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Bounce Chix ORIGINS I New Release! 6/24/09 **HOT**

Having just finished reading this ambitious, spirited adventure, my own enthusiasm streaks to keep pace with the consensus: "Bounce Chix Origins I" is out of this world, in every sense! The ladies of your two mighty franchises (Bounce Chix and TIS) conquer the novel format with all the life-loving feistiness that graces their comix outings! And with so much more fertile territory at their disposal, depth and scope have become their new personal watchwords!

Andi, Hailey and Janey have always had a firm grasp on fun, funny, slap-happy attitude, a high-energy approach that serves them perfectly in the realm of talking illustrations, where momentum is ceaseless. "Temple of Bounce" and "Bounce of the Dragon" are rollicking sprints, for which all-out effort is essential (let the pace flag during a farce, and reader interest flags with it). 100+ pages of text, however, is a marathon, requiring carefully paced breathing space, a string of intriguing developments, fresh perspectives and increased gravitas... one rejoices to find that the daring Bandito's first installment of "Bounce Chix Origins" triumphs on all these fronts! Readers well familiar with his earlier Bounce and TIS adventures are in for countless pleasing twists and revelations, as the narrative barrels along, pauses to reassess, alters course and generally plays havoc with our expectations! The rather perfunctory Chix of the comix world (shot into action with such velocity that one must note their hair color to tell them apart) have been broadened into distinct and distinctive personalities. The novel format allows them to maintain the spunky confidence that fans expect and crave, but necessitates that they apply it against dire, threatening circumstances that test not only their energies but their attitudes. When Janey finds her friends in peril, she rages to protect; powerful bonds of reciprocal loyalty drive Andi and Hailey to abandon security and return the favor. Such examples of deeply felt concern flesh these figures from mere flawless bodies into complex personalities that earn our continuing attention. The Chix may not have begun to bounce yet, but one can clearly see the adhesive of complimentary skills and affection that will bind them into an iconic unit.

So much for the earthbound element of the equation... it's the aliens, of course, who offer up the lion's share of outre fascination! This we might naturally assume, but Deeto cunning sets snares for our expectations. All will recognize familiar faces in the mix... placing them at their stations may test one's equilibrium, though! Perhaps, along with the Chix, these creatures find themselves at the early stages of their careers (incubating juniors of the randy crew-members we know and love so well); the effect, though, resembles the disorienting refit some anime series adopt once they close their original storylines (as we've come to expect from Tenchi-Muyo, for instance). Its a sly tactic which allows us to savor fresh and vintage cake simultaneously... it's fun to track our favorite characters through reworked personas, while poorly regarded players may now impress anew! Should anyone crave further novelty, the ranks of Terran and off-worlder alike brim with virgin recruits!

Artwork (and there's plenty of it) has been allowed to bloom into highly refined, detailed portraiture. Comix requirements force pictures to assume storytelling function. Book illustrations eschew this; they reflect the preexisting action of the text, becoming self-contained entities. The story's characters, their faces having no need to shout out dialogue, lose their rubbery exaggeration. Poses aren't as arch or forced. Alternately, as attention can't be distracted by a bon mot, the viewer is less likely to forgive imperfections or visual shorthand. BCO's art answers the challenge masterfully! Linework is stunningly crisp! The elements of composition fill the frame effortlessly and never fail to direct the eye properly! Background detail is impressively lush, treating us to some of the most successful, beautiful settings in the Deeto repertoire! An attacked alien cityscape (page 43) bristles with ruined flourish as it basks in the heat of a double-star! A ship corridor (page 101) forces perspective with geometric perfection! Best of all, this series features some of the sweetest female faces in the history of fetish illustration! My personal favorite is a demuring Slither on page 37, but she finds easy rivals throughout the whole of the collection (a further surprise, a title page by the peerless Scavenger [page 117], provides wondrously sweaty contrasting character interpretation!) White Lotus likewise outdoes herself; her patented creamy-smooth skintones, in every conceivable hue, burn with ardor; flowing tresses shimmer with alluring silkiness; ship's conduit and plating dutifully dull themselves into non-competing secondary status while remaining distinct and credibly dimensional! A rim of gleaming backlight treats the aforementioned Slither to a halo of starlet glamour! Arcs of electricity discharge savage teasing glee as the air turns rich with ozone (page 91)! Brilliant lighting effects accentuate shipboard amour in its every mood, from playful to poisonous! Such delicate care can lure beauty even from sordid torture chambers!

