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[MrMidnyte]

I put this on tmf a while ago..didn't get many replies. I'll post part 2 if anyone is interested.


It’s been a long day, Jackie couldn’t wait to get to her apartment. She never would’ve thought appraising jewelry could take so much out of her. Halfway home she already let her jet black hair down to just past her shoulders. She took her shoes off and began driving in stockinged feet. She was wearing a beige business pants suit with black nylons, her suit jacket was in the in the passenger seat, and she had her black silk blouse unbuttoned down to where you could just begin to see her black lace bra. Finally, she made it to her apartment building, and ran to the elevator. Before the door closed, a man slid inside and stood beside her. He was just a little taller than her 5’7 frame.
After a few awkward moments of silence, the man spoke first.

“Hi, if you don’t mind me asking, do you live in apartment 403?”

“Yes, why do you ask?” Jackie asked.

“Sorry about that. My manners aren’t up to date. My name is Shawn, I live in the apartment below you. I was only asking because I heard some commotion going on earlier, like sounds of broken glasses or something.”

“Well, I do have a cat. Its trained to chase mice. Hmph, I shouldn’t be proud to say such a thing.” Jackie said giggling.

Shawn nodded as Jackie brushed her hair back. She noticed that he was still looking at her. She thought it was cute, not a lot of guys keep staring once she catches them.

“You’re staring.” She giggled bringing him out of his trance.

“Sorry again. You probably get this a lot, but you look like Alicia Keys.”

Before Jackie had a chance to reply, Shawn’s floor came up and he dashed out of the elevator. ‘Got a little nervous I guess.’ She thought. Her floor came up an she walked to her door thinking about how good it will feel like to relax. That’s when she heard the noises, glass breaking and voices. She quickly grabbed her can of mace from her purse. Jackie took a deep breath, quietly unlocked the door and the last thing she remembered was a blinding light that hit her forehead as she opened the door.

Jackie awoke slowly as she realized that she blacked out. She was greeted by the sight of two fairies no bigger than the size of her hand. One was an olive skinned, raven hair beauty with green, bedroom eyes that could paralyze a person with the right look. She was wearing a tight silk dress that reached to mid-thigh. The other one looked a lot younger. She had dirty blonde hair that reached the small of her back, big brown eyes, and freckles that laced her slightly tanned skinned. She was wearing a white bikini. The fairies backed up as soon as she awoke. The blonde raced to the other fairy, as she flew little sparkles dropped from her wings.

“That’s the third one Leila, it won’t be long before the humans know that we are real.” The blonde said. Leila turned and looked at Jackie.

“Its not as if anyone believed the others. This one will be no differenhe he he he he…” Leila was cut off by her giggles as the blonde touched the middle of her tummy.

“WHAT THE HELL??!!!” Jackie shouted. She scrambled to her feet, and as she did, her legs almost gave way. Jackie quickly grabbed her doorknob for balance. Her legs felt like rubber and her womanhood was on fire. She looked at the fairies. “WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO ME?!”

“That would be my work. You see, humans can’t handle our magic. apparently they are too sensitive to it.” Leila said. “Listen, I tracked an object to this household of yours when I ran into Kiva here. You see… OOF!!”

Leila was once again cut off as Kiva bum rushed her over to the Jackie’s couch. As they landed on the armrest, Kiva had Leila pinned between her legs, then she placed her whole hand on Leila’s stomach. She burst into a fit of giggles and started flailing her arms like a maniac. Jackie was trying to get her thoughts together as she looked at her apartment. It was in shambles, shards of glass where her vases used to be, books all around like they’ve been thrown, and sparkles, the same that fell from Kiva and Leila as they flew, were all over the place. She turned her attention to the battling fairies and was confused. She saw Kiva’s hand on Leila, but she wasn’t moving it, and Leila was acting as if she was being tickled.

