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The Misadventures Begin! Vol 1!
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Kleptomaniac
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::Busts through the wall like the Hawaiian Punch guy:: HELL YEA!
Kleptomaniac
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Good point...but anime's signature says we need to say "Hell Yeah" to see anime...so I sort've went with both. Seems I failed. 
Celtic_Emperor
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You're off to a great start. I wish you the best of success.
E-mail me sometime and maybe we can work together on an issue. That would be nice, if you want that is.
E-mail me sometime and maybe we can work together on an issue. That would be nice, if you want that is.
Celtic_Emperor
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I think I'll be more detailed than that. An undertaking this large deserves more of a comment.
1.) The introduction of the knight character was perfectly timed. While I would have assumed he would have appeared in the next issue, giving him an early entrance worked here.
2.) You kept the situation/plot moving, from one scene to another. Thats good.
3.) Dialogue and the wording of it is very important. Not only does it help us understand whats going on, but combined with effects can really change the mood. "Knights gets LAID" was the perfect touch in this instance. You've clearly made it known to us that he's not your average knight of virtue, and so we know in part what we can expect from this character. I already have thoughts on the matter.
4.) Its clear you've done your homework when it comes to panels and the when, and how and why of it all. Good show. All they need to be is cleaned up and more alligned, but other than that you've done a really good job with them.
5.) I like that you didn't just rush right into the tickling or made it a focus in the issue. Its my opinion that its more important to establish characters first (in any manga/comic), which is what you did. Hopefully in the coming issues we'll learn more about them in detail.
6.) I like the show of personality in the e-mail segment. Its sort of like a good ending credits on an anime series. If I have a question for Jipsy, can I just submit it here, or do you prefer everything goes to the e-mail addy?
I'd say more but its only one issue (6 pages) so its kind of hard to come with more. Still, you're off to a really good start. ^__^
1.) The introduction of the knight character was perfectly timed. While I would have assumed he would have appeared in the next issue, giving him an early entrance worked here.
2.) You kept the situation/plot moving, from one scene to another. Thats good.
3.) Dialogue and the wording of it is very important. Not only does it help us understand whats going on, but combined with effects can really change the mood. "Knights gets LAID" was the perfect touch in this instance. You've clearly made it known to us that he's not your average knight of virtue, and so we know in part what we can expect from this character. I already have thoughts on the matter.
4.) Its clear you've done your homework when it comes to panels and the when, and how and why of it all. Good show. All they need to be is cleaned up and more alligned, but other than that you've done a really good job with them.
5.) I like that you didn't just rush right into the tickling or made it a focus in the issue. Its my opinion that its more important to establish characters first (in any manga/comic), which is what you did. Hopefully in the coming issues we'll learn more about them in detail.
6.) I like the show of personality in the e-mail segment. Its sort of like a good ending credits on an anime series. If I have a question for Jipsy, can I just submit it here, or do you prefer everything goes to the e-mail addy?
I'd say more but its only one issue (6 pages) so its kind of hard to come with more. Still, you're off to a really good start. ^__^
grippedchimp
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Amazing! A great mix of tickling, storyline and humour too! Obviously the tickling here is the tip of the iceberg, but it serves a great taste of things to come!
Darth Vegeta
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wow
ONE WORD...
WOW Oo:
ONE WORD...
WOW Oo:
Tomato_Dragon
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Gotta love cat manga. Love this stuff. Great job
grippedchimp
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Fairies? Don't remember drawing any fairies... unless you're referring to Cali's Dreamtime. That would be Cheshire Cat's doing. Go kick his ass into doing it again!
I must say, anime, very impressive. I assume the arm has healed up well. I look forward to seeing more of your art. I do admit i have a thing for cat girls, along with demon girls. Also, please send my regards to Venus.
