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So I wrote Ticklish Cat Fight Part 1 yearrrrrrrrrrrrrrs ago. And I got some good feedback, but then I saw someone had just read it. (Credit to Heather and Anna for inspiring part II and bringing me out of retirement) Turns out a lot of people read it... so without further ado. The long aw
aited conclusion which I just finished.
To Catch a Spider
“We want Parker!” a wailing voice screamed from the shadows. Black Cat clenched her fists, binging her guard up, but the figure had already lunged across the room. Felicia’s eyes stretched the tight fabric of her Black Cat mask as the filed fang like teeth and tongue flashed in the New York city lights bleeding through the window.
In a flash, Venom shot two web splotches pinning Mary Jane’s tormentor to the wall with her hands above her head. The brief moment of relief died away as MJ realized that her rescuer was not the one she was expecting to find in her penthouse window.
“Maybe you two ladies are deaf, we said we want Parker, and we want him now!” Venom screamed as he drove his fist through a wardrobe for emphasis. A shrill sinister laugh crackled over his shoulder.
“YES! We want Parker, or should we say SPIDERMAN, we thought we’d stop by for a midnight snack!” Carnage giggled with manic joy at the thought of the wall crawler’s demise.
“We told you to stay out of this! Parker is OURS!” Venom turned to face the younger symbiot suit as he said this and pointed the fist that had just splintered an oak dresser as if it had been constructed of balsa. Black Cat struggled at her bonds, but Venom’s enhanced webbing was far too strong.
“Reeeelax old man, you need me for this because I know how to make the itsy bitsy spider come up the water spout heheheheHAHAHA! We know this one won’t talk…” He said pointing to MJ who was still sweaty from her tickling at the hands of Black Cat moments ago. “Buuut…I tawt I taw a putty cat.” Carnage cooed with sinister inflection. Cat redoubled her efforts against the bonds. “I did! I did see a pussy cat!” Carnage sang as he morphed his finger tips in to long sharp daggers.
“Please…don’t hurt me, I was trying to find the same thing you were, no please!” Cat pleaded as Carnage approached her, tears welling in her eyes.
“Yes and you were having so much fun!” Carnage said. Suddenly, his alien symbiot changed again, this time, his fingers shifting in to red feathers. A new look of horror spilled over Felicia Hardy’s face.
“Tickle time for Kitty Cat!” Carnage sang. He began to stroke the Black Cat’s neck with his new feather fingers, causing the heroine to squirm against the wall.
“Krmph…heeheeeheee.” Felicia giggled, trying her best to keep her composure and resist the tickling sensations along her neck. Carnage morphed one hand in to a collar, wrapping it round her neck to keep her still.
“Oh no, please don’t…teeheeheee…let me go! Heeheeheeheee..” Felicia giggled faster now as she could no longer shake her head to escape the sensations. The feathers glided lightly against the taught skin of her neck, over and over the same patch of skin, bringing her giggles to a boiling point, she knew she was about to lose it.
“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE…NOOPLEHEHEASSSSEEEEEHAHAHHONO!” The Cat exploded as Carnaged plunged a feather finger in her ear, gently twirling it like a an electric drill causing the Cat to break.
“STOOOOOOOOHAHAHAHAHAHAPPITSTAHHHHAHAHAPITPLEASE! LET ME GO I CAHAHAHAHAHANT TAKE THIS!” Felicia said unable to move a muscle in her upperbody. Carnage removed his finger from her ear and twirled all five fingers in rapid succession bringing them down the Cat’s tight black sleeves, then over the naked underarms. Cat exploded once more.
“NAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH” Cat laughed aloud looking up at the ceiling attempting to block out the sensations.
“Where is PARKER!” Venom screamed impatiently.
“I…I…I…Don’t” Felicia gasped. Carnage morphed a hand in to a smooth buffer, and it buzzed loudly as he removed Cat’s boots and placed it against her soft foot. “NOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHAHAHA…OHGODPLEASESTOPPPPPPPLEEEHEHEHEHEASE!” Cat bounced about trying to escape. She slouched pathetically against the wall, hands still bound over head, one foot in Carnage’s hands, buffer spinning wildly along her sole.
Cat laughed once more as Carnaged drew one hand of feathers across her tummy, tracing the outline of her six pack, and twirled the other one along her cleavage, extending some fingers to snake beneath her bra. This brought a new level of torment to Felicia.
“MERCYYYYYYYYYYHEHEHEHESTAY AWAY FROM ME YOU MONSTER NOOOHOHOHOHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH. I’m BEGGING YOU HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
MJ realized she may be next. She quickly formulated a plan; remembering that Peter had said that fire and super sonic frequencies were the only weaknesses of these alien foes, she grabbed a match and stuck it in her bra.
