Dancing On the Edge of Insanity

[cloudgazer2k]

to be honest...i was unsure what to think. the way the story is put together reminded me of "The House of Leaves" in terms of the way the story was told. i do have to admit, though...i am intrigued and will have to put off reading part 2 until later...but i am very much impressed with this.

p.s.: do me a favor and drop me a line when you have a moment. i sense a possible collaboration in the future.

 

[theObsessed1]

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[theObsessed1]

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[theObsessed1]

Dancing on the Edge of Insanity - Part 3

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[theObsessed1]

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[isabeau]

wow super fantastic..so very well-written, and with a plot..i'm not sure about you, but teeth can tickle the soles of the feet extremely badly..lol..but please don't tell me this is the end? who was that Santa? could it have been the doctor? i must know...i demand it lolol...

keep up the good work..

 

[slap'n'ticklee]

Well, well...

My God Hazel you are a fantastic writer. I have now read all Parts to this amazing story and everyone's comments.

I was spellbound reading this and like everyone here I really look forward to reading more.

You are very talented in drawing the reader in... I love that style.

 

[theObsessed1]

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[cloudgazer2k]

great work, hazel. this is something you have thought about for awhile.

 

[theObsessed1]

this is something you have thought about for awhile.

Only my entire life! Glad you're enjoying it.

 

[AffectionateDan]

OutSTANDing read! Best writing I've read in here in a long while!

 

[theObsessed1]

Wow! Thanks, hon!

 

[theObsessed1]

Dancing on the Edge of Insanity - Part 4

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[theObsessed1]

Hazel

 

[isabeau]

hmm well for one thing..wow were there surprises in this installment..first of all, Hank isn't real???? second of all, they are giving her meds to prevent her from feeling sensations? and last but not least, she was married? and he said he would wait? and didn't? what a creep...hmm i think she should escape and have further torments down the road..ok what am i saying? am i a sadistic bitch? she has been through so much, i'm not sure she should have to be put through anymore..

excellent installment..love this concept..talk about originality..o and hon..sorry about you being sick..get well soon...

 

[theObsessed1]

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[slap'n'ticklee]

Well I've been drawn in again, excellent work Hazel 😛

I love the uncertainty and the surprises with the story's twists and turns... for me I love the unexpected, I shall wait and read what the next instalment shall bring

 

[theObsessed1]

Thanks, hon! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

 

[theObsessed1]

Part 5 will be up either later tonight or tomorrow, just to give people a heads up.

 

[theObsessed1]

Dancing on the Edge of Insanity - Part 5

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[isabeau]

damn that girl gets tickling no matter where she is..imagine escaping and running into video makes, who are making tickle videos..sort of a dream come true..hmm and poor Hank..i mean if Hank is real, that is..this series just gets better and better..fantastic job...keeps me wondering what on earth is in store for her next..

 

[theObsessed1]

 

[slap'n'ticklee]

Aw I'm with Mel poor Hank (if he exists lol 😉)

I think I'm going insane reading this... its taking me in deeper and deeper... love reading this epic.... love to see what happens next and if she does escape or if she loves it that much, does she stay and be their tickle slave for ever more and acting in the videos hehe!

 

[theObsessed1]

 

[theObsessed1]

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