C.A.B. Presents ~ CEEN. Chapter One "Predation" (M/f, Adult Content, Nudity)

[smoothacer409]

AHHH... Very clever sir. As a self proclaimed "Gamer" who has made many heads go "pop" I should has guessed.

 

[Garfield1]

Great work as usual. Even more exciting if possible! But i don't think the little bitch can save the world, probably she is going to be tickled on her sexy feet mercilessly, sooner or later 😉

G.

 

[Bohemianne]

It’s been such a unique story-telling and concept. It’ll make you think how one could have sequenced the panels by creating a vast and organized dystopian wasteland. Wits play a big role in all this. And perhaps it spells like…C.A.B (???) with all those DYS-TYPOS… >>> *&^%$#@!! Hehehe It’s been bloody “vocabularic.” See how The Deet has been carried away by it… like I almost am.

 

[C.A.B.]

I enjoyed the thought that was put into the propaganda posters. Very strongly based on the Stalin era Soviet designs? Slogans are very ryandian. Good detail work.

Myriads

Yes. The Soviet Machine under Stalin understood the value of mass graphics in propaganda. Used extensively before by both the red communist movement and the nazis, but perfected under Stalin for his cult of personality. Other historical knock-offs of this technique include Mao, Pol Pot, Fidel Castro and Che Guevara, Kim il sung and (more extensively) his heir, Kim Jong Il, Saddam Hussein, ...and even seen here in the prolific 2008 ubiquitous "Hope and Change" series, which, interestingly, retro-graphically adheres to the same art deco block print look.

Wow! This is amazingly well-done! I wanted to be a "Fedcop"...until I seen what happened to that guy, lol.

I'm sure your application to Great Father would still be considered, should you change your mind. Thanks Mr.thetickle

good work!

FUN WORK! real work... works for you! works for me! ... ... I don't know but I've been TOLD ... Eskimo pussy is mighty cold... sound off! one two

I hope that I may infer from your reply to milagros317 that you plan to create some intense f/m bondage tickling and erotic teasing art, either in the Ceen universe or in any other.

Oh now it wouldn't be any fun if I tattled would it? Thanks K.

Excellent gritty artwork.

Thanks Rajee!

Damn, Awesome! I love the amount of work you put in the background, impressive 🙂

I appreciate that Aragorn. Thank you.

C.A.B. you have once again displayed your talent for brilliant artwork and storytelling! It is very difficult to create an alternate reality with its own history, social structure, and language, but you have pulled it off extremely well. And in the midst of all of this great work lurks a haunting prophetic and cautionary tale. Well done!

"...and if you're not careful, you might learn something before it's done." —Bill Cosby. Thank you again BAT, for your erudite commentary.

Classic...gj.

Thanks guys!

Great work as usual. Even more exciting if possible! But i don't think the little bitch can save the world, probably she is going to be tickled on her sexy feet mercilessly, sooner or later 😉

G.

"Freedom is a Bitch" ... I can't wait to see what happens next, myself.

It’s been such a unique story-telling and concept. It’ll make you think how one could have sequenced the panels by creating a vast and organized dystopian wasteland. Wits play a big role in all this. And perhaps it spells like…C.A.B (???) with all those DYS-TYPOS… >>> *&^%$#@!! Hehehe It’s been bloody “vocabularic.” See how The Deet has been carried away by it… like I almost am.

Try to DYStence yourself from deets penchant for falling headlong into quagmires of obvious pun. People are trying to eat. BO IN DA HOUSE!

 

[The Bandito]

You meant to say "episphincter" didn't you?

Ha ha ha! Who's under investigation for misuse of the clever word-play quotient now? XD

That's quite true. Having chosen to forgo any narration boxes and let the story unfold by character interaction, I thought it would feel more intimate, more voyeuristic, on the part of the viewer. However, Ceen's diary will be an ongoing device to cement our relationship with her. But it is difficult to get the back-story in just illustration unless I multiplied the panels by 10... but I have to sleep on occasion.

I've never been able to get it right. But you seem to do a great job with it. Creating an interesting backstory, or even plot devices within a comic format has always been a real challenge for me. It's one of the reasons I started to dabble in the illustrated novels - just so I could add the amount of depth to my stories that I desired.

So far Ceen does a pretty fantastic job of giving depth to the environment and characters while still keeping a brisk comic pace. Kudos to you.

Ceen's tickle torture was downplayed, not because I am merciful, but because I am a sadistic sonavabitch and I know it will only have viewers clambering for more later. As for your well-established Alan Alda-ean lust to perv feminine retribution scenarios... obviously your a sick sick fucker. SICK! Seek help.

You wicked tease, you! 😉 I'm sure you will have the desperate masses panting in anticipation. And LMAO at Alan Alda. Only if you agree to be Winchester. Hee hee hee.

