TRoJ chapter 2: "SHOT" (f/f, contains blood)

[Ilohnoh1]

Here's the first page of "The Return of Jen" chapter 2.

EDIT: Also contains a certain amount of violence and language.

I will add more pages to this thread when they are available.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Final page of the chapter.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Update: Added page 2 (see first post)

Also, I forgot to mention this, but this story contains a little bit of violence. The "torture" mentioned is ONLY tickle torture by the way. Nothing worse than that.

Page 2 (the new one) also contains some minor nudity, but Jen is shown from behind and there's no details on any parts visible this time 😛

 

[Mandrake]

So far I love it. Just wondering is the police chief pregnant?

 

[Bashiku]

One minor mistake... clerk not cleric. Cleric is person who heals in D&D and if Jen is really going to die, she doesn't need cleric 😛

Btw what did you plan? Who will continue in her place?

 

[10 armed tkler]

yes I do believe the chief is pregnant...good for her!

and Iloh I have said this once and I will say it again. I complain that you post to much awesome in a short amount of time. I have caught a cold because of this. I am suing,:46:

 

[Ilohnoh1]

So far I love it. Just wondering is the police chief pregnant?

Yes she is. It was already sort of a bit visible on page one, but she was holding Jen's outfit, which was hiding her belly a bit.

One minor mistake... clerk not cleric. Cleric is person who heals in D&D and if Jen is really going to die, she doesn't need cleric 😛

Btw what did you plan? Who will continue in her place?

Ack! how did that get through! I initially (in pencil) wrote cleric by accident, changed it to clerk and then when I did the lettering... sigh. I will fix it though, thanks much for the correction.
Edit: Fixed. 🙂

My plans are, as always, top secret. So what will happen...? You'll see. Everyone dies eventually. Jen will not get old (that's granted and confirmed), yet she will be around for some time to come. Sorry that I have to be so cryptic but I don't want to spoil the story. The bottom line is however that I have a plan.

yes I do believe the chief is pregnant...good for her!

and Iloh I have said this once and I will say it again. I complain that you post to much awesome in a short amount of time. I have caught a cold because of this. I am suing,:46:

You don't yet know half of what I have in store at this moment. The scene where you can see Jen being dead has already been drawn (but I'm not ready to post it yet) and before anything else I'm going to draw and post a special Jen-pillory picture (non-tk so it won't be on this part of the forum, better keep track of my artist pad). It's a pillory scene I think you haven't ever seen before. 😉

 

[Bashiku]

Ack! how did that get through! I initially (in pencil) wrote cleric by accident, changed it to clerk and then when I did the lettering... sigh. I will fix it though, thanks much for the correction.
Edit: Fixed. 🙂

My plans are, as always, top secret. So what will happen...? You'll see. Everyone dies eventually. Jen will not get old (that's granted and confirmed), yet she will be around for some time to come. Sorry that I have to be so cryptic but I don't want to spoil the story. The bottom line is however that I have a plan.

Meh she will still live to see herself clones thousand at the times to please hungry ticklers of the future 😀

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Meh she will still live to see herself clones thousand at the times to please hungry ticklers of the future 😀

Don't be too sure about that. Things are going to take a very drastic different turn shortly.

EDIT: For those who don't want to miss anything Jen-related, there's a new picture called "Pillory For Two" (featuring both her and me), but it's not tk-related, so I didn't post it in this section of the forums. If you're interested you can check it out here. Beware that it contains male nudity and various other things.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Page 3 uploaded. Please see the first post in this thread.

Beware, it contains some violence. (I forgot to mention that initially in the title)

 

[Ilohnoh1]

And page 4 has been added.

Contains some more violence, language and a bit of blood.
Conclusion is coming...

 

[GiveMeFeet]

Jen - the ticklish, invincible action star!

I remember when I had imagination...

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Jen - the ticklish, invincible action star!

I remember when I had imagination...

Unfortunately for her, that invincibility only lasted a short time... did you notice by the way that in this chapter, Jen is not being tickled at all? It is a bit exceptional...

 

[Bashiku]

So who will be your new main cast character, unless you plan to make 'VENGEFUL GHOST OF JEN THE TICKLER'...?

 

[Ilohnoh1]

So who will be your new main cast character, unless you plan to make 'VENGEFUL GHOST OF JEN THE TICKLER'...?

Oh, don't think for a second I'm done yet... I have much bigger plans than this!

You know me. 😉

 

[Gooladee287]

Please don't kill Jen.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Page 5 has been added!
(attached to the first post in this topic)

Only one page coming... the conclusion.
Expected this weekend.

Please don't kill Jen.

All the things have been decided... and they are happening as they are written. Whether they are nice or sad. One of the things that is fixed is that Jen dies, but there is more I have in store for you (which I cannot talk about yet). I have already talked about 'bigger plans' and that is part of it. Be patient and you'll find out what happens. 😉

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Page 6
CONCLUSION

And the last page of the chapter has been uploaded.
You can find it on the second post of this topic.



Below this: SPOILERS!

When you have read this page, you know what you have already known from the start... that my stories are rarely without surprises.

I know a lot of you have drawn conclusions on something I have hinted about overhere, but if you read well, I never said that she'd die in chapter 2. I was just listing things that were coming up next, but that doesn't mean you get to see how Jen dies for real and with a little luck you'll get to see that tomorrow.

"The Apocalypse" is the final chapter of "The Return of Jen" and currently I am planning to present that twofold: as a comic (one side of the story) and as a PC computer game (the other side of the story). All of that is planned for the next year... this year I'm only going to do a few more separate pictures.

Thanks for reading. 🙂

 

[c_tickler]

Very interesting stuff Iloh - i like how you put your stories together...... cliff-hangers at times but that all part of the excitement 🙂
Good work mate - keep it coming

 

[11225]

Oh wow. When I saw the ending, I was happy, because I thought she'd "Kick the bucket" for good. T_T

But I'm surprised for what she said to Inge (if I spelt her name right).

 

[10 armed tkler]

Iloh...MAKE UP YOUR MIND!!!!


Good comic as always. But you seem to always change her life around. pick a direction:blink...or...kill her and start a new.:cry

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Very interesting stuff Iloh - i like how you put your stories together...... cliff-hangers at times but that all part of the excitement 🙂
Good work mate - keep it coming

Thank you. 🙂
More is coming... my inspiration and ideas have not run dry yet. 😉

Oh wow. When I saw the ending, I was happy, because I thought she'd "Kick the bucket" for good. T_T

But I'm surprised for what she said to Inge (if I spelt her name right).

You spelt it right. 🙂
I'm happy too, although I already knew how this was going to end before I started the chapter. In fact, I had scripted this several weeks back, before I decided to take a break and do some request pictures and various other single pictures first.

Iloh...MAKE UP YOUR MIND!!!!

Good comic as always. But you seem to always change her life around. pick a direction:blink...or...kill her and start a new.:cry

Jen's life is change. You've got to get used to that... If it looks like I'm constantly changing my mind on in which direction to push, that's not the case. Jen was never meant to die in this chapter and so she didn't. Nevertheless you will see how she dies in a picture that I may be able to post later today.