It is yours to claim.”

The women remained silent, their exhaustion mingling with a strange, radiant satisfaction. They had been undone and remade, and as they sat there in the stillness of the room, they knew they would never be the same again.

The end

 

[Ozmond1]

Fantastic

 

[Sketch Zero]

Quinn, thank you for sharing this work of collaboration between yourself and ChatGPT! I loved Downton Abbey, and the story pushes some of my usual buttons (multiple lees with different reactions, footwear removal, building to climax). It was titillating 🙂

And yet somehow -- I can't put my finger on it, I just feel like I have preferred the tales written fully with your own (virtual) pen. If I could rewind time and read this without knowing there was ChatGPT involvement, I wonder if I would feel differently? Impossible to say. Part of me wants to say that at times it feels somewhat formulaic -- something happens, cue Arabella, then Beatrice, then Lady Harker; something else happens, cue Arabella, then Beatrice, then Lady Harker -- but again, that could just be my brain, biased against ChatGPT, uncharitably prejudicing my reading against what could just as easily be a fully human choice of writing convention.

I wish I could better articulate what did or didn't resonate with me. I really feel like the process of working with these tools leads to a fundamentally different experience for the artist than for the eventual consumer. I feel bummed that this story didn't garner the response you had hoped, because drafting and refining it was clearly enjoyable and exciting! Besides, as with getting used to any new tool, more practice might lead to finer results, right?

Anyway, this is all "just, like, (my) opinion, man" 🙂 Thanks for sharing, and for seeking input in the discussion forum as well. Keep doing what you like to do!!

 

[quinn65]

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback. I was going for a more formal "Victorian" tone with the story and I thought that might have been the source of the formulaic pacing, but having messed with the AI a lot more since then, I think that's just how it rolls.

There's something to the idea that when you combine an amateur's skill with high end tools, you can end up with a fairly generic result. Put an average woodworker in a world class shop, and they'll turn out stuff that looks like it came from Target, lacking whatever handmade charm it might have had.

It's still fun to play with the AI, but I think I'll start using it differently.