Fetish action is as frequent and heavy-duty as any rabid fan could want, and is happily integral to the plot. Well-timed periods of respite allow the reader to catch his breath, while making way for the ongoing non-tickle developments that fuel much of the story's complexity. Even then, an incidental giggly goose or prod will sneak through for momentary thrill value... pennies like these pay richly as silver dollars when they turn up unexpected!

The title's prominent Roman numeral "I" will tip every reader that this is only the opening salvo of the laser barrage... part 2 has itself a handsome opening act, jammed full of mysteries and foreshadowed excitement! Already epic, the action only promises to grow hotter, in every respect! "Dune" may have its Fremen, "BCO" its Foxies... we'll see who has more fun!

Yet again you've crafted a masterpiece, my most excellent Deeto! Even more stunning to realize this is only a piece of a masterpiece... taken in toto, "Bounce Chix Origins" will be a work of weighty, daunting splendor! The vanilla crowd really needs to catch on soon... they have no idea what they're missing!
 
Ok, I finished it...*takes a deep breath*

I...its...I mean, like...how do you?...

Wow.

I know its kind of a cliche when somebody says they're speechless, and I know I myself have joked and said I was when I really wasn't...

But I'm serious. No joke. I can't think of anything to say right now other than "wow." I am totally, completely, unequivocally, at a loss for words.

When my tongue catches up with me, I'll give you a much better review. But for now...

*shakes head* Best work I've experienced. Period.
 
The laughing expressions are more realistic, and less goofy.

This is what it was. The change from insanely out of proportion bodies was pretty obvious, but the thing I couldnt put my finger on was this. 🙂
 
Ok went out and got this as soon as it came out, and all i can say is if you havent gotten it, GO GET IT, this may be Bandito and White Lotus, best work yet, that art is stunning, the color is breathtaking and the story is HOT! DAMN HOT. Its worth every penny. Trust me 😉
 
Bombers!

Do I really know what you think? Heck, does anyone?

But I can't wait to hear your thoughts on Origins.

You've got a copy, right?

The Deeto

You might... since you are the "sneaky" Bandito 😉

Can't wait to tell you my thoughts!

Yes of course! I've had a copy...I've only had the literary wonder and ONLY the literary for a very loooong time you see... A "sneaky" person had directed me to it's wonderfulness this time last summer and I'm left only to picture it all in my vast abstract imagination... RL is a greedy person who wanted all my time I'm afraid...

So where was I... ah yes... page 55!!!

🙂
 
Having just finished reading this ambitious, spirited adventure, my own enthusiasm streaks to keep pace with the consensus: "Bounce Chix Origins I" is out of this world, in every sense! The ladies of your two mighty franchises (Bounce Chix and TIS) conquer the novel format with all the life-loving feistiness that graces their comix outings! And with so much more fertile territory at their disposal, depth and scope have become their new personal watchwords!

Thank you so much, my good friend, for such a wonderful review! And my apologies for the delayed response. It has been a ridiculously eventful week.

I wasn't sure initially if a single novel would be big enough to fit in both the key characters from Tickling in Space, as well as the sexy and saucy Bounce Chix...needless to say I was right. LMAO. Working with both franchises in the same fictional realm was awesome...but it easily spilled into a double sized project.

Andi, Hailey and Janey have always had a firm grasp on fun, funny, slap-happy attitude, a high-energy approach that serves them perfectly in the realm of talking illustrations, where momentum is ceaseless. "Temple of Bounce" and "Bounce of the Dragon" are rollicking sprints, for which all-out effort is essential (let the pace flag during a farce, and reader interest flags with it). 100+ pages of text, however, is a marathon, requiring carefully paced breathing space, a string of intriguing developments, fresh perspectives and increased gravitas... one rejoices to find that the daring Bandito's first installment of "Bounce Chix Origins" triumphs on all these fronts! Readers well familiar with his earlier Bounce and TIS adventures are in for countless pleasing twists and revelations, as the narrative barrels along, pauses to reassess, alters course and generally plays havoc with our expectations! The rather perfunctory Chix of the comix world (shot into action with such velocity that one must note their hair color to tell them apart) have been broadened into distinct and distinctive personalities. The novel format allows them to maintain the spunky confidence that fans expect and crave, but necessitates that they apply it against dire, threatening circumstances that test not only their energies but their attitudes. When Janey finds her friends in peril, she rages to protect; powerful bonds of reciprocal loyalty drive Andi and Hailey to abandon security and return the favor. Such examples of deeply felt concern flesh these figures from mere flawless bodies into complex personalities that earn our continuing attention. The Chix may not have begun to bounce yet, but one can clearly see the adhesive of complimentary skills and affection that will bind them into an iconic unit.

