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Melanie's abduction, the complete story. parts one and two.
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Nothing you, our dear friend has ever written has ever sucked! Especially not these two tales! If you want something that sucked read our first tale! Now that sucked! Anna you wrote it well! No heather you wrote it well! I (Heather) love you Anna! I (Anna) love you too Heather!
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P.S Might we suggest you try your expert skills at something like animation/cartoons? We think you would be great at it! You should read our Family Guy story at AF!
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P.S Might we suggest you try your expert skills at something like animation/cartoons? We think you would be great at it! You should read our Family Guy story at AF!
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Okay, Family Guy and characters is the property of Fox, writer Alex Bornstein and Seth MacFarlane (creator). We make nada, zip, bubkus in the way of Funds from this tale. This story is based on 4th Season 8th Episode, we think is called 8 Simple Reasons to Sell My teenage daughter. Don’t make me over, 4th Season 4th Episode is a reference! And later incest! Now remember we consider that only the characters we created are ours (reveal later). And all others are the property of Rupert Murdoch’s News Corporation which includes the Fox Network and in Australia Foxtel.
"All right, Meg. For your first task according to the contract, you have to masturbate in front of me!" grinned Neil Goldman. He loved this contract. "NEIL! That's so disgusting!" yelled Meg. "It's in the contract! You have to do it!" replied Neil Goldman still thrilled. Meg Griffin, the girl he fantasized about (particularly during her blonde superstar singer phase when she lost her virginity) was about to pleasure herself before him. Meg annoyed started to remove her trademark pink sweater. She was wearing a lacy black bra. "Now turn around and remove your pants. Wiggle your butt as you do it!" he commanded. Meg glared at him. "Perhaps I should call my mum to give you another spanking!" he offered. Meg shivered slightly. Neil had a lot of sick control over his mother and seemed to get her to do anything. Her butt was still a little sore form the spanking yesterday and that had been fully clothed. She obediently did as she was told wiggling her booty which became panty clad as the pants slipped off. "Now Meg, remove your bra!" he ordered. Meg shaking with rage, removed her bra. Her bare back stood exposed to Neil. Neil drooled a little. This domination/submission thing was fun. Now comes the voyeurism!
"Now wiggle your butt as you remove your white panties!" demanded Neil. Shaking, furious, Meg slowly pulled down her panties exposing her butt to Neil but quickly protected her more intimate region by keeping her right hand on her vagina while wiggling down the panties to her ankles. Drool fell down Neil's chin, this was so sexy! "Face me!" he insisted. She turned keeping her hands protecting her breasts and her nether regions. "Remove your hands!" declared Neil, almost ordaining it as if Meg's body when exposed to his eyes would become a religious event. Meg shook her head. "Neil, this is WAY too fast. Slow down! Can't we do the super kinky slave/Master thing later?" pleaded Meg. "DO you want my mum to give you a really hard spanking on your fine ass, Meg?" asked Neil.
