The Dark Heart

[TicklishBlackGuy]

This story is huge so I posted the document for everyone to read. So I basically have been writing a book for about 2 years now. I finished it in under a year but never got to revising it. This chapter her is my first chapter in my book, redone, edited, and redid the ending as well. I hope you all like it! Please comment when you read it!. Just click the attachment below.

 

[sadi]

I'd recommend having someone else (with a confident background in English studies) look at this. Though you've revised it, I think more editing is still required. (Only 'just' begun reading, so no further comments, thus far)

 

[TicklishBlackGuy]

I know i stilll have alot to learn and do, but that's a success from the it was before