“Okay. That’s enough…AAAIIEEEE!!!!” Jackie screamed. She looked down to see her right foot had stepped on some of the sparkling dust. It felt as if there were hundreds of small fingers and feathers tickling the sole of her foot. It caught her off guard as a stream of giggles started to come from her mouth. She quickly picked her foot up and began stomping it on the ground trying to shake off the dust. It only made matters worse as the phantom fingers and feathers now seeped through her nylons and was tickling in-between and under her toes. Her giggles became short burst of staccato laughter. The feeling lasted for about a good minute then began to fade. She looked up to find the fairies were staring at her again. Kiva got off of Leila and flew to eye level with Jackie.

“You’re not ticklish, are you?” Kiva asked.

“What?” Jackie asked a little winded.

“The last two humans who stepped in my dust curled up in a fetal position in just a few seconds.” Kiva was right, Jackie hasn’t been ticklish since she was ten years old. Her last couple boyfriends always used tickling as a form of foreplay, but got nowhere with her.

“Apparently I’m able to make anyone ticklish. See that, Leila? Three hundred years old and I’m still learn something new everyday.” Jackie was still reeling from her first tickle in fifteen years. She completely forgot how it felt. She was still eye to eye with Kiva, but when she blinked, Kiva’s face changed from playful to stern.

“Now look here Ms. Giggles, humans have ended a five hundred year peace treaty between two tribes, Leila’s and mine. And we have been fighting for the past two years because your kind stole a relic, that we tracked to your home. Now hand it over and we will go away.”

Jackie stood still and just stared, she had no clue what they were talking about. Impossible things were happening to her, ‘I must be dreaming, I had to have fallen when I came through my door.’ She thought. Leila flew up next to Kiva. “She doesn’t believe us,” Leila said. Jackie Looked at Leila as she brushed her hair back. Jackie tried to straighten up when she realized she couldn’t move. Leila’s eyes can paralyze her!! She started struggling, and it seemed to work. Leila was looking a little upset, it seems Jackie had a strong will. She flew close to her face and eyed her up and down. She turned her back to Jackie and started to flutter her wings. The dust slowly fell unto Jackie’s left foot. The sensation was instant and so powerful she regained her foot’s movement. It was as if her foot was being teased licked and massaged lightly and heavily at the same time. The sensation quickly shot up to her womanhood. It felt as though each toe had a mouth around it, fingers grazing the sides and the top of her foot and her sole was receiving a massage so great, words couldn’t describe it. Jackie’s mouth formed an “O” and she only was able to breath heavily for a few seconds. “Oh my god, oh my god ohmygodohmygod!!!!”

“AH, looks like my magic is more effective, Kiva. You see human, unlike Kiva’s magic, mine has a much more sensual touch. I believe you had a taste of one of my spells when you came through the door.” Kiva giggled at that statement.

“She came alright!!!”

Jackie barely heard a word either of them were saying, the sensations were lasting longer than the tickling, A LOT LONGER. And the intensity, she didn’t even realize she was able to fully move until her legs gave way from the pleasure. “Make ooh, ooooohhh it stahhp” She pleaded as tears were forming in her eyes. Kiva flew down to her neck line and laid her small dainty hands on her neck. Jackie’s eyes flew open and burst out in laughter as the tickling sensations returned in full force. The combination was going to drive her mad.

“Just give us what we want and we’ll go away.” Kiva said.

Jackie’s laughter was able to give her the strength to smack Kiva across the room. The neck tickling ceased and the foot stimulation was dying down. She was able to think more clearly. ‘Did I have an orgasm from one of her spells when I came in. Impossible, but my body isn’t lying to me. They’ve toyed with me enough.’ She thought. She tried to move again but was so weak, she now wound up on all fours. Kiva, who was clearly pissed flew right to Leila whose gaze never even left Jackie. “Truce, Leila?” she asked.

“This one has a strong will. She will be fun to break. Yes, a truce for now, but first…” Leila flew to Jackie’s tired form. Jackie saw her coming and she tried to back up, but ended up literally with he back to the wall. She shook her head and started pleading no. Just a blast of her magic made her orgasm, and her fairy dust made her week to the knees, she didn’t want to know what her touch could do. They locked eyes again and Jackie’s head shook no more. Leila took her finger and placed it on Jackie’s nose. Jackie took an insanely large breath and arched her back as wave after wave of pleasure washed through her body. Leila watched and figured each time she arched her back two orgasms had hit her. After about 5 seconds Jackie passed out again. Leila flew back over to Kiva brushed her hair back again smiled.

