Android 18 B&W Comic (Mild Nudity)

[johndthe2nd]

Hi all, here is my lastest work, it has taken some what of an eternity but here i am.

Anyway feel free to comment, all criticisms welcome, i am well aware the artwork is far from perfect, and a little poor in some areas and perhaps a little confusing (hopefully not!!) but overall i think this is a step forward for me, but please let me know what you think

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[mkeemer]

Wow John, Great story and artwork. Thanks. Please keep up the great work.

 

[Rox_My_Sox1]

Sent you a note Johnster. ^_^

Please respond when your able. ^_~

 

[Inverse]

Great stuff~ seriously. <3

 

[johndthe2nd]

Hi all

many thanks for your comments

 

[TheLadyLer]

Amazing work!

 

[Serious_sam]

Roshi is my new favourite DBZ character after this. The story is well written, both Roshi and 18 are "in character" for the most part. Excellent.

One small thing though. You said that criticism is welcome, so I'm just going to point out the dragon that granted Roshi's wishes. The dragon you drew is Porunga, the Namekian dragon that grants three wishes. By this point in the story, he was no longer on Earth, he was on the new planet Namek, so Roshi couldn't have summoned him. The dragon that was on Earth at the time was Shenron, and he could only grant two wishes. But, we can just assume Roshi never wished for those tickling tools. He could have just as easily bought them somewhere.

I hope you'll make more comics like this.

 

[johndthe2nd]

Amazing work!

thank you

Roshi is my new favourite DBZ character after this. The story is well written, both Roshi and 18 are "in character" for the most part. Excellent.

One small thing though. You said that criticism is welcome, so I'm just going to point out the dragon that granted Roshi's wishes. The dragon you drew is Porunga, the Namekian dragon that grants three wishes. By this point in the story, he was no longer on Earth, he was on the new planet Namek, so Roshi couldn't have summoned him. The dragon that was on Earth at the time was Shenron, and he could only grant two wishes. But, we can just assume Roshi never wished for those tickling tools. He could have just as easily bought them somewhere.

I hope you'll make more comics like this.

hey thanks for your feedback! yes you are right, i did manipulate the story to my own desires, I remember now i think dende made a new dragon for earth?? which i assume is shenron, its been a while since ive watched them!

 

[Serious_sam]

hey thanks for your feedback! yes you are right, i did manipulate the story to my own desires, I remember now i think dende made a new dragon for earth?? which i assume is shenron, its been a while since ive watched them!

Exactly. Dende had revived Shenron and gave him the ability to grant two wishes. You're welcome. Keep up the good work.

 

[heman2045]

great story and pics here, I didnt realise roshi had a tickle fetish! I wonder if hes gonna try for Bulma or Chi-Chi?

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