I am so glad that the novel format is better suited to tell the full story behind the Chix. As fun as comics can be...I find my own to be too short, and fast paced to tell a real story (Something you continue to do exceedingly well with your matchless Low Roads series).

The illustrated novel format allows me to delve sooooooooooo much deeper into the unique personalities of each of the Chix. Make the reader tune into their thoughts, and their wonderful spirits. And it also allows me to tell a story infinitely deeper, more exciting, and more...involved, than I am able to do in a comic.

So much for the earthbound element of the equation... it's the aliens, of course, who offer up the lion's share of outre fascination! This we might naturally assume, but Deeto cunning sets snares for our expectations. All will recognize familiar faces in the mix... placing them at their stations may test one's equilibrium, though! Perhaps, along with the Chix, these creatures find themselves at the early stages of their careers (incubating juniors of the randy crew-members we know and love so well); the effect, though, resembles the disorienting refit some anime series adopt once they close their original storylines (as we've come to expect from Tenchi-Muyo, for instance). Its a sly tactic which allows us to savor fresh and vintage cake simultaneously... it's fun to track our favorite characters through reworked personas, while poorly regarded players may now impress anew! Should anyone crave further novelty, the ranks of Terran and off-worlder alike brim with virgin recruits!

I thought flushing out some of the TIS origins would be dreadfully fun and naughty, and at the same time, I wanted to introduce a whole entourage of new aliens.

From the venomous space pirate, Captain Blake...

To the tender and tantalizing Spadran crew mates...

Origins has characters to spare.

Artwork (and there's plenty of it) has been allowed to bloom into highly refined, detailed portraiture. Comix requirements force pictures to assume storytelling function. Book illustrations eschew this; they reflect the preexisting action of the text, becoming self-contained entities. The story's characters, their faces having no need to shout out dialogue, lose their rubbery exaggeration. Poses aren't as arch or forced. Alternately, as attention can't be distracted by a bon mot, the viewer is less likely to forgive imperfections or visual shorthand. BCO's art answers the challenge masterfully! Linework is stunningly crisp! The elements of composition fill the frame effortlessly and never fail to direct the eye properly! Background detail is impressively lush, treating us to some of the most successful, beautiful settings in the Deeto repertoire! An attacked alien cityscape (page 43) bristles with ruined flourish as it basks in the heat of a double-star! A ship corridor (page 101) forces perspective with geometric perfection! Best of all, this series features some of the sweetest female faces in the history of fetish illustration! My personal favorite is a demuring Slither on page 37, but she finds easy rivals throughout the whole of the collection (a further surprise, a title page by the peerless Scavenger [page 117], provides wondrously sweaty contrasting character interpretation!) White Lotus likewise outdoes herself; her patented creamy-smooth skintones, in every conceivable hue, burn with ardor; flowing tresses shimmer with alluring silkiness; ship's conduit and plating dutifully dull themselves into non-competing secondary status while remaining distinct and credibly dimensional! A rim of gleaming backlight treats the aforementioned Slither to a halo of starlet glamour! Arcs of electricity discharge savage teasing glee as the air turns rich with ozone (page 91)! Brilliant lighting effects accentuate shipboard amour in its every mood, from playful to poisonous! Such delicate care can lure beauty even from sordid torture chambers!

Thank you so much for your kind and generous words about the artwork. I personally feel like the pin up style allows Lotus and I to capture the hottest part of each sizzling tickle scene in all of its detail, intimacy, and ticklyness.

Comics are great, and I intend to do more of them...but this pin up style novel allows for an entirely different product. In which the reader gets both a gargantuan amount of tickling fiction, hotness, and action, as well as each illustration being so well refined, rather than teeny, boxed in, and cranked out.

Fetish action is as frequent and heavy-duty as any rabid fan could want, and is happily integral to the plot. Well-timed periods of respite allow the reader to catch his breath, while making way for the ongoing non-tickle developments that fuel much of the story's complexity. Even then, an incidental giggly goose or prod will sneak through for momentary thrill value... pennies like these pay richly as silver dollars when they turn up unexpected!

