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Mia's Techno-Tickle Dreamscape Episode 5 (Amy Lee Tickled)

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Mia's Techno-Tickle Dreamscape Episode 5 (Amy Lee Tickled)

Evanescence. Mia loved their music. More than that, she loved Amy Lee. The beautiful young women with the beuatiful voice that leads this great band. She listened to "My Immortal" on her drive home from a hard night of partying. Rushing along and getting ready for bed, she anticipated her night's sleep. She hopped in bed and
curled in bed with sheets still warm from the dryer. She cuddled Teddy Tickles tightly, and dozed off to her wonderland.

Falling. She fell, fast, into the blackness, distant laughter could be heard from below. Then she began to slow her descent, and a red blow came into view, from below her. She blinked and her "Tickle Suit" was on her. A tight red leather outfit that exposed much of her gorgeous breasts and had gaps around her ribs and tummy. The tail of the dress split into four strands about 6 feet long, and they were tipped with a long stiff turkey feather. Her long silky black hair was tightly braided in the back, and the tip of her braid was fanned out to look like a feather, and as she moved along, it moved back and forth, gently tickling the small of her back. Her size 10 feet were always bare and were the feet of an utter goddess. Her toenails were painted a deep red to match her dress. She came to a stop, 2 inches from the ground, which was covered with feathers, and constantly tickled her feet as she floated along. The cavern had a red glow to it, and was covered in velvet and feathers.

Screams of laughter could be heard from hundereds of women who were having their soles tormented with feathers, and made beautiful laughter, like music. She passed by dozens of her helples victims to her destination in her tickle heaven/hell. She went to a clear glass walled sound proof room where Teddy Tickles in full form held the door open for her. He bowed his head as she passes, and shut and locked the door behind her as he shimmered away. In the middle of the room, laying 3 feet above the ground, hovering by an unseen force, lay Amy Lee. She looked around frantically, with a look of fear on her face. She wore a white billowy dress, that was sleeveless. white ribbons hung from different parts of it, almost touching the floor. She was barefoot, her gorgeous white soles almost glowed in the room.

Mia blinked and Amy sat up and rose till she was 4 feet off the ground. her hands were in her lap as she sat, motionless, unable to move. Amy looked at Mia and realized there was no use begging, Mia was going to have her fun with Amy, and that was that. "What are you going to do to me?" asked Amy. Mia grinned and replied, "I'm going to tickle your feet... and your toes, and your armpits, your tummy, and finally, your supple breasts." Amy knew she was very ticklish, but her heart skipped at the thought of being bound and helpless at another woman's whim. "And then what?" asked Amy. "And then you'll laugh. Long and hard you'll laugh." replied Mia. Amy looked into Mia's eyes and said, daringly, "Then make me laugh." Mia was eager to hear Amy's laugh. She was so gorgeous, and her singing voice must posess a great laugh. Mia blinked, and large video screens covered the walls. They showed the view of Amy's feet, so no matter where she looked, she would see her feet being tormented. On the wall behind Amy, showed the view of her face, so Mia could see her laugh. And so everyone could hear her laugh, a small microphone appeared in front of her lips.

The 4 feathers on the tail of Mia's outfit came to life, spinning in circles, and inched closer to Amy's poised soles. 2 feathers per foot, 1 feather for her toes, and 1 feather for the ball of her feet. Mia poised her fingers in position, ready to tickle her baby smooth arches and heels. After a moment of hesitation, feathers, fingers and soles connected, and chaos ensued.

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i'll write and post the 2nd part in a few hours, been under the weather with a stomach flu, so i posted this so everyone can get hyped for the 2nd part, coming up this evening.

i most likely will make this one a 4 part story, and hopefully, one of my most proud works. after i'm done with this story, i'll finish my other unfinished Mia stories, sorry i was slacking off on those, i tend to get lazy.
 
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That story was awesome. But why did you have to leave it the climax? Post part 2 as soon as possible. I must read!

But yeah, awesome story, nonetheless.
 
ARRGGGHHHH!!!!! I hate cliffhangers!
Really nice beginning there. Technically, the right spelling at the end is "chaos ensued" but that's really good so far. Can't wait to see the next part!
 
was gonna finish it tonight, but as fate would have it, my sister had to come over and type up 33 page report for class tomorrow. but rest assured, tomororow morning, the writing continues, and this story will be the stuff of legends.
 
Oh ok. I guess I can understand that. Holy crap, 33 pages?! How in the name of God, Eru, and Primus do they expect anyone to come up with 33 pages on anything?!
 
Sockstickler said:
Oh ok. I guess I can understand that. Holy crap, 33 pages?! How in the name of God, Eru, and Primus do they expect anyone to come up with 33 pages on anything?!
Who who and who?
 
Um, ok, from the top.
God: Christian God
Eru: Lord of the Rings God
Primus: Transformers God
Sometimes I like throwing in as many divine figures as I can, real or literary, into something I say when I'm not sure about something. My other two favorites are "What in the bluest of blue hells..." and "Who in the what now?!"
 
Who in the what now is from buffy, in once more with feeling, when Willow and Tara say they have a couple of books back the house, and Xander says that line....

Lol I'm such a geek
 
LOL I was trying to remember where I got that line from. I must have heard it somewhere, maybe from the episode, and it got sucked into my repertoire.
 
lonelykimiko said:
Who in the what now is from buffy, in once more with feeling, when Willow and Tara say they have a couple of books back the house, and Xander says that line....

Lol I'm such a geek

the only thing he said in that scene was "the what now?"

your probably thinking of the line: "Great merciful Zeus!"

my favorite line from him in that scene was when buffy first walked into the magic shop and xander says: "Respect the crueller, and tame the doghnut!"
 