“How many?” Kiva asked.

“Ten.” Leila replied


To Be Continued…….at your request.

 

[James Brown]

This is very intriguing, and as far as I know, unique. Please go on😉

 

[Cbarton]

Unique story idea! Caught in the middle of a fairy 'civil war'. Makes me wonder what the mysterious object looks actually is...

 

[MrMidnyte]

hmmmm

2 positive replies are better than none. Here's the rest.......

Like before, all comments and critiques are welcome. And this is for the 18 and up audience.


The Fairies Part 2


“WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO THE TRUCE??!!” Kiva yelled.

Her scream had awaken Jackie, she had time to gather her surroundings. She was still by her doorway, and saw that it was now morning by the light that filled the room. She couldn’t believe she had been out all night, on the plus side Jackie found her strength returning, and most of the horrible fairy dust had evaporated. Across the room she saw Kiva tied by her venetian blind’s
string. The way she was tied had her standing at attention. Her arms were at her side and her legs were tight together. The string wrapped around her arms and torso a few times and around her ankles twice. The only parts that could move freely were her knees and her wings, but from the looks of it, she wasn’t going anywhere. Leila was at her side with a hand raised close to touching Kiva’s shoulder.

“She’s awake!!” Kiva said. Leila turned to see Jackie rising to her feet slowly but steady.

“Good morning, strong one.” Leila said as she flew across the room to meet her. She made an abrupt halt as she saw Jackie’s hand raised as if telling her to stop. Jackie was surprised that Leila stopped, They sure as hell didn’t listen to her last night. She was determined not to make the same mistakes she did though. All her shouting and yelling did nothing but have the fairies
make her relive her ticklish days and have forced orgasms. She remembered stories of fairies being nice and sweet, but these fairies were just ruthless, she was definitely going to play it safe.

“Please, I’m willing to help. If what your looking for is here, I’ll get it for you, there’s no need to attack me again.” Jackie said trying not have her voice wavering in fear. Leila’s face began to frown. She seemed disappointed.

“Very well then.” Leila said. She quickly waved her hand and a wand appeared. Jackie expected something fancy, but it was a basic magician’s wand, black with a white tip. Leila made a circle in thin air leaving a soft blue neon light in its place. She then drew a vertical line through the center, and a diagonal line from the center to the circle on each side, a peace sign.
Jackie knew where it was, in her bedroom. A necklace her last boyfriend gave her. It was in plain sight, hanging from her dresser mirror, unless they haven’t gone in there yet.

“Follow me.” Jackie said.

She was feeling upbeat again, knowing that these dueling fairies were close to leaving. She could get on with her life and put this behind her. Jackie was a little too confident, before she took her first step, Leila pointed her wand and shot out a burst of magic directly between Jackie’s legs. She let loose a loud guttural moan and dropped to her knees. Once again she was in the throes of passion, but this one was different, these were slow approaching orgasms, not the simultaneous ones that made her pass out.

“You disappoint me, strong one. I expected you to be tough an deny me what I want and here you go giving it to me. There’s no fun in that. Seeing as you gave in so easily, and you can’t handle my touch, let’s see how you handle this torture. By the way, I didn’t need your help, I know where the relic is. The only reason I don’t have it is because Kiva came in looking for a fight.” Leila let out a small sexy giggle, then flew to Kiva.

“The greatest warrior of the T’Kal tribe, and she falls for ‘The Truce’.”

Leila began to drag her nail over Kiva’s belly. Kiva bit her lower lip, she was not going to give in to her laughter. As Leila saw this she giggled again and added another finger, then another. She knew it was a matter of time before she broke, her belly was quivering wildly. It was good she wasn’t laughing, she wanted Kiva to hear what she had to say.

