True Story...explicit

[rufus9]

i am 20 and live in an apartment, i am going through college and taking a spanich class which i have no idea on and probly will not pass the class. so i decided to hire a tutor for my needs. little did i kno she was going to fulfill a different type of needs.

she came over one friday after noon, at r meeting time 6:00, i opened the door and there she was, 5'7" tan, brunette, with a nice ass and full round DD breasts. no i am not making this up, her name was sammi gerlach. she introduced herself and the first thing i noticed were her long hot pink fingernails.

we started sudying and i wasnt making ne progress, now i am not trying to brag but im not a bad lookin guy myself, flat stomach, big chest, muscular, about 6'2" 220.

we both were attracted to eachother, and she finally sed, if u get this problem right i wil make out with u, how do u say 9 she asked? nueve i replied and we started makin out right there, i was soo excited , obvously due to the huge bulge in my pants. we layed down on the table she sat on top of me and we continued to kiss, then she sed, i hav an idea, and she went and grabbed some rope from my room, she tied me down to the tblt, my hands high above my head and she even tied me at the elbows, then my ankles far far apart, and my thighs too.

she then started to cut my clothes off, but i didnt care. finally i was completly naked and she had me tied down with a raging boner, and she admired her work, he unbuttoned her blouse and stipeed down to her bra and thong and strattled my waist, she ran her fingernails down my forearms to my pits and tickled them like hell for 10 mins straight, then she tickled my sides, nipples and stomach

she then made her way down to my inner thighs and groin area and tickled myt ass , then started tickling my dick with her ingernails. then she took off her bra abd panties and my dick got even bigger, she started licking my dick, then started tickling me agin, finally, she gave me a bj , it was the best tutor session i hav ever had, wen she left, she sed she expected me to scheduel nother appointment, i told her i would be happy to

 

[rufus9]

its ok that it dont sound believable cuz it doesnt, but it sure as hell was lucky for me, im still seein her but we havent had another session like that yet

 

[chode]

Im with Kirl. You made it to the college level with spelling like that?

And this is something that kinda makes my "BULLSHIT" meter go off............

"then she sed, i hav an idea, and she went and grabbed some rope from my room, she tied me down to the tblt, "

She was never at your house? First time? And she knew, somehow , that you had fucking rope stashed in your bedroom? Its ok to make up a story dude.

 

[rufus9]

ok sorry i didnt feel like writing out the hole story, it wasnt rope it was 2 straps from robes, i didnt know i had to go into such detail, here i am trying to share a story with u guys and u come out and criticize me, and its none of ur damn businessabout my education and just for the heck of it im graduating from michigan with masters

 

[Duke Diablo]

Well, I'd like to give my opinion on the story: while I found it lacking in detail, it's a nice first shot. Some things there seem hardly believable, but why not... heck, girls tend to have kinky streaks to themselves.
But, please explain to me, since I don't know how American schooling system actually works, being that I'm from Croatia, how come you can get a master's degree being 20?

 

[andyb1231]

first of all id like to congratulate you on your lucky experience, and second of all id like to say what a bunch of t*ats some of the members of this community are being, i think the fact that the story was rushed looking makes it seem more likely to be true, because when someone details their experience with cheesy quotes and extreme detail it just seems all made up.
dude its true that you could have spent more time spelling correctly etc but i understand you werent posting a story you were posting an experience which is very different, and we dont need extreme details to appreciate how lucky you are to have EXPERIENCED what you did.
congrats.
sorry about the twa*s

peace out

 

[duck171]

This is why I hate text messaging. No offense to the writer but text messaging is ruining the English language and the communication skills of most Americans. I really hate to see it happening, 10 and 12 year old kids sending thousands of messages that are nothing but abbreviations and misspelled words. Again no offense, I don't spell very well but at least my writing is readable and not all abbreviated. Anyway, off my soapbox and on topic, I don't think it matters if the story is true or not or if the writer is a genius who gets his masters in two years. It is what it is so take it for that.

 

[rufus9]

ok first i would like to say thank u to the people who were supporting me, secondly, just to clear things up, i am going for my masters, not quite there yet, third, there were plenty of details i left out that would make the story much more believable but if i wrote all that in, it would be much much longer and i didnt have all that much time, now if you guys really have the time to read and re-read my story to find different flaws in it, then get a life because thats damn pathetic

 

[duck171]

ok first i would like to say thank u to the people who were supporting me, secondly, just to clear things up, i am going for my masters, not quite there yet, third, there were plenty of details i left out that would make the story much more believable but if i wrote all that in, it would be much much longer and i didnt have all that much time, now if you guys really have the time to read and re-read my story to find different flaws in it, then get a life because thats damn pathetic

Ah, I see the spelling and grammar have improved! *goes back to life* :super_hap 😉

 

[Bashiku]

Now now rufus no need to be rude... as a fellow writer I must scold you on lack of details, but that is your style. It could still need some improvement, but who am I to argue with you...
My advice for you is to read few books, something descriptive, but not too long.
Also about probability of this story... well I don't care about it... It is not my concern...
And another thing rufus... there was no point in calling members of this forum pathetic... that is quite insulting no matter how you look at it. So in future try not to insult directly, for there is always someone that could land you to the ground...

 

[rufus9]

ok first of all dont act like u know me, my name isnt rufus, and i was not insulting the people of this forum, i was insulting the ones who have nothing better to do than look for flaws in my writing and then rub it in my face, and its not that im uneducated, i was in a time crunch so the story was not written very well, fine i just wont post again so u can be happy and not hav to read my crappy writing

 

[Relent<]

Man, you'd think that as an ADULT forum, the denizens would be a little less immature, and for he love of god, they were spelling errors! We all make mistakes, and he was obviously in a rush to get the lead out; I mean, I'd be a bit excited to tell this story too. Geez...

too the author, congratulations. ^___^ Hope you actually get a grasp on Spanish, btw. 😉 Sounds like she's got a pretty good reward system down.

 

[Bashiku]

Rufus listen to this... I don't know you, nor do I care to get to know you, but for a writer it is the greatest honor to get some constructive critics.
Also it is so interesting so see a fight so childish between people that I thought were intellectuals...

 

[MistressValerie1]

I removed those posts which I felt were non-constructive criticism and the replies to them. Everyone, please remember that while constructive criticism is welcomed, getting personal is not.

 

[Bashiku]

Thanks Val... atleast this will help calm things a little bit for now...

 

[Kirl1]

Rufus Bro,

I was just trying to READ the thing without having to use my Little Orphan Annie decoder ring. I mean, you spent a lot of time hunting and pecking at the keyboard or your phone dial pad or whatever you used, so I was trying to offer a suggestion like using some vowels, or the actual letters that are in the words.

r th aktuwal letrs tht r n th wrds.

 

[Bashiku]

Kirl that was a little too cruel and too direct... atleast hide it efficiently if you can't keep yourself from criticism others stories constructively.

 

[Kilostraf]

nice tiny story =p

maybe you should support your ideas with more words. making it more steamy and hot ^_^

*cheers*

 

[sole seeker1]

... i am going through college and taking a spanich class

Hmmmm..... you type with an accent. You sure you're not Spanich to begin with?

maybe you should support your ideas with more words.

I dunno... he's not doin' all that good with the one's he's using now! 😉

 

[mt_man_mt]

hahahaha wow... this whole thread killed my buzz but haha it was worth it.