Omg you make such amazing f/m images!!! ����
If you are still looking for someone to assist with the English language version pm me, there were a few phrases where I am not at all sure what you meant haha (particularly "you would have suffered because you were not raped by us before?" Is very confusing in what you meant there ��
Also the way you use the word "forgive"... I'm not sure if you understand it correctly. "Forgive" means to accept someone's apology for something they had done wrong, or to stop being angry or resentful over something they did.
However it seems more like you're confusing "forgive" with "mercy" or being merciful or compassionate. "They will not show mercy if you complain how painful it is.". Does this make more sense than "They will not forgive you if you complain how painful it is"??