"Neil, I don't how hard her spanking is! I'm your girlfriend, not your slave!" cried Meg. Neil got up and moved behind Meg and stared at her ass for a while before whispering in Meg's ear "I am both your Master and your boyfriend! You are my slave and my girlfriend. You belong to me, Meg. I can show you a new world of pleasure and a new world of pain. Submit to me, and I will show you wonderful things. I own you Meg. You are my sex slave and nothing will change that. Now if you don't expose yourself, I will make you!" Meg heard a change in Neil's voice. No longer the lisp but a deeper almost demonic sound. He called out to his Mother with a voice unlike his own "Mother come,. I require you!" "Yes dear?" his Mother replied. "Meg claims not to be ticklish! She claims your tickle powers are useless against her!" claimed Neil. Meg started shaking her head. "That's so not true, Ms. Goldman! I never said that! I am super ticklish and I bet you're a fine tickler, you have to believe me!" implored Meg. Ms Goldman suddenly sat on Meg's legs. "Bad girl, Meg. You need to learn your place!" and with that Ms Goldman's fingers attacked Meg's helpless rear.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" howled Meg shaking uncontrollably. Neil smiled, Meg would soon submit totally to his will. Meg knew she had to protect her private parts from exposure but her rump was proving to be an area of great sensitivity confirmed by the speed, accuracy and effect of Ms Goldman's fingers. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHASTAHAHAHAHAP!!!" pleaded Meg. Ms Goldman was still under her son's deranged and obscene mind control and continued to do as he instructed. Neil enjoyed the spectacle of his girlfriend’s humiliation. Only when she was broken could he open her eyes to fabulous pleasure that she would enjoy. That they would both enjoy. HE moved towards a cupboard behind Meg and took out the camera. He attached it to the computer and sent it to Cecilia. Cecilia would understand the meaning. After all Cecilia was Neil’s property. And soon so would Meg. Meg’s face was bright red and she held on to her genitals. The tickling of her booty was greatly reducing her strength.
“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHASTAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAPHAHAHAP-PLEASEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” squealed Meg as the merciless drive of the enslaved Ms Goldman drove on. Meg soon felt her belly being explored. It felt like my tiny tentacles moving at great pace. Even her navel was shown no respite. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” she roared unable to contain her emotions as the torture drove on. Soon her ribs were the next destination of the twisted exploration. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHANOTTHERIIIIIIIBBBBBBBBBBBBSSSSAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” howled the suffering brunette. The tickling was soon increased when her soles were being added to the misery being inflicted on her person. Neil smiled. Cecilia and his mother were causing Meg’s hands to shake. As soon as she exposed herself, half the battle will be won. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” she cried.
The incessant laughter seemed doomed to perpetual repetition. Meg’s voice seemed to echo at great velocity the same two letters. Her pitch was unyielding in both intensity and unpleasant to all but the most depraved. And Neil was in this latter category. Meg was shaking vociferously and a few moans could be heard as her hands vibrated against her genitals. Neil was impressed at Meg’s tenacious willpower to withstand such a barrage which reduced lesser woman to surrender. Still this would make breaking her all the sweeter. He knelt near her watching as she writhed on the floor. The minute she moved her hands he would lift her and see her glory. Ms Goldman was now moving from the ribcage to the underarms. The laughter’s intensity rose several octaves. It seemed to Neil this was the area which would brake Meg and give her mind to him. Meg tried to shake off Ms Goldman by rising and shaking with great intensity. Ms Goldman was still sitting on her ankles and had no difficulty reaching her underarms. Meg’s hands were moving and Neil awaited for his first look at Meg’s most intimate regions.
“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHANOOOOOOOOOHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” cried Meg as the combination of arches scratching and underarm digging causing her hands to release from her breasts and vagina. Neil grinned as he witnessed the unveiling of Meg’s most private parts.
