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Short story. Wrote it foreverrrr and a day ago for a friend.
I used to love writing. hah ... I know this is dumb, but oh well!
I was at my grandfather's farm up in the country. I had decided to spend some time away from my family and the city-life and go visit. It was so peaceful down there. My grandfather works on the farm so he was busy all day out in the fields. My grandmother had passed away a few years ago so I think thats why my grandfather worked all day...just to be able to get his mind off things. I didn't mind not having very much company while I was there. I would usually sit on a bench outside and read. It was so relaxing.
Today was just like anyother day on the farm. I woke up at dawn or so because of the rooster and also farm noises. I stretched and heard dishes rattling dowstairs. I slipped into some shorts and a tank-top and threw on some flip-flops. As I headed down the old wooden stairs I put my hair into a pony tail and put sunglasses on my dark brunette hair.
I made a left from the staircase and entered into the kitchen where my grandfather was cooking bacon and eggs. I poured a glass of orange juice for myself and sat down at the table. Two seconds later my grandfather plopped two pieces of bacon on my plate and an egg. I wasn't too hungry that morning, so I didn't really it much of it. Shortly, my grandfather sat down across from me and started to eat. There was a few minutes of silence and then after my grandfather gulped down all his milk in one drink he said, "Nikki, today I've hired a boy to help me work on the farm."
"Oh really?" I replied. "That's good, I could see you needed some help."
"Yes, and I just wanted you to know so you didn't see some stange man wandering about the farm."
I laughed and nodded my head.
The converstation ended and my grandfather put on his hat and snapped his overalls and headed out. On his way out he said, "So when he comes, tell him where I'm at."
I told him ok and then started putting the dishes in the sink. After that I headed outside, took off my shoes, and layed in the grass and opened up my book to where I had last read.Not another 10 minutes had passed when a red truck pulled into the gravel driveway and out hopped a boy about my age. He looked around and spotted me.
He walked over and reached out his hand to shake mine and said, "Hey, I'm Bryan. I'm here to help a...Mr. Daniel---uhh I'm sorry I can't pronounce his last name."
"Oh that's ok. He's out over there," I replied pointing over towards a corn field.
"Alright. Thank you ma'am. Hey, do you think I could get a glass of water before I head out over there? It's really hot out today."
"Of course. I'll get it for you."
As we headed inside the house Bryan's hand brushed against my arm and I jumped because I'm extremely ticklish everywhere and even the slightest touch makes me laugh. Bryan saw that I jumped and asked what happened.
"Oh, I'm just ticklish..like everywhere..and your hand touched my arm and it just made me jump."
"You're ticklish?"
I shook my head and laughed. We soon finally reached the kitchen and I got down a cup and turned on the faucet. As the water was coming Bryan came from behind me and poked me side. I jumped and laughed. I turned around and saw him laughing and said, "Man, you really are!"
"Well, how about you, Bryan?" I asked as I came closer to him wiggling my fingers. He started to back away.
"You--You don't wanna go there..I'm stronger than you!"
I laughed and poked his side with one hand and held his glass of water in the other. He jumped back and laughed. I laughed because he didn't look so strong then! I handed him his water and he smiled and left to go find my grandfather.
The day went on like that. Bryan and I would play little tickle games with each other. First, I was falling asleep on the bench and Bryan comes over and grabs my feet and holds them down and tickles them until I couldn't laugh anymore! The only reason he stopped was because my grandfather came over. Another time Bryan was out in the field and he was taking a drink of water when I came from behind him and tickled his sides and he was so surprised he squirted his water out and fell to the ground. I jumped on top of him and started tickling his sides. I swear he almost pissed his pants and he was begging me to stop and I heard my grandfather coming so I laughed and said, "Gotcha back!" and ran back into the house.
At lunch time we all sat at the table. The table was a square, so Bryan was across from me and my grandfather was in the middle. I had my legs crossed and my flip-flop on my right foot was just hanging there and soon I felt someone kick it off. I smiled and looked at Bryan and he smiled back. I bent my head under the table to put my flip-flop back on and at the same time Bryan drops his fork under the table. He crawls under the table to get it and grabs my foot and starts tickling it non-stop. It took all of me to hold in my laughing, but when he wouldn't stop I just bursted out laughing and pulled my foot away. My grandfather was pretty old, so he was confused about what was going on and what was so funny. I lied and told him that Bryan had hit his head on the table, and the rest of the day he was pretty suspicious.