Truth be told I actually have the opposite reaction. I go into a rage worthy of a modern Bud White when I encounter certain scenarios. In the spirit of full disclosure (lest my puckish comments ever seem snarky) I'm a child of rape, and grew up in quite the violent environment. So rape-ish scenarios and true torture scenes can on occasion trigger a visceral fury on my part to defend the victim and beat the tormentor half to death.

That's not a commentary on your art at all. Your work explores a very dark side of our fetish - and I fully and whole-heartedly support your right and desire to do so. But it might explain my reactions a bit when I rally behind Ceen and her phoenix-like retribution of the tortured victims. That's one of the best things about the series, right? That it can include both the torture as well as the vengeance.

Probably too much information. But...thought I should throw it out there.

The FedCops have asked me to inform you that you are well past your "clever word-play quotient" for this year and ask that you commit yourself to the nearest "Reader Sensitivity Training Center."

Don't judge me. I must obey the inscrutable exhortations of my soul. If the Fed Cops wanna tangle. They know where to find me. rofl.

I look very forward to seeing Ceen pop some heads.

Nice work, Mr. Crunchy...

Nice work indeed,

B

 

[C.A.B.]

Ceen does a pretty fantastic job of giving depth to the environment and characters while still keeping a brisk comic pace. Kudos to you.

Thank you, The Bandito

 

[aaaschiavo]

I was waiting for this chapter...useless to say that I like the way you draw (already told).
I see (tell me if I'm right) that you are keeping the "tickling on female" scenes very...gradual. I mean , I like it, you don't have to waste all the tension in the first chapter.
Like a skilled music composer, you have to begin the song very softly, to get curiosity from the reader.
I don't know what you have in mind for her...but, since she is a heroine it would be great to show her strenght, before the capture.
This to enhance the contrast between her physical strenght and the ...cold technology with restraints, chains, stun tons, ecc..

 

[augustine]

I love it. Everything from concept, dialogue to composition is brilliant. I am always struck by the excellent expressions you give your characters. Thanks for sharing this and I look forward to more.

 

[C.A.B.]

I was waiting for this chapter...useless to say that I like the way you draw (already told).
I see (tell me if I'm right) that you are keeping the "tickling on female" scenes very...gradual. I mean , I like it, you don't have to waste all the tension in the first chapter.
Like a skilled music composer, you have to begin the song very softly, to get curiosity from the reader.
I don't know what you have in mind for her...but, since she is a heroine it would be great to show her strenght, before the capture.
This to enhance the contrast between her physical strenght and the ...cold technology with restraints, chains, stun tons, ecc..

Great observations. Thank you, Sir.

I love it. Everything from concept, dialogue to composition is brilliant. I am always struck by the excellent expressions you give your characters. Thanks for sharing this and I look forward to more.

Thank you. I appreciate that, Aug.

 

[Bohemianne]

Late than never... Here's the Mirror site update...

Because it's much deserved.

 

[C.A.B.]

Late than never... Here's the Mirror site update...

Because it's much deserved.

Much obliged, colleague of the fetish!

 

[CrystalLight]

First of all; I totally want a Fedcop Jacket/Trench. That just looks badass.

Second of all; I most enjoyed the 'turn about is fair play' angle you went for. Helpless woman.. turned total BAD ASS BITCH.

Made me tingle, it did.

 

[sporelord]

Feel like I'm a little late to the party with offering kudos on this one, but better late...
Well bloody done! She's beautiful, both in and out of her disguise. I think I might be a little bit in love here...
Looking forward to reading more of this.

 

[C.A.B.]

First of all; I totally want a Fedcop Jacket/Trench. That just looks badass.

Second of all; I most enjoyed the 'turn about is fair play' angle you went for. Helpless woman.. turned total BAD ASS BITCH.

Made me tingle, it did.

...bad... ******ass.

bad .... .... .... ass.

Feel like I'm a little late to the party with offering kudos on this one, but better late...
Well bloody done! She's beautiful, both in and out of her disguise. I think I might be a little bit in love here...
Looking forward to reading more of this.

Nonsense... its ALWAYS a great pleasure to hear from you, Spore. I look forward to it.

 

[kirk2000]

C.A.B. I cannot wait to see where this is going! I'm so excited to see the rest of it!

 

[achillesheelart]

Aw, you finally get a guy tied up and he gets violated by a glowstick? 🙂

Clearly, that was a f/m tickle revenge opportunity.

Achilles

 

[Fetish Affairs]

You are the best tickle artiste meen eyes even seen

 

[C.A.B.]

C.A.B. I cannot wait to see where this is going! I'm so excited to see the rest of it!

Neither can i!!!!

Aw, you finally get a guy tied up and he gets violated by a glowstick? 🙂

Clearly, that was a f/m tickle revenge opportunity.

Achilles

AC, Geez man, gimme a break... I'm gettin' there. I'm tryin!!!! Lulz!

You are the best tickle artiste meen eyes even seen

Be careful of those alliterations, you might pull something. Thanks DAF, YOOOOOOOOOOOOOO rock!

 

[Bohemianne]

To the CEENsatiable/s out there...