Tickle poem

[ticklemonster661]

though i don't know where to put it, i decided to leave it here
I dunno if ya like it or it's correct english (I'm german)
so here we have it :

grab those sides and grab those ribs
grab those bellys, thights and hips
move your fingers on her skin
it's surely fun and maybe sin
she giggles, laughs 'n' squirms 'n' fight
while I make her laugh tonight
I'll tickle her during the night
from dusk till dawn, until it's light
Sun is raisin' shinin' through
the window and the curtain, too
I sit up, and look around
searchin' for the laughin' sound
...........it was a dream.

thanks for any comment 🙂
so far, .... ticklemonster66

 

[F.L. Atlanta 10]

that's a great poem dude.

 

[Journia]

That was nice.

 

[ticklemonster661]

thanks so far, it's nice to get good assassements to a "job"
If ya guys like it, I'll hope to get good ideas soon, so I can give you another one

If anybody likes to get his ideas in it, just post it :happy:

 

[Journia]

I made a tickle poem too.

 

[MistressValerie1]

It was very cute; thanks for posting it 🙂

 

[DarthGrinn]

Very cute poem lol... love the ending 🙂