Everytime I would go outside my grandfather would never leave Bryan's side. It was pretty funny. I could see why he was so worried about this though. My grandfather didn't want Bryan to have any distractions while working on the farm because he strict about working.
Later that night about 9 my grandfather had to make a few errands for the farm and some grocery shopping. He asked Bryan to stay here with me until he came back so I wouldn't have to be alone. The store is hours away since my grandfather lives in the country so it was going to be a while and Bryan and I both knew what was going to happen.
My grandfather left. I was sitting on a couch in the t.v room watching T.V and Bryan was sitting in a chair watching T.V also. I looked at him and he looked at me. I pulled my feet under me and he smiled.
A few minutes later Bryan broke the silence and said, "You know I could tickle you right now!"
I laughed and said, "Well, I could tickle you right now!"
We both went back to watching the television and 5 minutes later Bryan got up and sat down on the couch next to me. I looked and him and moved farther away and smiled. He just looked at me and raised his eyebrow and went back to watching T.V. and so did I. Two seconds later he quickly grabs my foot from under me and holds it so I can't move it or get lose.
"Wait! Wait Bryan this isn't fair! I didn't get a chance to do anything!" I begged him and tried to pull my foot free.
"Oh, you had plenty of chances!" He takes his finger and runs it up and down my foot. I started laughing non-stop and trying to pull his hands away.He stopped and smiled and taunted by keeping his fingers right by my foot.
"Ok--haha--ok listen! Just listen..." I kept saying that until I sat up and quickly stretched my arm and poked his side. His grip instanly went away and I pulled my foot away and I jumped on him and started tickling his sides and stomach.
"Hahahaha--nooo pleeeeaseeehehe hahaha," Bryan kept laughing and couldn't take it! He was so helpless. I turned around and started to untie his shoes figuring he couldn't do anything since he was laughing too much. But, he grabbed my foot and started tickling it! I fell and was laying stomach down on his legs and kept untying his right shoe until I finally got it off and pulled off his sock and started tickling it all over.
"Oook hahahahah hehe wait!!" He stopped tickling my foot and I stopped tickling his. "We've haha..both got each other trapped here." Bryan was holding my foot and I was ontop of him and I had his foot.
"If you tickle me, I'm gonna tickle you!" I replied.
"I'll let you go, if you let me go. On the count of of 3--1...2...3!" Bryan let go of me and I sat up and sat on his legs and held his feet down and I took off his other shoe. "HEY! You were suppose to let go!"
I laughed and started tracing my finger around his foot. "Oh this can't be tickling the strong Bryan, now can it?" I started to wiggle all 10 fingers of his foot and he went crazy.
He laughed until he almost couldn't breathe anymore. He was so weak! "Hhahahah pleeeaseee nooo moreee hahaha iiii---cantt hahah takeee thisss hehehahaha!"
I kept tickling both his feet until he had tears in his eyes. Then, I started to slow down and just run my fnger up and down his left foot ever so gently. "Welp, Bryan. I think I win now, don't I?"
"haha...ooh you'll never hehe haha wiiin hehe!"
"You do realize I have you under complete control right now, don't you?" I sped up and started tickling his foot with five fingers quickly and all over his foot.
"YESSSHEHEHE HAHA! YOUUU HAHAHA WIIIINNN HAHAHA!"
Laughed and started going slow again. "I should just do this until my grandfather gets home. Although, I think you would be dead by then!" I turned around and looked at him. He had tears in his eyes and was laughing still. I let go of his foot and started sliding my fingers up and down his side.
He started laughing histarically again and then out of no where he poked my sides. I shrieked and tried to pull his hands down. Somehow, he managed to find strength and started tickling my sides.
"Nooo--noo hahahahaha youuu hehehe can'ttttthahaha!" I laughed and to get away I fell to the ground and started to crawl away but he followed and grabbed me and turned me around and held my arms up over my head with one hand and then started to tickle my stomach!
Just then we heard a car turn into the driveway. Bryan stopped and gave me one last tickle and grabbed his shoes and quickly put them on. I dived onto the couch and pretended to be asleep. A few seconds later my grandfather walked into the door with groceries. Bryan ofered to help, and I still pretended to be asleep. I heard my grandfather say he had to use the bathroom and that he thanked Bryan and said he would see him tomorrow. I heard the bathroom door close and Bryan walking towards me.
"Just a reminder of my payback!" And he grabbed my foot and started to lightly tickle it until he heard the toilet flush and then he left.
