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A Woman's Bare Soles

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This is a poem written by my friend Tracy. She's a longtime lover of everything ticklish, bondage, feet, and "erotically cruel-but-fun". She's a part of the close circle I play within and this clearly displays the attitude, passion, and approaches within it. Her tastes run side by side with my own, only she has twice the experience to draw from.

In her words this poem was inspired by a certain great tickler/tormentor following one of many adventures, who taught her and brought her to deeper levels than she ever knew. It's no secret that most males differ greatly from females in their way of thinking. However- some do not.

For all of you who often wonder what goes through a female's mind, what's in her heart (compared to a guys), and for those who want an insight as to what feminine headspace is about? I suggest the following reading:

"A Woman's Bare Soles"

The soles of a woman's bare feet
are a wonderful place to explore.
Many ways you can treat them-
you can tickle or beat'em-
or soothe them when tired and sore.

A woman's bare feet are quite precious.
A private place few get to see.
Hidden away
for most of the day-
Vulnerable only to she.

Only a female can know this.
Her feet connect to her core.
Hide and protect,
let no one detect,
her secretly longing for more.

Oh how she aches to be captured!
Teased, tormented, and taken.
A pirate, a rogue-
take her down that dream road...
and her inner most soul will awaken.

To fasten her tightly in wood
then coil her, in countless ropes!
Exposing feet now to others-
be they strangers or lovers-
and she's forced to reveal secret hopes.

At first she'll put up quite a struggle.
But that wall of protection will wane.
What can she do
as she loses a shoe?
Curling her long toes in vain.

That first rush of cool air determines
the thrill, the panic... the fun.
No safeword to use-
she's now lost both shoes-
Her feet knowing there's no where to run.

Her world is thus narrowing down.
Her soles are the focus to beat.
How much can she take?
Will they itch her, or rake-
the bottoms of her private feet?

The spoon wields it's power on soles.
From the ball of the foot to the heels.
The spoon, as it's said,
leaves them puffy and red-
and delivers us feminine squeals.

The big toes stretched upward so tautly.
Immobile, they smile at the sky.
As they rub in that powder
she'll squirm and screech louder-
She'll beg for her toes, and she'll cry.

No mercy will ever be shown.
Secretly, these tears are not sad.
On the inside she's beaming,
"I'm taken"- she's screaming!
As her poor private toes itch so bad.

She first hears the roar of the torches.
Soon sees the bright yellow flame.
One for each foot,
his hands covered in soot,
soles awaiting his cruel roasting game.

Hot feet on cement in the summer,
or new pavement, just doesn't compare.
When those flames lick taut soles,
it's as hot as red coals,
She'll scream for her soles as they stare!

Tight between toes are wood matches!
Long pieces betwixt every member.
To add to her throes,
just the bottoms of toes,
will be cooking from each burning ember.

The wooden sticks burst into life.
Chanting "burn them" and cheering, and then-
in panic she'll squeal,
each toe burning she'll feel!
Then over, and over, again.

The heating, the beating, and itching,
are soon whisked away in her howls.
Happy faces all gloating,
as her mind is still floating,
her soles are now cleansed with soft towels.

Lost in a sea of bright faces
determined to torture her soles,
the feather she sees,
"Oh my God! No-no! Please!"
and tries to pull through those wood holes.

Her inner walls now in shambles.
Just the crowd- and her ticklish fears.
She's free as a child
as her laughter is wild,
As they smile and enjoy laughing tears.

A Woman's bare feet are ticklish doorways
through which one's soul often passes.
Every one can relate
to this one common trait-
whether tickled in private or by masses.

Soft, warm, and sensitive to touching.
Most often a funnel to passions.
Pull a feather twixt toes
and watch how she glows,
giggling in uncontrolled fashions.

When the sun finally sets, treat her gently.
With a kiss, wipe the tears from her face.
Loosen a bind-
and she'll thank you, most kind,
for her trip to that most special place.

