It's a nice story, but at the risk of being unpopular, don't think to many more people need to be asked to comment on it. Getting a bit annoying seeing it on the front page every day instead of new stories. It's a great idea though. You should really do a part 3
I love that ending, using the hench women was a fantastic idea!
Toe cuffs are something nobody ever seems to remember to include in a tickle story! Including them was a great addition and added well to the story.. fantastic job!!
First time reading your work and I have to say I'm impressed with the level of detail you put into your stories. I'll have to set aside some time to read over your other works!
This is a well thought out story, I love all the describing words and vivid imagery you provide in this! So much detail, I felt like I could be watching it! Great imagination, nice foreshadowing, Well delivered build to climax. I cant wait to read more
Wow!! Poor Bolt girl!, but i think i cant get tired of reading about her poor feet being tickled Very well writen. I love this story I will look for part 2