I used to love writing. hah ... I know this is dumb, but oh well!
I was at my grandfather's farm up in the country. I had decided to spend some time away from my family and the city-life and go visit. It was so peaceful down there. My grandfather works on the farm so he was busy all day out in the fields. My grandmother had passed away a few years ago so I think thats why my grandfather worked all day...just to be able to get his mind off things. I didn't mind not having very much company while I was there. I would usually sit on a bench outside and read. It was so relaxing.
Today was just like anyother day on the farm. I woke up at dawn or so because of the rooster and also farm noises. I stretched and heard dishes rattling dowstairs. I slipped into some shorts and a tank-top and threw on some flip-flops. As I headed down the old wooden stairs I put my hair into a pony tail and put sunglasses on my dark brunette hair.
I made a left from the staircase and entered into the kitchen where my grandfather was cooking bacon and eggs. I poured a glass of orange juice for myself and sat down at the table. Two seconds later my grandfather plopped two pieces of bacon on my plate and an egg. I wasn't too hungry that morning, so I didn't really it much of it. Shortly, my grandfather sat down across from me and started to eat. There was a few minutes of silence and then after my grandfather gulped down all his milk in one drink he said, "Nikki, today I've hired a boy to help me work on the farm."
"Oh really?" I replied. "That's good, I could see you needed some help."
"Yes, and I just wanted you to know so you didn't see some stange man wandering about the farm."
I laughed and nodded my head.
The converstation ended and my grandfather put on his hat and snapped his overalls and headed out. On his way out he said, "So when he comes, tell him where I'm at."
I told him ok and then started putting the dishes in the sink. After that I headed outside, took off my shoes, and layed in the grass and opened up my book to where I had last read.Not another 10 minutes had passed when a red truck pulled into the gravel driveway and out hopped a boy about my age. He looked around and spotted me.
He walked over and reached out his hand to shake mine and said, "Hey, I'm Bryan. I'm here to help a...Mr. Daniel---uhh I'm sorry I can't pronounce his last name."
"Oh that's ok. He's out over there," I replied pointing over towards a corn field.
"Alright. Thank you ma'am. Hey, do you think I could get a glass of water before I head out over there? It's really hot out today."
"Of course. I'll get it for you."
As we headed inside the house Bryan's hand brushed against my arm and I jumped because I'm extremely ticklish everywhere and even the slightest touch makes me laugh. Bryan saw that I jumped and asked what happened.
"Oh, I'm just ticklish..like everywhere..and your hand touched my arm and it just made me jump."
"You're ticklish?"
I shook my head and laughed. We soon finally reached the kitchen and I got down a cup and turned on the faucet. As the water was coming Bryan came from behind me and poked me side. I jumped and laughed. I turned around and saw him laughing and said, "Man, you really are!"
"Well, how about you, Bryan?" I asked as I came closer to him wiggling my fingers. He started to back away.
"You--You don't wanna go there..I'm stronger than you!"
I laughed and poked his side with one hand and held his glass of water in the other. He jumped back and laughed. I laughed because he didn't look so strong then! I handed him his water and he smiled and left to go find my grandfather.
The day went on like that. Bryan and I would play little tickle games with each other. First, I was falling asleep on the bench and Bryan comes over and grabs my feet and holds them down and tickles them until I couldn't laugh anymore! The only reason he stopped was because my grandfather came over. Another time Bryan was out in the field and he was taking a drink of water when I came from behind him and tickled his sides and he was so surprised he squirted his water out and fell to the ground. I jumped on top of him and started tickling his sides. I swear he almost pissed his pants and he was begging me to stop and I heard my grandfather coming so I laughed and said, "Gotcha back!" and ran back into the house.
At lunch time we all sat at the table. The table was a square, so Bryan was across from me and my grandfather was in the middle. I had my legs crossed and my flip-flop on my right foot was just hanging there and soon I felt someone kick it off. I smiled and looked at Bryan and he smiled back. I bent my head under the table to put my flip-flop back on and at the same time Bryan drops his fork under the table. He crawls under the table to get it and grabs my foot and starts tickling it non-stop. It took all of me to hold in my laughing, but when he wouldn't stop I just bursted out laughing and pulled my foot away. My grandfather was pretty old, so he was confused about what was going on and what was so funny. I lied and told him that Bryan had hit his head on the table, and the rest of the day he was pretty suspicious.