Meg tried to free herself by trying to grab Ms Goldman’s hands, but her feeble attempts were lessened due to her limited strength. Mss Goldman simply moved quickly unto her shoulders and resumed tickling her armpits. A shift from Cecilia caused her ankles to be locked up and the tickling continued. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” shrieked Meg. “So Meg if you want this to stop, Nod your head and it will stop! Then masturbate!” offered Neil. The head-shaking was near instantaneous and both women got off her. Meg gasped in air as Ms Goldman left. “Now Meg, the time is now to masturbate!” ordered Neil. Panting a little, Meg stood up. Cecilia approached her and took her hand. Cecilia began to dance and gently squeeze Meg’s tush. Meg squealed a little and moaned. “Masturbate!” yelled Neil. Meg jumped, taken by surprise but fear of another tickle attack compelled her to move her hands unto her breasts. Moaning she caressing them, feeling her hands squeeze them. Neil smiled, this was a pleasing start to Meg’s path to being dominating. Cecilia nude as the day she was born, promptly bent down wiggling her rear the way her Master liked it. As Meg rubbed her firm breasts, Cecilia proceeded to tongue her pussy. This caught Meg by surprise but Neil’s stern eyes caused her to continue to massage her boobs. Meg was started to fully enjoyed her humiliation. She was experiencing great heights of pleasure as Cecilia’s tongue flicked against her sensitive clit. “Finger-Fuck your ass!” roared Neil, his voice as before becoming more like James Earl Jones by the second. Meg complied. At first it was painful but soon the pleasure undid such concern. Soon she moaned louder as Cecilia moved across to her anus. Soon Cecilia’s tongue was deeply entrenched in Meg’s rear while her fingers massaged her breasts. Meg moaned greater and almost came when a la Darth Vader, Neil declared that she should “Massage your slit, slut!” Immediately her fingers found her clit and she was writhing in pleasure. Her hands showed the region little respite. And soon she placed her right index fingers inside her and began to pump in and out. Meg was shaking with pleasure before she screamed in delight. As she wound down she felt greater joy and delight as her juices were eagerly being drank by Cecilia. “Now my pets, come to me!” came the James Earl Jones voice of Neil.
We are sorry about the spelling errors. If you think you have seen this story before it's because we posted it on another website! Under a different name! Although it's pretty obvious it's us!
"All right, Meg. For your first task according to the contract, you have to masturbate in front of me!" grinned Neil Goldman. He loved this contract. "NEIL! That's so disgusting!" yelled Meg. "It's in the contract! You have to do it!" replied Neil Goldman still thrilled. Meg Griffin, the girl he fantasized about (particularly during her blonde superstar singer phase when she lost her virginity) was about to pleasure herself before him. Meg annoyed started to remove her trademark pink sweater. She was wearing a lacy black bra. "Now turn around and remove your pants. Wiggle your butt as you do it!" he commanded. Meg glared at him. "Perhaps I should call my mum to give you another spanking!" he offered. Meg shivered slightly. Neil had a lot of sick control over his mother and seemed to get her to do anything. Her butt was still a little sore form the spanking yesterday and that had been fully clothed. She obediently did as she was told wiggling her booty which became panty clad as the pants slipped off. "Now Meg, remove your bra!" he ordered. Meg shaking with rage, removed her bra. Her bare back stood exposed to Neil. Neil drooled a little. This domination/submission thing was fun. Now comes the voyeurism!
"Now wiggle your butt as you remove your white panties!" demanded Neil. Shaking, furious, Meg slowly pulled down her panties exposing her butt to Neil but quickly protected her more intimate region by keeping her right hand on her vagina while wiggling down the panties to her ankles. Drool fell down Neil's chin, this was so sexy! "Face me!" he insisted. She turned keeping her hands protecting her breasts and her nether regions. "Remove your hands!" declared Neil, almost ordaining it as if Meg's body when exposed to his eyes would become a religious event. Meg shook her head. "Neil, this is WAY too fast. Slow down! Can't we do the super kinky slave/Master thing later?" pleaded Meg. "DO you want my mum to give you a really hard spanking on your fine ass, Meg?" asked Neil.
