i also point out that not all women feel exactly as the one who wrote this poem. (most of the women here do, yes) but then again we all share a certain fetish don't we? therefore its unfair to assume "guys just dont get girls!" if they dont get this poem. maybe the guy just doesnt get a girl who has this particular fetish.
i dont expect all girls to get me, hehe, because i kno i have a unique fetish myself.
What unique fetish is that?
She wrote of headspace btw, which is not a fetish but an approach to playing. Just accept it for what it is, a creative outing which obviously touched a lot of people who agree with it: it needs no further explaination.
I feel that guys in general, maybe more prudent to say even the majority in tickling from those I've known, simply don't "get" headspace-- which is what that scene she was writing of was all about.
**I should also point out for Valerie and others that I've been there during that exact play, with the girl that wrote it, and no harm or damage or burning has ever come to happen to anyone. Not a mark. The male Top she's writing about would never allow it. Such is the wonder and the glory of true headspace where reality and fantasy blur so perfectly. He wrote the book on such safe play.
Yes, I do know guys, feather. I'm not saying that in a bad way. With guys it's all about the physical and visual with most of them. I find there are many more levels to play than just those two. I don't believe I'm unique in that feeling for all the women I know of in this scene and those in our inner circle feel the same way and came of it independently through their own paths without any influence from me, and have for centuries.
however, as a poet, I do have to say I didn't find any detectable rhyme or meter (that isnt very very loose) although it appreared to try to be copying limmerick form, without having the exact syllable count. i feel that if a few edits were made to make all the syllables match it would be even more impressive.
Oh brother! You just don't give up! Give it a rest will ya? What next? Claim you're a hairstylist and tell the Mona Lisa she needs a trim?
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only only edit I can see that would make this better would be to edit your negative posts out completely and just let people enjoy it for what it is.
I'm sorry your professional poet's delicate palette was bruised. It's not being a feminist to say I find her many works to be wonderful and totally unique, one of the very few by real women. If you'd like to offer better, please do as we'd all love to read it. Her goal was not to be a Longfellow but rather to write with passion and "capture a moment" (as she explained it) about what goes in inside a female's mind at the time,
or where a great Top can lead you if he has that talent. There's far more to playing than the usual one, two, three- TICKLE! This is one such expression. I feel she it that far better than anyone, especially the tickling parts, and the torments applied that in whole make one's soles even more ticklish (the goal of the torments in the first place).
I've had to swallow a huge "I told you so" from her. She told me what would happen if I posted this poem on TT- that some nut would attack it- and she was absolutely right. She has that edge of experience far over me and I admit I was naive to think any different. It's due to the negativity posts that she won't allow me to post any more of her works.
Hope you're happy. We'll look forward to reading
your poetic masterpieces now instead.
It also opened my eyes about TT as well. I can see that attempts like this in any form which are meant to share passions and expand one's levels of thinking about tickling are wasted here in this forum- another "I told you so" I'll have to swallow from a Top I know. So at this point I quit trying.
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