In Origins it's almost as if tickling itself takes over the entire crew. Before you know it, the mood has changed every where on board the ship. Tis isn't just the first story of the Bounce Chix chronology...it is the story that changes the characters. This is where they become the chix, where they develop this love hate relationship with tickling, and where they begin their erotic journey through life. 😛

The title's prominent Roman numeral "I" will tip every reader that this is only the opening salvo of the laser barrage... part 2 has itself a handsome opening act, jammed full of mysteries and foreshadowed excitement! Already epic, the action only promises to grow hotter, in every respect! "Dune" may have its Fremen, "BCO" its Foxies... we'll see who has more fun!

Oh number II is twice as climactic. I can't wait to release it.

**draws furiously**

Yet again you've crafted a masterpiece, my most excellent Deeto! Even more stunning to realize this is only a piece of a masterpiece... taken in toto, "Bounce Chix Origins" will be a work of weighty, daunting splendor! The vanilla crowd really needs to catch on soon... they have no idea what they're missing!

Again...thank you so very VERY much, my friend. Your feedback is so greatly appreciated, as is your incredible contributions to this community.

Your friend, always,

B
 
Ok, I finished it...*takes a deep breath*

I...its...I mean, like...how do you?...

Wow.

I know its kind of a cliche when somebody says they're speechless, and I know I myself have joked and said I was when I really wasn't...

But I'm serious. No joke. I can't think of anything to say right now other than "wow." I am totally, completely, unequivocally, at a loss for words.

When my tongue catches up with me, I'll give you a much better review. But for now...

*shakes head* Best work I've experienced. Period.

I know we talked about this a lot in private...but your feedback really does mean more to Lo Lo and I than we can articulate in verbs and adjectives and stuff.

lol.

Thanks my friend.

You're one in a million.

The Deet
 
Bandito wrote,

Thank you so much for your kind and generous words about the artwork. I personally feel like the pin up style allows Lotus and I to capture the hottest part of each sizzling tickle scene in all of its detail, intimacy, and ticklyness.

I agree with you about the pinup style. The art in this publication is absolutely gorgeous. Both you and Lotus deserve all the great feedback you have been getting. However that is only the half of it. The story sizzles and the writing as awesome as your art.

Bravo!

Jim
 
It took me sometime to come back being so busy, as I promised to return for a word or two (or ten), here it is:

When I read stories and e-zines like this, I can’t deny that you dig each characters in the story while thinking of the author at the same time. This is Bandito everywhere, acted upon by the created chicks in the story, which give me many impressions of him being full of life with all the merry naughtiness of all sort exploding in each intriguing characters alive in the story. It’s like a miracle on how the opposite gender could fabricate the grace and carriage of sexy ladies, giving full life and giggles of varying tones and intensity. I could feel each character, but one thing’s for sure, they are too sexy from crowning glory to azure glow. Very sophisticatedly chic chix! Bandito, are you going to convert me and get me start having crush on women now? Hahaha – because the women characters you created can make even the straightest woman drool for Christ’s sake!

You know that the ignition of the story starts boiling when the “engines” of the convertible stopped and the coyotes run amok to hide, a reader would assume a WHAM! The twist is however, different from what you expect… Being teleported with all the lights and colors that go with it will make you imagine what “doom” lies ahead… Oh my, what torment awaits? It’s all too good to be punished like that. I might as well wish for my own abduction as well.

As for the way of delivering the words, I am impressed by Bandito’s exploitation of the English adjectives – the thesaurus had been ripped to the last drip for sure and it dried in itself being fully used. Don’t worry, it will regenerate with a smile. I love the way each episode and situations were put into words with such cleverness. Bandito’s passion for this e-zine is showing thru! I could almost imagine the energy and the (assumed) times he surely sacrificed some sleepy bouts because of the excitement of getting this material on board… and of course the mischievous expression and tireless brainstorming with his team mate, WhiteLotus.

Kudos to you both! This is a great publication. When this kind of creativity gets to the surface, the kink just transcends to meaningful heights! It benefits the rest of us who continue this creative pursuit.
 
Bombers: lmao - no worries, amigo. Look forward to chatting with ya about it once you finish it. ^^

SteelJaw: Ha ha ha...thanks so much my friend. I always really really appreciate your input, and your support. You rock.

