All Undone [MM/F]

[ReturnWithHonor]

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Words cannot convey.

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I am your new #1 fan 😀



In all seriousness though, I am absolutely BLOWN AWAY. I'm sure everyone has said what I'd want to say about it; completely different style, original set up, all that jazz. WELL THEY'RE RIGHT. It takes skills to write this kind of tale in first person, and you NAILED it. It must have been the use of inner voice and the sense of interaction with the reader, which is very hard to pull off. Well done, well done

 

[ticklebrowse26]

You described your feet as "bare to God soles" as they were being traumatized in your amazing story.

And I think you posted once about where to find UFC fights online.

AND you feed a cat in this story...

You're perfect.

 

[love feet]

cool.

 

[suikoden]

cool.

That's it?

 

[Marquis De Sade]

nice!

 

[suikoden]

Keep going!!.

 

[Marquis De Sade]

nice!!!!! keep going!!!! cool! great story! wow! loved it! so good!!!.

 

[suikoden]

Sorry, for stories you are allowed a maximum of three words and three exclamation points.

 

[love feet]

That's it?

its very good their needs to be a part 2!!!!

 

[SoundSiren]

Now I present for you: The Smiley Internal Monologue -Play by Play

cool.

😀

That's it?

nice!

Keep going!!.

nice!!!!! keep going!!!! cool! great story! wow! loved it! so good!!!.

Sorry, for stories you are allowed a maximum of three words and three exclamation points.

ILY guys!

 

[meangry]

This awesome story deserves a healthy bump.

 

[love feet]

that was very cool!

 

[Marquis De Sade]

My wife says Thanks for the bump. 🙂

 

[suikoden]

HULK BUMP STORY!