Fox sisters preview; Pandemonium at Prickly Hills concept art and profiles

[GUTIERREZ]

Cant wait to see PAPH 🙂

 

[Low_Roads]

Very fetching, bursting with bouncy goodness! Hailey can Red Cross me any time she cares too!

 

[The Bandito]

Could your characters get any more heart-stopping???

As I said on dA...these gals blow me away. Can't wait for more Fox Sisters.

B

 

[Tom Tickle]

cheers lads.

Sorry i've been absent for a while. I've been working on a tickle project for somebody on another site (writing) and completed that tonight.

LBH; yes, I'm very fond of Hailey, and I wouldn't mind her straddling me and having those boobs swaying over my head as she thumps me in the chest, while I played dead, and would do my best to sneak a tickle out of her. It would mean I was alive, but even in a rage, I bet she'd be sexy. I do like girls of her height and build; as a witty poster (forgive me for not checking who) said of Babs on the McFeely thread; 'that girl's an erotic playground' - so much of her to play with and tickle. I feel the same is true of Hailey, and would employ every means with which to tickle and taste her voluptuous, quivering anatomy. Sorry, but girls like her bring out the pervert in me.

Deet, I have probably been in correspondence with you more often on DA than I have posted on here in recent weeks. I have drawings of Janey and Andi ready for scanning and colours, as well as some other characters of mine.

 

[Tom Tickle]

It's not over yet. I think a floor plan of PHUC is going to be done prior to the comic, as i've done one of the mansion for reference, and I need to upload a couple more character sketches. I think Vlad Nabokov did something similar in his lectures on different books (a floorplan for Austen's Mansfield Park).

 

[Tom Tickle]

Hi guys

I'm finally happy with it. Here's a plan of Prickly Hills I did to help with visualising where all the action takes place. it's quite difficult getting everything to work, but this is pretty on the nail regarding how all the scenes play out.

Okay, there's not much to enjoy here, but it will help establish a bit of canonicity (there, i said it) to things.

In a little moment of serendipity, I noticed that it reminded me of playing Sim City on the super nintendo, all those years ago.

 

[Low_Roads]

That's a mighty handsome map, one which should prove invaluable when we begin traversing the halls of Prickly Hills! Nuts, I always wanted to do a similar type layout for Tabor County and never got around to it... high marks for your ambition and industry, sir! Despite the thoroughness of this floor plan, many campus features prove ominous. The upstairs, for instance, remains undeliniated. The Underground Complex seems a trapdoor for any form of hidden menace. And, of course, the Aviary blazes its red warning for all wise scholars to observe! I don't doubt we'll be led into these or even more potent academic obstacles as the tale progresses!

 

[Tom Tickle]

Despite the thoroughness of this floor plan, many campus features prove ominous. The upstairs, for instance, remains undeliniated. The Underground Complex seems a trapdoor for any form of hidden menace.

Most of the south building's upstairs is given over to a theater/ lecture hall. I would do the upper levels, but most of the classes featured are on the ground floor for the sake of the plot. I'll leave people to guess what might be going on up there, although the doctor's office is at the top of the bell tower at the north east corner (sans bell, and he hasn't started creeping along the wall at night, yet) The underground complex is where all manner of things lurk, waiting to be discovered by any pert, buxom and probably extremely ticklish student curious enough to look.

 

[Tom Tickle]

Concept art for the drama hall and the south facade of the building (leading to main entrance).

I quite enjoy going into Ken Adams/Ralph MacQuarrie mode and designing the actual locations and giving a sense of environment to the girls' adventures.
I think it's important to establish where this is all happening and what it looks like, then the background can become more diffuse as the action kicks in. As you can see it's a typical old English red brick university with the sash windows, terraced lawns and stone walls in the grounds.

Also attached is my initial design for the title page. I expect the final one will echo this closely, but with a few minor changes in attire and positioning of the cast. I think it sets the tone for the story quite nicely.

 

[Low_Roads]

The sketch for the title page is most impressive! A fine assembly of story elements... makes me eager to learn where all the parts fit! I like the production sketch quite a lot too! Very professional looking work!

 

[Tom Tickle]

I can't help imagining this character as one of the Featherfingers' 'colonial scions'.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-mF6dCD8n2E

 

[Low_Roads]

Man, what a lot of patience to snip all those clips together! Should come as no surprise that Smith is so obsessed with his creature comforts. Nor that he's so confounded noisy about it!

 

[Tom Tickle]

Update: first 10 pages of Pandemonium are nearly ready for scanning, so hopefully i'll have them scanned this weekend and then colouring will begin! (still, don't expect anything just yet, as I plan to have all ten coloured before posting).