"Neil, I don't how hard her spanking is! I'm your girlfriend, not your slave!" cried Meg. Neil got up and moved behind Meg and stared at her ass for a while before whispering in Meg's ear "I am both your Master and your boyfriend! You are my slave and my girlfriend. You belong to me, Meg. I can show you a new world of pleasure and a new world of pain. Submit to me, and I will show you wonderful things. I own you Meg. You are my sex slave and nothing will change that. Now if you don't expose yourself, I will make you!" Meg heard a change in Neil's voice. No longer the lisp but a deeper almost demonic sound. He called out to his Mother with a voice unlike his own "Mother come,. I require you!" "Yes dear?" his Mother replied. "Meg claims not to be ticklish! She claims your tickle powers are useless against her!" claimed Neil. Meg started shaking her head. "That's so not true, Ms. Goldman! I never said that! I am super ticklish and I bet you're a fine tickler, you have to believe me!" implored Meg. Ms Goldman suddenly sat on Meg's legs. "Bad girl, Meg. You need to learn your place!" and with that Ms Goldman's fingers attacked Meg's helpless rear.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" howled Meg shaking uncontrollably. Neil smiled, Meg would soon submit totally to his will. Meg knew she had to protect her private parts from exposure but her rump was proving to be an area of great sensitivity confirmed by the speed, accuracy and effect of Ms Goldman's fingers. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHASTAHAHAHAHAP!!!" pleaded Meg. Ms Goldman was still under her son's deranged and obscene mind control and continued to do as he instructed. Neil enjoyed the spectacle of his girlfriend’s humiliation. Only when she was broken could he open her eyes to fabulous pleasure that she would enjoy. That they would both enjoy. HE moved towards a cupboard behind Meg and took out the camera. He attached it to the computer and sent it to Cecilia. Cecilia would understand the meaning. After all Cecilia was Neil’s property. And soon so would Meg. Meg’s face was bright red and she held on to her genitals. The tickling of her booty was greatly reducing her strength.
“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHASTAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAPHAHAHAP-PLEASEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” squealed Meg as the merciless drive of the enslaved Ms Goldman drove on. Meg soon felt her belly being explored. It felt like my tiny tentacles moving at great pace. Even her navel was shown no respite. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” she roared unable to contain her emotions as the torture drove on. Soon her ribs were the next destination of the twisted exploration. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHANOTTHERIIIIIIIBBBBBBBBBBBBSSSSAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” howled the suffering brunette. The tickling was soon increased when her soles were being added to the misery being inflicted on her person. Neil smiled. Cecilia and his mother were causing Meg’s hands to shake. As soon as she exposed herself, half the battle will be won. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” she cried.
The incessant laughter seemed doomed to perpetual repetition. Meg’s voice seemed to echo at great velocity the same two letters. Her pitch was unyielding in both intensity and unpleasant to all but the most depraved. And Neil was in this latter category. Meg was shaking vociferously and a few moans could be heard as her hands vibrated against her genitals. Neil was impressed at Meg’s tenacious willpower to withstand such a barrage which reduced lesser woman to surrender. Still this would make breaking her all the sweeter. He knelt near her watching as she writhed on the floor. The minute she moved her hands he would lift her and see her glory. Ms Goldman was now moving from the ribcage to the underarms. The laughter’s intensity rose several octaves. It seemed to Neil this was the area which would brake Meg and give her mind to him. Meg tried to shake off Ms Goldman by rising and shaking with great intensity. Ms Goldman was still sitting on her ankles and had no difficulty reaching her underarms. Meg’s hands were moving and Neil awaited for his first look at Meg’s most intimate regions.
“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHANOOOOOOOOOHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” cried Meg as the combination of arches scratching and underarm digging causing her hands to release from her breasts and vagina. Neil grinned as he witnessed the unveiling of Meg’s most private parts.