A woman's bare soles are a pathway
to my mind, soul, hither, and yon.
You've touched all those plays
with your beautiful ways-
Please lay me next to you, tied, until dawn.

 

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Good poem,never got off subject or anything.........lol and thats very good considering how much I like the subject.A Job Well Done!
 
My god... it's almost scary. Those words are just an elegant way of speaking right to my brain. Tell your friend, she's a genius. Honestly. That's the most beautiful way I've ever heard that summed up. It aroused me and almost made me cry some just knowing that that can be captured up so perfectly. Thank you so much for sharing that. Thanks from the bottom of my heart.

... and feet. 😉
 
Very well said!
Bravo, bravo!!!!😀
I give you a standing ovation!!!
Thanks for posting that.
Also, I love the pic you included at the end, very nice.

Aloha, John 😉
 
I know Tracy and the top she's talking about and all I can say is wow. She really captured the feeling exactly as you see it happen in person. Congrats to you both for sharing that!
 
My god... it's almost scary. Those words are just an elegant way of speaking right to my brain. Tell your friend, she's a genius. Honestly. That's the most beautiful way I've ever heard that summed up. It aroused me and almost made me cry some just knowing that that can be captured up so perfectly. Thank you so much for sharing that. Thanks from the bottom of my heart.

... and feet. 😉

I agree with you 100%- theres so much more to playing- thats the way we all feel in the group I play within. I was taught well. You get spoiled!

I'll tell Tracy what you said, but you can tell her yourself if you wish: [email protected]


Kay 🙂
 
I agree with you 100%- theres so much more to playing- thats the way we all feel in the group I play within. I was taught well. You get spoiled!

I'll tell Tracy what you said, but you can tell her yourself if you wish: [email protected]


Kay 🙂

I sent an email her way. Hope it finds her well. n_n Thanks so much for letting know how to get in touch with her. It sounds like you guys have a wonderful group that you can share such feelings and experiences with each other.
 
I sent an email her way. Hope it finds her well. n_n Thanks so much for letting know how to get in touch with her. It sounds like you guys have a wonderful group that you can share such feelings and experiences with each other.


We do, we really do. Those words ring true. That was based on a public tickling and torturing of course, so imagine how much more emotionally intense the private side gets? I could only wish that it would run through the community like a wild brush fire and engulf everyone. But that's just a dream.

It's really what I always sought but almost never found. I got lucky. I give full credit to the ones that run it and teach it. Doesn't matter if it's one on one play or more in a scene- this approach opens you up totally. Unless you've undergone it, it's hard to put into words.

If you wish to know more, please PM me. Your box is full :/

I told Tracy what you said. She has more poems-- I think.

Thanks!!
 
Being a lover of poetry, and have had some of my own works published in literary magazines, I enjoyed this one very much, very well done!
 
Oh My!

Oh my! Girl that gave me chills! Whoa! Have more? I feel kind of naked now. This captures what I feel inside. I thought I was like totally alone
 
lol so women really don't like gentlemen huh? they like to be abused?

hehe. no wonder ive had bad luck with relationships. here i thought flowers and candy and romantic dinners and foot massages and stuff were nice things to do. guess i was waaaay off.

heh, mom, why did you steer me so wrong with teaching me that whole "when a girl says no" speil. ^.^
 
lol so women really don't like gentlemen huh? they like to be abused?

hehe. no wonder ive had bad luck with relationships. here i thought flowers and candy and romantic dinners and foot massages and stuff were nice things to do. guess i was waaaay off.

heh, mom, why did you steer me so wrong with teaching me that whole "when a girl says no" speil. ^.^
Personally, I love gentlemen, flowers, candy, romantic dinners, and so forth 😱
 
I love buying my ler flowers, candy, romantic dinners, and giving her massages and sweetness...and I love it just as much when she tortures the ever loving crap out of me as a way of saying thanks...😉
 
lol so women really don't like gentlemen huh? they like to be abused?
QUOTE]

Oh brother. Where did that come from? Some dudes just don't get what being taken means I guess. No abuse there at all. The gentlemen part came after, during aftercare, or so is implied. The great time leading up to can't be denied.
 
lol no i guess i dont kno what being taken means. not if it means the blowtorch treatment. hehe. but im pretty sure that fetish for it or no fetish for it, people would agree that burning someones soles with a blow torch, or with matches is a form of physical abuse. whether the person loves it or not is a diff story, but it is abuse. hence my question "like to be abused" hehe.

but yes, could someone please explain to me what being "taken" means then?
cuz i understood it to have a much different reason.
 