“ You see Kiva, I want this war to happen(now using whole left hand tickling her tummy), your tribe will succumb to the Pas’ion tribe, which will be personally led by me.”

She began using both her hands, scratching her belly and ribs, leading up to her underarms. “Give me your wand.” Leila said. Kiva shook her head. Leila then switched tactics, her left hand moved quickly while her right slowly teased the other underarm. She turned her head to see Jackie struggling to get up, then falling as another orgasm hit her. Leila had to work fast, the wands were the only way to overpower Kiva, her touch didn’t have much effect. She decided to go for the kill, Leila placed her hand on Kiva’s thigh and began to quickly tickle her neck. Kiva began to spasm as her giggles erupted from her mouth. She absentmindedly conjured up her wand and it fell to the floor. Leila flew down to pick it up and back to Kiva’s face.

“That wasn’t so bad now, was it?” Leila asked. She didn’t wait for an answer. She backed up a few inches and pointed the wands and fired them at Kiva. She arched her back and started to writhe in laughter mixed in with moans.

“Now, in order for my plan to work, I’ll have to leave you in such a weakened state, you won’t be able to put up a fight for a few days. More than enough time to do what I gotta do.” She doubted anyone could hear her, laughter and moans filled the room. She turned to find Jackie upright on her knees. Leila knew she would’ve had a smile on her face, if she wasn’t forcing the orgasms on her. She flew to Jackie, making sure she keeps her distance.

“It seems you’re a glutton for punishment, strong one,” Leila said as she pointed Kiva’s wand at her “let me know if this is overkill.” Leila gripped the wand as a blue beam shot out, it created a bubble that trapped Jackie in her kneeling position. She placed her hands on the bubble. It felt like rubber, there was no way to pop it. As she kept her hands on the bubble, the material began to stretch and reach inside her blouse, one stopped at each underarm, one tentacle reached and touched her belly and tentacles wrapped around her ankles and the tips rested on the sole of her feet. Without warning each of the tips split into eight different ones and began scribbling all over her former ticklish parts. Instantly she burst with laughter as the tentacles in her arm were moving at three different paces deep in the hollows an around the outside of her arms. The one in her belly was playing piano with her ribs, the under sides of her breast, brushing against her bellybutton and kneading her hip bone. The others were just all over her feet. The arches, the balls of her feet, the tops and side of her foot. Jackie was in hysterics, every which way she turned, the bubble’s tentacles stretched with her, never wavering in their tickle torture. Leila watched in amazement, until she felt a tap on her shoulder. It was Kiva, somehow with all the wiggling she was doing she set herself free. Before Leila could talk, Kiva placed her hands on her ribs and a bright light flashed and all Leila could do was scream, then began to laugh. As Kiva let go, Leila quickly dropped the wands and clutched her sides, as she did began to slowly float down. Kiva dove for her wand and freed Jackie. She hunched over, huffing and puffing.

“I’m truly sorry, I wasn’t aware you were willing to help. The last two humans were uncooperative. The relic? Kiva asked.

Her sides hurt from laughing so hard, she was still feeling the tingling from the tickles, from her still hunched position she pointed to her bedroom. Kiva smiled then flew to Leila’s body in the fetal position still suffering from her effects.

“I’ve been saving that move for two years, and this is for underestimating me”

Kiva flew to the middle of the room, raised her arms parallel to her shoulder, and began to glow. In an instant, her fairy dust exploded from her covering every inch of the room. Leila and Jackie were covered in it. The two girls were laughing harder than ever as their bodies were being tortured past their limits from Kiva’s dust. After two minutes of intense squirming, both girls passed out. Two hours later Jackie woke up to a fairy free room, free of dust and all. She ran to her room and found her peace necklace gone. Jackie let out a sigh of relief, this ordeal was over. She began to undress, as she did every time she brushed up against her skin, it sent tingles down her spine.
‘Odd’ she thought. To test a theory, she put her left stocking foot on her right thigh and traced her nail across the sole of her foot. Jackie began giggling uncontrollably and stopped immediately. She was able to tickle herself, what was more shocking was that she was once again ticklish.



The End


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