Meg tried to free herself by trying to grab Ms Goldman’s hands, but her feeble attempts were lessened due to her limited strength. Mss Goldman simply moved quickly unto her shoulders and resumed tickling her armpits. A shift from Cecilia caused her ankles to be locked up and the tickling continued. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” shrieked Meg. “So Meg if you want this to stop, Nod your head and it will stop! Then masturbate!” offered Neil. The head-shaking was near instantaneous and both women got off her. Meg gasped in air as Ms Goldman left. “Now Meg, the time is now to masturbate!” ordered Neil. Panting a little, Meg stood up. Cecilia approached her and took her hand. Cecilia began to dance and gently squeeze Meg’s tush. Meg squealed a little and moaned. “Masturbate!” yelled Neil. Meg jumped, taken by surprise but fear of another tickle attack compelled her to move her hands unto her breasts. Moaning she caressing them, feeling her hands squeeze them. Neil smiled, this was a pleasing start to Meg’s path to being dominating. Cecilia nude as the day she was born, promptly bent down wiggling her rear the way her Master liked it. As Meg rubbed her firm breasts, Cecilia proceeded to tongue her pussy. This caught Meg by surprise but Neil’s stern eyes caused her to continue to massage her boobs. Meg was started to fully enjoyed her humiliation. She was experiencing great heights of pleasure as Cecilia’s tongue flicked against her sensitive clit. “Finger-Fuck your ass!” roared Neil, his voice as before becoming more like James Earl Jones by the second. Meg complied. At first it was painful but soon the pleasure undid such concern. Soon she moaned louder as Cecilia moved across to her anus. Soon Cecilia’s tongue was deeply entrenched in Meg’s rear while her fingers massaged her breasts. Meg moaned greater and almost came when a la Darth Vader, Neil declared that she should “Massage your slit, slut!” Immediately her fingers found her clit and she was writhing in pleasure. Her hands showed the region little respite. And soon she placed her right index fingers inside her and began to pump in and out. Meg was shaking with pleasure before she screamed in delight. As she wound down she felt greater joy and delight as her juices were eagerly being drank by Cecilia. “Now my pets, come to me!” came the James Earl Jones voice of Neil.
We are sorry about the spelling errors. If you think you have seen this story before it's because we posted it on another website! Under a different name! Although it's pretty obvious it's us!
Heather & Anna said:
lolol i love you two... hmm i could try i suppose.. and thanks so much again for those words of praise.. i'll read what you just posted after i post this.. thanks again Heather and Anna.. fellow queens of tickling.
isabeau
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Okay, I desperately wanted to be the 31st poster on this thread, and now I can say I'm satisfied.
Mel, you have written a very revealing story. This opens a portal into the inner desires of your unfettered imagination. I blushed
when I read it. It was psychological voyeurism - like spying on you in the shower with your favorite rubber duckie - you know, the one with the vibrating beak. What more can I say; inspiring, erotic, and filled with sexual angst.
I am a huge fan of erotic tickling fiction. Although I don't typically write it much anymore, I still have a great appreciation for it. I look forward to your continuing adventures.
Mel, you have written a very revealing story. This opens a portal into the inner desires of your unfettered imagination. I blushed
when I read it. It was psychological voyeurism - like spying on you in the shower with your favorite rubber duckie - you know, the one with the vibrating beak. What more can I say; inspiring, erotic, and filled with sexual angst.I am a huge fan of erotic tickling fiction. Although I don't typically write it much anymore, I still have a great appreciation for it. I look forward to your continuing adventures.
ShadowTklr said:Okay, I desperately wanted to be the 31st poster on this thread, and now I can say I'm satisfied.
Mel, you have written a very revealing story. This opens a portal into the inner desires of your unfettered imagination. I blushed
I am a huge fan of erotic tickling fiction. Although I don't typically write it much anymore, I still have a great appreciation for it. I look forward to your continuing adventures.
i made you blush???? wowowow.... thank you Craig.. as you know, i am your biggest self proclaimed fan and for you to praise my humble work just made my day.
now about you not writing much anymore, get with it lolol.
ps this has been a fantasy of mine for a very long time, and i'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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I was touching myself as i read the story. just thought id share that with you. 
by the way, who was the mysterious tickler?
by the way, who was the mysterious tickler?maniactickler said:I was touching myself as i read the story. just thought id share that with you.
gee thanks for that image....at least you didnt mention well you know.. and i aint telling who the tickler was, thats part of the appeal..
hmm Strider, let me think about that, im thinking your signature, a night on the town, suddenly something goes awry... i'll let you know lol
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Talk about erotic. That was awesome. I like the teasing aspect mixed with the tickling, every nerve ending on fire. Great job
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isabeau said:
Well, to be honest, i did have a small release right at the end of the story. i just didnt think it would be appropriate to post it though.
