How do you do that?
You creative bastard. As an English major with a writing focus all I can say is "Damn."
I thought there were only about 5 different ways to approach the genre of tickling fiction. Apparently I was wrong.
You are one good writer, even toasted. I don't think many could have done anything even remotely close to this without confusing the hell out of the audience.
I'd continue with a laundry list of compliments, but I'd be up all night and frankly, I can't think of anything better to say.
Good job.
You rock.
Maybe I should try a story of my own?