melanie's humiliation

[Pokey]

Nicely done Isabeau

I enjoyed reading your story, and thank you for sharing it. I think you will continue, as it appears you do well and enjoy it.

 

[isabeau]

I enjoyed reading your story, and thank you for sharing it. I think you will continue, as it appears you do well and enjoy it.

thank you PokeyinMich xoxo i'll try

isabeau

 

[jkb]

Damn! When did you become an author!?

*clap clap clap*

Welcome to the world of tickle fiction, Isabeau. Glad you join the ranks of us authors. And with one hell of a debut. I personally thought Part 1 was better. I think your debut into the tickling story world may have been better than mine. Keep it up.

 

[isabeau]

*clap clap clap*

Welcome to the world of tickle fiction, Isabeau. Glad you join the ranks of us authors. And with one hell of a debut. I personally thought Part 1 was better. I think your debut into the tickling story world may have been better than mine. Keep it up.

thank you jkb. actually the first part is a direct fantasy of mine. the second part was written in rather a hurry and i have been told it could have been done a bit better. thank you for the compliment, coming from you its quite an honor. and i highly doubt my debut was better than yours. you write with such humour and cruelty combined, it is truly a joy to read.

isabeau

 

[Heather & Anna]

A magnificent debut, Isabeau! Truly grand! And uh sweetie well I (Anna) hate to be a pain, but as I (Anna) told MC, I (Anna) prefer to be called Anna. Anyway both Heather and I (Anna) look forward to a ton of your stories
Love,
Anna and my babe Heather who I (Anna) hope will not realise I (Anna) should be in bed!!!!!!
P.S Best wishes and we may be the queens of the tickling world but you are our Empress. Although maybe Heather should be the princess.....

 

[isabeau]

A magnificent debut, Isabeau! Truly grand! And uh sweetie well I (Anna) hate to be a pain, but as I (Anna) told MC, I (Anna) prefer to be called Anna. Anyway both Heather and I (Anna) look forward to a ton of your stories
Love,
Anna and my babe Heather who I (Anna) hope will not realise I (Anna) should be in bed!!!!!!
P.S Best wishes and we may be the queens of the tickling world but you are our Empress. Although maybe Heather should be the princess.....

oops sorry Anna a slight faux pas there. and thank you once again for your pleasing words. lol your so funny , i will never make that mistake again. ANNA ANNA ANNA ANNA and btw i love the name Heather. now get some sleep. your Empress has spoken lol

isabeau

 

[chrisheaven]

great story----many thnks

 

[unit5610]

OMG...*mouth hanging open* And I have to get back to school work now. Thanks a lot!! 😉

 

[isabeau]

OMG...*mouth hanging open* And I have to get back to school work now. Thanks a lot!! 😉

um did that mean you liked it? lol

and chris thanks hon xoxo

isabeau

ps i wish i had taken more time with part two. i'll do better next time, if there is a next time.

 

[TklHer]

what an exceelent set up

It sounds as though you have an excellent imagination, Isabeau. I'm sure all parts of your story will be excellent.

 

[isabeau]

It sounds as though you have an excellent imagination, Isabeau. I'm sure all parts of your story will be excellent.

thank you very much TklHer. i know i could have done better. in my next story i shall try to do much better. your praise is deeply appreciated. yes i do have a very vivid imagination. xoxo

isabeau

 

[witchtickler]

Wow!!!



ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!!!! If I ever get a hold of you it's gonna CUM!! true. hehehe maybe not the camera's but the rest OMG!!! YES!!! You can bank on it!! 😉

witchtickler

 

[isabeau]

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!!!! If I ever get a hold of you it's gonna CUM!! true. hehehe maybe not the camera's but the rest OMG!!! YES!!! You can bank on it!! 😉

witchtickler

dont i know that witch.... and thank you for reading and your nice words lol.

isabeau

ps i hope there wouldnt be any camera, eeks

 

[isabeau]

wow Sablesword thanks and i hope that wasnt too much trouble for you. i truly appreciate it. as you know i could have done much better on the second part, but i was rather depressed and in a rush when i did it. grrr.

and for you to comment on my story is truly an honor. you know what i think about your writing.... thanks again

isabeau

 

[Aachen1983]

BUMP BUMP BUMP. You know what Melanie? This is really a good story. I got to thinking about reading some of yours after earlier. This is really good.

 

[Grimgor]

great story, you were on a total roll with the tickling part of the story; I think you should have made it longer. In any case, the anticipation was there and the story was good. Write on 🙂

 

[isabeau]

Aachen hon thank you very much and Grimgor thank you also.. glad you enjoyed my first attempt. i know the ending sucked big time lolol i will do better on my second story. or you both can come tickle a better story out of me

isabeau

 

[siamese dream]

Isabeau I just re-read it in the re-post, again that's an excellent first story, very erotic and intense, I liked the ending too and how Mikran explained all the bad stuff that happened to Melanie's torturers, you don't wanna piss off a magical being I guess, hehe! Very nice, hope you write more sometime 🙂

 

[isabeau]

Isabeau I just re-read it in the re-post, again that's an excellent first story, very erotic and intense, I liked the ending too and how Mikran explained all the bad stuff that happened to Melanie's torturers, you don't wanna piss off a magical being I guess, hehe! Very nice, hope you write more sometime 🙂

thank you siamese dream... and i loved your third and fourth chapter in your newest story. lol so true dont want to upset a magical being. thanks xoxo

isabeau

ps i will write another story soon.

 

[nytoetapper]

WOW! And to think, this was your "first attempt" at a story... Great job!

 

[isabeau]

WOW! And to think, this was your "first attempt" at a story... Great job!

thank you nytoetapper.. that is quite a compliment..it wasn't my best, i fear, but it was my first attempt..

 

[knight]

Melly, you've told me about this story. I have to say, for your first story, you had a very strong beginning. You have improved, and have revealed more depths to that wonderful, devilish imagination of yours. But this is a really strong beginning. Dark, descriptive, erotic, imaginative. It's really good. I'm glad I finally have the chance to read it.

 

[isabeau]

Melly, you've told me about this story. I have to say, for your first story, you had a very strong beginning. You have improved, and have revealed more depths to that wonderful, devilish imagination of yours. But this is a really strong beginning. Dark, descriptive, erotic, imaginative. It's really good. I'm glad I finally have the chance to read it.

thank you knight. i don't think it was that great, but yea it was my first attempt.. that sappy ending lolol..