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isabeau said:
Hiya Mel. I just wanted to drop you a note and say thanks for not revealing that I was the tickler in your story. We both know and that should be good enough.
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Oh shit, this isn't PM! Did I give it away?...D'OH!
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ShadowTklr said:Hiya Mel. I just wanted to drop you a note and say thanks for not revealing that I was the tickler in your story. We both know and that should be good enough.
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Oh shit, this isn't PM! Did I give it away?...D'OH!
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lolololol ya nut you... gave it away.. tsk tsk.. so true we two are the only ones who know the truth.. heck wait a minute, this also isnt in a pm... hmmmmm
isabeau
really good story isabeau!! I liked the teasing and orgasm denial a lot. I thought, half way through the story, that the mystery tickler was her husband. Maybe its a role playing thing between her and her husband.
Anyway, since this story is written by a woman, the parts that describe what she is thinking and what she likes and wants are especially hot.
loved it isa!! you write well!
-tyklfynd.
Anyway, since this story is written by a woman, the parts that describe what she is thinking and what she likes and wants are especially hot.
loved it isa!! you write well!
-tyklfynd.
Wow - great stuff Melanie. Nothing like a bit of abduction and erotic tickle torture to get the pulse racing and the juices flowing... 😉
I especially like "McGuffin" device of the envelope. There's a lot of tickle fiction on the forum but when it's coupled with some imaginative storytelling it is all the more pleasurable to read. As for the tickling and orgasm denial, you are a very naughty girl. I love it!
ps - You seem to hold some influence with the great ShadowTklr. If you could whisper "Asylum 7 - the sequel" into his ear I would be much obliged. Thanks. 😛
I especially like "McGuffin" device of the envelope. There's a lot of tickle fiction on the forum but when it's coupled with some imaginative storytelling it is all the more pleasurable to read. As for the tickling and orgasm denial, you are a very naughty girl. I love it!
ps - You seem to hold some influence with the great ShadowTklr. If you could whisper "Asylum 7 - the sequel" into his ear I would be much obliged. Thanks. 😛
suikoden said:Wow - great stuff Melanie. Nothing like a bit of abduction and erotic tickle torture to get the pulse racing and the juices flowing... 😉
I especially like "McGuffin" device of the envelope. There's a lot of tickle fiction on the forum but when it's coupled with some imaginative storytelling it is all the more pleasurable to read. As for the tickling and orgasm denial, you are a very naughty girl. I love it!
ps - You seem to hold some influence with the great ShadowTklr. If you could whisper "Asylum 7 - the sequel" into his ear I would be much obliged. Thanks. 😛
hey thanks...i know the plot is not exactly original, but what the heck, it was a fantasy of mine that i decided to put into words... as for my influence with the great Shadowtklr, well hmmm, i could try that i suppose, but at what price to me? lolol he might have to retaliate in some cruel tickletorture of his own, in order to grant that small favor to myself. but hey, i'm game if he is...
isabeau
o yes i can be a very naughty girl if i put my mind into it..😉
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Verry cool Izzy. This is great, I loved the teasing and tickling. As a ler it is something I would love to do myself. I don't think it would be all that bad to be on the other side either. 
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Way To Go Babe
Hi Melanie,
Wow babe awsome story hon had me rivited to my screen totally blown out of my seat too.
Hey If I ever get my book published I'll sign and personally deliver a copy to your door, just send hubby out for ice cream for a few hours. Ha Just kidding there.
TS07
Elvis has Left the Building
thank you and goodnight.
Hi Melanie,
Wow babe awsome story hon had me rivited to my screen totally blown out of my seat too.
Hey If I ever get my book published I'll sign and personally deliver a copy to your door, just send hubby out for ice cream for a few hours. Ha Just kidding there.
TS07
Elvis has Left the Building
thank you and goodnight.