Everytime I would go outside my grandfather would never leave Bryan's side. It was pretty funny. I could see why he was so worried about this though. My grandfather didn't want Bryan to have any distractions while working on the farm because he strict about working.
Later that night about 9 my grandfather had to make a few errands for the farm and some grocery shopping. He asked Bryan to stay here with me until he came back so I wouldn't have to be alone. The store is hours away since my grandfather lives in the country so it was going to be a while and Bryan and I both knew what was going to happen.
My grandfather left. I was sitting on a couch in the t.v room watching T.V and Bryan was sitting in a chair watching T.V also. I looked at him and he looked at me. I pulled my feet under me and he smiled.
A few minutes later Bryan broke the silence and said, "You know I could tickle you right now!"
I laughed and said, "Well, I could tickle you right now!"
We both went back to watching the television and 5 minutes later Bryan got up and sat down on the couch next to me. I looked and him and moved farther away and smiled. He just looked at me and raised his eyebrow and went back to watching T.V. and so did I. Two seconds later he quickly grabs my foot from under me and holds it so I can't move it or get lose.
"Wait! Wait Bryan this isn't fair! I didn't get a chance to do anything!" I begged him and tried to pull my foot free.
"Oh, you had plenty of chances!" He takes his finger and runs it up and down my foot. I started laughing non-stop and trying to pull his hands away.He stopped and smiled and taunted by keeping his fingers right by my foot.
"Ok--haha--ok listen! Just listen..." I kept saying that until I sat up and quickly stretched my arm and poked his side. His grip instanly went away and I pulled my foot away and I jumped on him and started tickling his sides and stomach.
"Hahahaha--nooo pleeeeaseeehehe hahaha," Bryan kept laughing and couldn't take it! He was so helpless. I turned around and started to untie his shoes figuring he couldn't do anything since he was laughing too much. But, he grabbed my foot and started tickling it! I fell and was laying stomach down on his legs and kept untying his right shoe until I finally got it off and pulled off his sock and started tickling it all over.
"Oook hahahahah hehe wait!!" He stopped tickling my foot and I stopped tickling his. "We've haha..both got each other trapped here." Bryan was holding my foot and I was ontop of him and I had his foot.
"If you tickle me, I'm gonna tickle you!" I replied.
"I'll let you go, if you let me go. On the count of of 3--1...2...3!" Bryan let go of me and I sat up and sat on his legs and held his feet down and I took off his other shoe. "HEY! You were suppose to let go!"
I laughed and started tracing my finger around his foot. "Oh this can't be tickling the strong Bryan, now can it?" I started to wiggle all 10 fingers of his foot and he went crazy.
He laughed until he almost couldn't breathe anymore. He was so weak! "Hhahahah pleeeaseee nooo moreee hahaha iiii---cantt hahah takeee thisss hehehahaha!"
I kept tickling both his feet until he had tears in his eyes. Then, I started to slow down and just run my fnger up and down his left foot ever so gently. "Welp, Bryan. I think I win now, don't I?"
"haha...ooh you'll never hehe haha wiiin hehe!"
"You do realize I have you under complete control right now, don't you?" I sped up and started tickling his foot with five fingers quickly and all over his foot.
"YESSSHEHEHE HAHA! YOUUU HAHAHA WIIIINNN HAHAHA!"
Laughed and started going slow again. "I should just do this until my grandfather gets home. Although, I think you would be dead by then!" I turned around and looked at him. He had tears in his eyes and was laughing still. I let go of his foot and started sliding my fingers up and down his side.
He started laughing histarically again and then out of no where he poked my sides. I shrieked and tried to pull his hands down. Somehow, he managed to find strength and started tickling my sides.
"Nooo--noo hahahahaha youuu hehehe can'ttttthahaha!" I laughed and to get away I fell to the ground and started to crawl away but he followed and grabbed me and turned me around and held my arms up over my head with one hand and then started to tickle my stomach!
Just then we heard a car turn into the driveway. Bryan stopped and gave me one last tickle and grabbed his shoes and quickly put them on. I dived onto the couch and pretended to be asleep. A few seconds later my grandfather walked into the door with groceries. Bryan ofered to help, and I still pretended to be asleep. I heard my grandfather say he had to use the bathroom and that he thanked Bryan and said he would see him tomorrow. I heard the bathroom door close and Bryan walking towards me.
"Just a reminder of my payback!" And he grabbed my foot and started to lightly tickle it until he heard the toilet flush and then he left.