“WAIT” MJ screamed. An evil grin crawled across her face. “I can make her talk”. MJ walked across the room wiggling her manicured nails.
Carnage stood back, puzzled.
“Oh no, please…no more…I’m sorry…I’m sorry…no more, have mercy please” Cat pleaded, whimpering like the broken women she was.
“Oh but you had so much fun with me. She said dragging her nails along Cat’s arm. “Nohohohoh…I’m sorry please…” Cat whispered as she began to giggle once more.
“Grab her feet, lose the boots!” MJ snapped. Carnage obliged, wrapping his arms around the Cats bare tootsies, locking them in stocks formed from the suit.
“Ktichy Koo Kitty Cat!” MJ cooed as she scribbled her long nails along Cat’s sensitized feet.
“MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHMERRCYYYYYHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAOHGODOHGOHAHAHAWWDHAHAHA!” Cat guffawed. The spited Supermodel expertly scraped and danced, teased and tortured her feet.
“HAHAHAIMHAHAHAIMGONNAPEE…PLEASEEEEEEE” Cat begged between laughter. Mary Jane stopped for a moment.
“Thank you…thank you….” Cat cried. Mary Jane motioned to Venom while Cat wasn’t looking, and the other symbiote, strangely aroused, obliged, walking over to the broken hero’s side.
“Well then…PEE!” MJ jumped on the cat straddling her waist as Felicia had done. Venom held her head still, and MJ plunged her long super model tongue in to her ear while digging both hands in to her waist.
NAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHFUCKNOHOHOHHOHASTOP STOP ILL DO ANYTHINGHAHAHAHAHA” Felicia tried to move, but with her feet trapped by Carnage’s stocks, arms held hi over head by web fluid and venom holding her neck in place, she could only explode as MJs dug in to her ribs, but it was the slippery tongue slurping and tickling her inner ear that broke her. MJ felt a warm stream along her leg. Enough fun. She lit the match against a wall and tossed it on the bed.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Carnage and Venom screamed as they felt the suits leaving their bodies, the flames warm against the naked patches of their skin as the suits attempted to flee.
MJ grabbed the exhausted Cat and fled the building.
“You haven’t seen the last of me Mary Jane!” Eddie Brocks screamed down the hall as the room was engulfed in flame. They go reached the elevator and MJ pounded on the first floor. Button.
“Thank you…thank you…” Cat said as she hugged the red headed super model.
“Don’t mention it.” MJ said. “Now we are even”
aited conclusion which I just finished.
To Catch a Spider
“We want Parker!” a wailing voice screamed from the shadows. Black Cat clenched her fists, binging her guard up, but the figure had already lunged across the room. Felicia’s eyes stretched the tight fabric of her Black Cat mask as the filed fang like teeth and tongue flashed in the New York city lights bleeding through the window.
In a flash, Venom shot two web splotches pinning Mary Jane’s tormentor to the wall with her hands above her head. The brief moment of relief died away as MJ realized that her rescuer was not the one she was expecting to find in her penthouse window.
“Maybe you two ladies are deaf, we said we want Parker, and we want him now!” Venom screamed as he drove his fist through a wardrobe for emphasis. A shrill sinister laugh crackled over his shoulder.
“YES! We want Parker, or should we say SPIDERMAN, we thought we’d stop by for a midnight snack!” Carnage giggled with manic joy at the thought of the wall crawler’s demise.
“We told you to stay out of this! Parker is OURS!” Venom turned to face the younger symbiot suit as he said this and pointed the fist that had just splintered an oak dresser as if it had been constructed of balsa. Black Cat struggled at her bonds, but Venom’s enhanced webbing was far too strong.
“Reeeelax old man, you need me for this because I know how to make the itsy bitsy spider come up the water spout heheheheHAHAHA! We know this one won’t talk…” He said pointing to MJ who was still sweaty from her tickling at the hands of Black Cat moments ago. “Buuut…I tawt I taw a putty cat.” Carnage cooed with sinister inflection. Cat redoubled her efforts against the bonds. “I did! I did see a pussy cat!” Carnage sang as he morphed his finger tips in to long sharp daggers.
“Please…don’t hurt me, I was trying to find the same thing you were, no please!” Cat pleaded as Carnage approached her, tears welling in her eyes.
“Yes and you were having so much fun!” Carnage said. Suddenly, his alien symbiot changed again, this time, his fingers shifting in to red feathers. A new look of horror spilled over Felicia Hardy’s face.
“Tickle time for Kitty Cat!” Carnage sang. He began to stroke the Black Cat’s neck with his new feather fingers, causing the heroine to squirm against the wall.
