Major kudos to chica224 for contacting me and pointing me to her "Bolt Girl" superheroine tickle-torture stories. Just one man's opinion, but here's why I would definitely nominate this one for a Golden Feather award!
1. Very clever heroine superpower for starters. The tall, redheaded, Southern beauty is a great image and the "elder" Mistress Feather with the intricate & scientific plan, costumes, henchwomen.
2. I don't usually read long stories, but the intelligence of the writing and knowing what was probably coming made for great anticipation and I enjoyed all the details of the suits, the room, the machines, etc.
3. Then the henchwomen running out from behind the doors made a great picture - I've always liked gang tickling and couldn't wait to see how they got past her superpower.
4. I also like tight bondage so that rubber ball trap was genius to me!
5. Since her name was Mistress Feather I had a feeling she'd be going after the feet, which just so happens to be my favorite (and most personally ticklish) spot.
6. As soon as she mentioned the chair I knew it was coming!
7. Then once she started talking about how she couldn't zap anyone or else she'd power up the machine... a brilliant way to amp up the mental anguish, even before the tickling began.
8. And then just the way she slowly started the tickling, and your detailed description of her actions, plus the wild thoughts going on in Bolt Girl's head. And the connection between electricity and ticklishness, with her soft feet!
9. The fact that it was 1-on-1 made it intimate and more torturous I think. And it also just so happens that "coochie coo" is THE favorite phrase that taunts me as a lee. It was almost like she wrote the story just for me.
10. Even her descriptions of the laughter were realistic. And the attempts to hide the ticklishness, heightens the anticipation so much.
Looking forward to part 2!
1. Very clever heroine superpower for starters. The tall, redheaded, Southern beauty is a great image and the "elder" Mistress Feather with the intricate & scientific plan, costumes, henchwomen.
2. I don't usually read long stories, but the intelligence of the writing and knowing what was probably coming made for great anticipation and I enjoyed all the details of the suits, the room, the machines, etc.
3. Then the henchwomen running out from behind the doors made a great picture - I've always liked gang tickling and couldn't wait to see how they got past her superpower.
4. I also like tight bondage so that rubber ball trap was genius to me!
5. Since her name was Mistress Feather I had a feeling she'd be going after the feet, which just so happens to be my favorite (and most personally ticklish) spot.
6. As soon as she mentioned the chair I knew it was coming!
7. Then once she started talking about how she couldn't zap anyone or else she'd power up the machine... a brilliant way to amp up the mental anguish, even before the tickling began.
8. And then just the way she slowly started the tickling, and your detailed description of her actions, plus the wild thoughts going on in Bolt Girl's head. And the connection between electricity and ticklishness, with her soft feet!
9. The fact that it was 1-on-1 made it intimate and more torturous I think. And it also just so happens that "coochie coo" is THE favorite phrase that taunts me as a lee. It was almost like she wrote the story just for me.
10. Even her descriptions of the laughter were realistic. And the attempts to hide the ticklishness, heightens the anticipation so much.
Looking forward to part 2!
