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DimpleToes
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wow sweety.. this was worth the read
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starburstz91
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Wonderful work.
I completely, and utterly, loved it.
I completely, and utterly, loved it.
Damn!!!
And let me say again, DAMN!!!
That was just so... deep doesn't seem to cover it. I've read enough cyberpunk to be able to FEEL the world surrounding him... And I can almost see the story through his eyes. That is one of the finest, most in-depth short stories I have ever read, both from a reader and author's point of view.
It's not really one you can sequel, but you should think about developing that world some more, maybe turning it into a tickling/c-punk story, or series of them... I already have some ideas! 😉
Fine work, sir. Damned fine work.
Wirchler
And let me say again, DAMN!!!
That was just so... deep doesn't seem to cover it. I've read enough cyberpunk to be able to FEEL the world surrounding him... And I can almost see the story through his eyes. That is one of the finest, most in-depth short stories I have ever read, both from a reader and author's point of view.
It's not really one you can sequel, but you should think about developing that world some more, maybe turning it into a tickling/c-punk story, or series of them... I already have some ideas! 😉
Fine work, sir. Damned fine work.
Wirchler
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Fuck me that was brilliant. Suikoden's been pointing me in the direction of some very talented tickling fiction/fiction writers here but I wasn't expecting writing like THIS. This is fucking incredible. I don't even like reading sci-fi per say but this combined such masterful story telling AND tickling and the whole thing was an unreal experience.