“Krmph…heeheeeheee.” Felicia giggled, trying her best to keep her composure and resist the tickling sensations along her neck. Carnage morphed one hand in to a collar, wrapping it round her neck to keep her still.
“Oh no, please don’t…teeheeheee…let me go! Heeheeheeheee..” Felicia giggled faster now as she could no longer shake her head to escape the sensations. The feathers glided lightly against the taught skin of her neck, over and over the same patch of skin, bringing her giggles to a boiling point, she knew she was about to lose it.
“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE…NOOPLEHEHEASSSSEEEEEHAHAHHONO!” The Cat exploded as Carnaged plunged a feather finger in her ear, gently twirling it like a an electric drill causing the Cat to break.
“STOOOOOOOOHAHAHAHAHAHAPPITSTAHHHHAHAHAPITPLEASE! LET ME GO I CAHAHAHAHAHANT TAKE THIS!” Felicia said unable to move a muscle in her upperbody. Carnage removed his finger from her ear and twirled all five fingers in rapid succession bringing them down the Cat’s tight black sleeves, then over the naked underarms. Cat exploded once more.
“NAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH” Cat laughed aloud looking up at the ceiling attempting to block out the sensations.
“Where is PARKER!” Venom screamed impatiently.
“I…I…I…Don’t” Felicia gasped. Carnage morphed a hand in to a smooth buffer, and it buzzed loudly as he removed Cat’s boots and placed it against her soft foot. “NOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHAHAHA…OHGODPLEASESTOPPPPPPPLEEEHEHEHEHEASE!” Cat bounced about trying to escape. She slouched pathetically against the wall, hands still bound over head, one foot in Carnage’s hands, buffer spinning wildly along her sole.
Cat laughed once more as Carnaged drew one hand of feathers across her tummy, tracing the outline of her six pack, and twirled the other one along her cleavage, extending some fingers to snake beneath her bra. This brought a new level of torment to Felicia.
“MERCYYYYYYYYYYHEHEHEHESTAY AWAY FROM ME YOU MONSTER NOOOHOHOHOHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH. I’m BEGGING YOU HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
MJ realized she may be next. She quickly formulated a plan; remembering that Peter had said that fire and super sonic frequencies were the only weaknesses of these alien foes, she grabbed a match and stuck it in her bra.
“WAIT” MJ screamed. An evil grin crawled across her face. “I can make her talk”. MJ walked across the room wiggling her manicured nails.
Carnage stood back, puzzled.
“Oh no, please…no more…I’m sorry…I’m sorry…no more, have mercy please” Cat pleaded, whimpering like the broken women she was.
“Oh but you had so much fun with me. She said dragging her nails along Cat’s arm. “Nohohohoh…I’m sorry please…” Cat whispered as she began to giggle once more.
“Grab her feet, lose the boots!” MJ snapped. Carnage obliged, wrapping his arms around the Cats bare tootsies, locking them in stocks formed from the suit.
“Ktichy Koo Kitty Cat!” MJ cooed as she scribbled her long nails along Cat’s sensitized feet.
“MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHMERRCYYYYYHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAOHGODOHGOHAHAHAWWDHAHAHA!” Cat guffawed. The spited Supermodel expertly scraped and danced, teased and tortured her feet.
“HAHAHAIMHAHAHAIMGONNAPEE…PLEASEEEEEEE” Cat begged between laughter. Mary Jane stopped for a moment.
“Thank you…thank you….” Cat cried. Mary Jane motioned to Venom while Cat wasn’t looking, and the other symbiote, strangely aroused, obliged, walking over to the broken hero’s side.
“Well then…PEE!” MJ jumped on the cat straddling her waist as Felicia had done. Venom held her head still, and MJ plunged her long super model tongue in to her ear while digging both hands in to her waist.
NAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHFUCKNOHOHOHHOHASTOP STOP ILL DO ANYTHINGHAHAHAHAHA” Felicia tried to move, but with her feet trapped by Carnage’s stocks, arms held hi over head by web fluid and venom holding her neck in place, she could only explode as MJs dug in to her ribs, but it was the slippery tongue slurping and tickling her inner ear that broke her. MJ felt a warm stream along her leg. Enough fun. She lit the match against a wall and tossed it on the bed.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Carnage and Venom screamed as they felt the suits leaving their bodies, the flames warm against the naked patches of their skin as the suits attempted to flee.
MJ grabbed the exhausted Cat and fled the building.
“You haven’t seen the last of me Mary Jane!” Eddie Brocks screamed down the hall as the room was engulfed in flame. They go reached the elevator and MJ pounded on the first floor. Button.
“Thank you…thank you…” Cat said as she hugged the red headed super model.
“Don’t mention it.” MJ said. “Now we are even”
