"What happened to the rest of this sweater??"

[Relent<]

Another pic of my sheep girl. ^___^
I've decided that her name is Aye (a cookie to anyone can figure out the pun behind it XD)
I've decided that she is a native of Ireland, and personality-wise, as you may have conjectured by now, she is a timid one.
I've put a lot of thought into the tickle pic she'll be featured in in the near future, and I think you all will like it 😉
As for now, the pic attached is one of Aye in normal clothes, but she realized that there is something different about her sweater. You'll see.

 

[Low_Roads]

Return of the sheep girl! And Aye is a rather nice name! I'm afraid I've lost the cookie, though... I don't know what significance it has. I'll write in again if I figure it out. Likewise, I'm not sure why she's having a sweater mishap, though it does afford us a very nice view of her shapely belly! Sheep, of all folk, should not be at a loss for clothing material! I think Aye, with her retiring demeanor, is going make a splendid tickle victim! Can't wait to see her first fetish adventure... I suspect it will indeed be a pip!

 

[His Divine Shadow]

Likewise, I'm not sure why she's having a sweater mishap, though it does afford us a very nice view of her shapely belly!

Hear hear! *Raises glass in agreement* HDS can live with sweater malfunctions like this one. 😛 I like her face in this one; it has the perfect "what in the ... ?" expression. Nicely done! :happy:

 

[eagphilly]

That expression is priceless! I love the concept of a sheep girl, and the drawing is very sweet! Hope to see more, keep up the excellent work! :3

 

[Relent<]

I'm glad you all liked it ^___^
I think I got the anatomical proportions down this time around, and I too am fond of the expression.
LBH, I'm surprised at you 😛 After all, you're the one that inspired it with your first comment. 😀
HDS, thanks for the kind words. I'm also fond of her wardrobe malfunction.😀
Scribesan, I've become fond of the sheep girl concept as well.

 

[a1532b]

Is it Aye because she is very skinny and looks like the letter "I"?

 

[Low_Roads]

LBH, I'm surprised at you 😛 After all, you're the one that inspired it with your first comment. 😀

Ah! Dummy me! Aye Love Ewe, perhaps? :laughing:

 

[Relent<]

*presents cookie to LBH*
congratulations!!! XD

a1532b- Har Har! >_< I have a tendency of doing that though...

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

a1532b- Har Har! >_< I have a tendency of doing that though...

In regards to this, any future critiques I would give you would most likely be about this issue of proportions. The reason I haven't said anything yet about this one is because I felt there was little more to add from the last picture. I'd just be repeating myself on the anatomy. Until you either settle on this and decide you like it this way, or you realize it's a problem, break the habit, and try harder, theres not much more to say, unfortunately.

I like that you're trying, but without being there myself to see it, I have no idea how hard you're working to improve, nor can I gauge your improvement personally and give better recommendations based on the pace you've set for yourself.

We all have our own pace and learning curve and, for me, it's a matter of seeing yours.

 

[Relent<]

No problem, they are in fact your honest opinions. I have been attempting to improve, though it is subtle and rather slow process, and I feel that I have, seeing some of my older work. I'm one of those artist that will like something when he draws it, and then a few months later, after improving since then, see the drawing as absolute garbage. For now, though, I like it ^___^
I think I should attempt some experiments in composition; maybe drw someone who's really fat, then someone really thin, then someone muscular, just to evolve my body style and get used to drawing something of a normal composition. I dunno, I have some improving to do, at any rate. 😀

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

Thats actually a very good idea you have there. I also recommend you draw different body types so you can test yourself to see whether this is a habit or whether it's a preference. It's practically natural to want to draw thinner characters (who wants to draw fat slobs unless it's a gag or the character happens to be fat), but it would still be good to try your hand with different types also. At the very least, it would force you to draw differently for those pictures, and any habits or weakpoints you have will be tested.

The bad thing is you may see it as too much and won't want to try those things again, but the good thing is if you overcome and compensate you may move past some of the common errors you make. If you keep drawing the same thing the same way theres no incentive or room to learn or grow, so I agree that this would be a good opportunity for you.