For the record, the concept of the torch has existed for thousands of years as a means for illumination through small contained fire, and not always as a means of cutting metal. n_n
 
correct me if im wrong, but in the poem didnt it say something about a torch and burning the soles?

and a couple lines after did it say something about matches under the toes?

lol im sorry if i misinterpreted it. could u please explain it to me then rather than yelling at me? im not trying to cause trouble i just simply dont get it is all.

Okay, the soles don't actually get burned. The actual fire never touches the skin. It's just put really close to the skin to heat the soles up.

This causes the lee pain, but it doesn't permanently harm her feet. It just temporarily makes them more pink or red.

Some lers do this to make their lee's feet more sensitive to touch. The touch that comes after could be tickling or something else.

Also, a hair dryer could be used in place of fire.

In the poem, bastinado was done first. Bastinado is spanking the soles of the feet with something, such as a wooden spoon, stick, leather, etc. Seconds comes the itching powder. Then her feet were roasted, meaning heated up by fire. Finally, her feet were tickled because all of those things before hand increase the sensitivity of the soles of the feet.



One more thing, if the lee is down with her feet being roasted, itching powder or bastinado, then I don't consider it abuse. If she likes it, wants its and receives it, then that isn't abuse. At least not in this situation.

And the poem was written well.
 
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I loved this poem and other's I've read of hers about varying bdsm subjects. It takes a woman to convey these feelings. I don't understand the slight controversy here, other than many guys simply don't understand the path to a womans mind in the game of bdsm and tickling.

This is a woman is obviously playing with a top of highly advanced abilities who knows that path well. Enjoy it for what it is, an expression of thanks
 
lol or it could be that maybe some of us just didnt understand the use of torch as it was explained.

it makes the poem rather different if there actually was a blowtorch in it as compared to the matches alone.

lol and please girls, dont go on about that whole "guys just dont understand a woman's mind" cuz girls dont understand a guy's mind either. ^.^
thats the whole point isnt it? to share both minds and become more even together? hehe.


i also think it prudent to point out that not all women feel exactly as the one who wrote this poem. (most of the women here do, yes) but then again we all share a certain fetish don't we? therefore its unfair to assume "guys just dont get girls!" if they dont get this poem. maybe the guy just doesnt get a girl who has this particular fetish.
i dont expect all girls to get me, hehe, because i kno i have a unique fetish myself.

as for the poem itself though, now that all that's cleared up, i thought it was enjoyable to read, and definitely an insight to this particular type of woman ^.^ (see above) which is better explained for those who have never really been in the situation. so it's very helpful, and right to the point!

however, as a poet, I do have to say I didn't find any detectable rhyme or meter (that isnt very very loose) although it appreared to try to be copying limmerick form, without having the exact syllable count. i feel that if a few edits were made to make all the syllables match it would be even more impressive.
 
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A number of argumentative posts from all parties have been deleted.

There have been some misunderstandings about terminology or BDSM philosophy, but there is no reason to let this become a flame war. Everybody has their likes and dislikes, and this forum should be large enough to accommodate all of us. Please keep all disagreements civil.
 
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WOnderful poem!! the mental imagery of being the one that recieved and inwardly craved the exact precise(?) actions described, actually clears up some past conversations i have had with those more into the BDSM lifestyle..........Excellent post, let the author know her thougts and baring them in the way that she did are greatly appreciated!
 
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