Low_Roads
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As always, Scav, you're so on top of so many of the things I'd hope to accomplish! (why do I sound surprised! As one of the most stellar of our Community's stellar talents, you understand these motivations and techniques better than most of us ever will!) The title page was indeed meant to harken back to the days of 10-cent comix (as an EC fan, I love all their stuff, even the romance titles, which this sort-of resembles. Considering Hayley's barely concealed ardor, it seemed fitting). And I'm so pleased you made special mention of looming Hayley on page 5! I particularly wanted that picture to work (it was a money-shot, of sorts, an establishing image to set up the hallucinatory pages)!Incredible! What a read! 🙂 This story is just perfect. You've managed to capture just the right atmosphere in every scene; from the retro-comic title page (a great tribute to the 50's-60's!) to the tripping hallucinations of the forest. And the latter scenes were great, possible the most believable hallucination scenes I've ever seen in a comic. Everything is just a little bit exagerated. Like in that panel where hayley towers over the spaced-out katie almost monstrously grinning. I also like how you have adapted c_tickler's characters to your own style ( just like you did with my Kitzalia and her henchmen) They really seem to belong in the comic universe you've created. They've become a little bit grittier, as kopfhorer said; more Crumb-ier. 🙂
Finally, I would agree that someone should publish your comics in print. I for sure would buy them. Your work got to be amongst the literature of tickling! 🙂
As with every artist's characters I've been lucky enough to adapt (the ferocious Kitazlia more than once!), learning to draw Katie, Hayley and Chewy has proved a fun, satisfying, educating experience! I have you to thank for that... it was your superb "World's Collide" series that first prompted me to try my hand! It has proved so worthwhile! Tabor County is a pretty insular landscape... these touches of a grander universe (with its myriad wonderful talents and personalities) make it a hundred times more potent and relevant than it could otherwise be!