Jim: Thanks my friend. Lotus and I truly appreciate all of your amazing help.

Bohy: Thank you so much for the kind words, and for returning after reading through origins to comment on your thoughts on the novel. Your feedback means a lot to me. One of my hidden goals of creating the Bounce Chix is to bring out your gay side and get you to fall in love with Andi, Jane, and Hailey. LMAO

Seriously, your comments are very much appreciated. Thank you very very much.

Everyone: Thank you all so much for making Bounce Chix Origins such a crazy success. I really do appreciate all the feedback SO much, and to all of you who spent your hard earned cash to pick up a copy, thank you so very much for the support, and I hope it was worth every penny.

Lotus and I are hard at work on Bounce Chix Origins II, as well as a few other secret projects. Stay tuned.

And thanks again for everything.

The Deet
 
Deet, you already know everything I feel about this and both of you guys. Thank you for everything. Best of luck. 😉
 
I have finally gotten something to purchase TOS and this. I will give a review when I get time to see them. I fear I may be disappointed...that I will not get disappointed.:lol
 
Dave: Thanks man, I really appreciate it. ^^;

Dae: Hey thanks so much for the support, my friend. I really really hope you love them both. Inosaka's Paradox is such an awesome epic from the terribly talented Scavenger and I feel very confident saying that you'll really dig it. And Origins has definitely been one of the most enjoyable projects I have ever worked on.

Please let Lotus and I know what you think of both.

Thanks again to everyone for making Bounce Chix Origins so successful.

^^

deeto
 
Wow Deet, your linework has become even better, and it looks great. I wept silently as I saw that front cover; That's what the Fox Sisiters should look like.

I will hopefully purchase this epic quite soon, given that my own comic is nearing it's end.

I will give you a full appraisal when I read it.

It looks damn sexy from here, friend.
 
Wow Deet, your linework has become even better, and it looks great. I wept silently as I saw that front cover; That's what the Fox Sisiters should look like.

I will hopefully purchase this epic quite soon, given that my own comic is nearing it's end.

I will give you a full appraisal when I read it.

It looks damn sexy from here, friend.

Thanks so much my good friend. As one of my favorite tickle artists...your feedback on Origins really means a lot to me.

I can't wait to hear your thoughts on this latest Bounce Chix adventure. You rock, Kitch.

And regarding the Fox sisters...trust me, they look perfect just the way that they are. Thanks for the very kind words, my friend.

^^;

B
 
Loved it loved it loved it.

Lots of hot tickling scenes, particularly the scene with Hailey and Thompson; You describe breasts so well, i felt my tongue starting to move LOL!. I really like the depth you've gifted these girls with, and although I think Andi is adorable, I like Hailey; the idea of her having those magnificent boobs, yet she's all coy about guys touching them because they're so sensitive! I can just imagine the anticipation of wiggling fingers inches away from her chest. She's inspired me to perhaps draw a tribute piece featuring her and Lucy. Your art style has changed into something more naturalistic and those pictures are really erotic.

Sorry it's taken so long to give you feedback, but I wanted to read it all.
 
Loved it loved it loved it.

Lots of hot tickling scenes, particularly the scene with Hailey and Thompson; You describe breasts so well, i felt my tongue starting to move LOL!. I really like the depth you've gifted these girls with, and although I think Andi is adorable, I like Hailey; the idea of her having those magnificent boobs, yet she's all coy about guys touching them because they're so sensitive! I can just imagine the anticipation of wiggling fingers inches away from her chest. She's inspired me to perhaps draw a tribute piece featuring her and Lucy. Your art style has changed into something more naturalistic and those pictures are really erotic.

Sorry it's taken so long to give you feedback, but I wanted to read it all.

Thanks so much, Kitch.

As you know, I am a raving fan of your work...so such kind feedback means a great deal to me.

Also so nice to know your favorite scene. I must admit that I would absolutely love the chance to be in Thompson's shoes for THAT particular moment of the novel. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Naturally a tribute piece would be more than wonderful! The thought of those two together...topless...is enough to make me want to spend some time at the drawing table right now! LOL.

Thanks so much for your friendship, support, and amazing feedback. Lotus and I are putting the finishing touches on Origins II as we speak, and I hope to have some new stuff to share with everyone very soon.

You're awesome, Kitch.

Thanks for everything.

B
 
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