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+Tickling+ Yoko Littner

Can't read half the damn description, but her boots are sssssssmokin'!

No, seriously. I love it when a captive heroine is put in a position that leaves her cross-eyed. It's just so clear that she's been driven to the brink. Perhaps my only suggestion would be to make the shading on her chin more vivid. She sorta looks like she had an underbite. Past that, though? Not bad. I might still suggest that for color you go with cel shading and keep the screentones to black & white images. But, hey, the lineart's solid and so's the coloring. Kudos.
 
well I think it looks fine with color, and you did a great job too ;P
 
I think it works well enough on clothing, and it looks like you added some to the floor which gives it just the right amount of texture. I just think it adds a patchiness to her skin, is all. Looking at it again, I think it could work with color, but I'm not familiar enough with using screentones to be able to say how they'd work.
 
I'm just trying to find a way to make my work stand out more.
 
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