Attachments

'They got...the mustaaarrd oouuuuuutttttt!!!'

*hides in shame*
 
I've been having a bad bad day,
Come on won't you put that pad away,
I'm asking you please no!
It isn't right it isn't fair!
There was no parking anywhere,
I think that Hydrant wasn't there!
Why can't you let it go?
I think I've paid more than my share!
I'm just a poor girl don't you care?
Hey I'm not wearing underwear!
 
Mia's Techno-Tickle Dreamscape Episode 5 (Amy Lee Tickled) Part 2

"AAHAHAHAHEHEHEHEEE!" giggled Amy. She tried moving and squiring, but couldn't even manage a twitch. Mia blinked and Amy's toes were pulled back
farther, and spread apart, strecthing her smooth soles taught. The feathers went to work on her toes, dipping in between and in the curls of Amy's lucious and helpless digits. Amy giggled sweetly from the electric tickling on her feet, and couldn't help but watch the video screens on the walls showing every posible angle of her feet being molested by the twirling feathers and Mia's raking fingers.

When the feathers tickled the curls of her toes, and Mia expertly raked Amy's silky arches, Mia went into high pitched giggles, so sweet and cute, that rank through the whole chamber, and was being recorded, possibly the best music ever. Little by little, Amy was beginning to enjoy to the torment on her soles, the feeling of being helpless to another person, even a woman. She began to look more and more at the screens that showed her feet covered in a flurry of feathers and fingers, seeing the random patch of white sole underneath the fury of tickling. Amy managed to say, trying to to seem she enjoyed the tickling at all, "AHAHAHAW-WH-WHAT NEHEXT? LIHIHICKING MY TOHOHOES?". "That sounds like a capital idea." said Mia.

Amy watched in horror as Mia began to suckle Amy's immobile toes, starting with her pinky toe, as the 4 feathers moved down, stroking her heels and arches. Amy let out a small scream and then hysterical laughter as Mia's nimble tongue wrapped intself around each toe, tasting each centimeter of flesh, as tears ran down Amy's face. Amy tried to keep her eyes open and watch her feet get tortured and suckled, starting to bless everytime she took good care of her feet, making sure they were very soft and perfect. Mia looked up and realized her prisoner was having too much fun. She blinked and Amy's snapped into the spread eagle position, with fingers spread out, and exposing her soft hollow pits.

The video screens around the room flickered to every angle of her body. Mia looked around, shocked, as her dress tore down the middle, from and inch below the collar, to a little past her waist. It wore into rageed strings and cloth, that exposed her soft, flat tummy, and supple breasts. The ragged cloth and string mysteriously came to life, tickling her bare tummy and bellybutton, and carressing the sides of her breasts. She let out another scream as her laughter went into overdrive. The 10 ribbons dangling from her dress came to life as 2 of them tickled the backs of her knees. Another 2 stroked her nipples, 2 more visited her hollows and made her howl. 2 more tickled her ears and neck, while the last 2 tickled the palms of her hands and in between her fingers. This attack lasted for 1 minute, all while Amy screamed, "YEHEHEHESSSS!"

Suddenly it all stopped. Then ribbons tickling her palms kicks in, and Amy, still panting from the last attack begain giggling softly. Amy loved it, she never thought her palms were so ticklish. After 1 minute, it stopped, and the tickling of her breasts resumed, ribbons and shredded cloths caressed her hard nipples. This processed repeated over and over, each focusing on a certain body part anywhere between 1 and 3 minutes, keeping Amy guessing where it will strike next. Her laughter went from soft giggling when her hands and ears where tickled, and full blown cackling and screaming when her breats where tickled. Mia then continued tickling and licking Amy soles, which tickled Amy the most, which she also loved the most. She watched the video screen, heart racing, and laughing like crazy as Mia licked her arches, and thought she was in heaven.

Suddenly, Amy's arms were freed, but didn't do as she commanded. Instead, they saluted Mia and began tickling her bellybutton. Amy was caught by surprise, which just made it tickle more. Amy looked in horror as her own hands tickled her belly and ribs, which tickled like hell. Her rebellous hands moves up and began to stroke her breasts, tickling the sides of them, and eventually rubbing her nipples, making her scream. After a few minutes, the flushed and sweaty Amy sat up and crossed her legs. In a perfect Indian sitting style, with her soles facing skyward, her head was forced down to look at her soles, still pink and sweaty from Mia's tickle assault. Her hands began to tickle her toes and balls of her feet, making her go into silent laughter, as she was forced to watch, just inches away, as her own hands tickled her toes mercilessly. "Here, hun, let me help you there." said Mia, teasingly.

2 of Mia's feathers began stroking her soles, while the other 2 began tickling Amy's breasts and nipples. Mia's hands tickled her bare hollows as Amy's arms tilted up, allowing her easy acces to her pits, while her hands still tickled her toes. Her dress came to life again, as ribbons went behind her knees, flossing back and forth. Mia nibbled and licked her ears and neck as the ragged cloth from her dress rippled in waves, tickling the sides of her breasts and ribs, as the rest of the ribbons concentrated on stroking her bellybutton. This final tickle attack lasted for some time as tears fell from Amy's face, lubricated her fingers on her toes, making it tickle worse. Amy stared at her feet, so soft, so smooth, being tormented by her own 2 hands and feathers. She didn't beg, just sat there and laughed, just loving the moment. After a few more mintues, Amy was on the verge of passing out, so Mia stopped, and returned Amy to the spread eagle position, allowing her to breathe easier, all while massaging, rubbing and kissing and licking Amy's awesome feet.

"Here's what I'll do. Did you enjoy that?" asked Mia. "Yes. Yes I did. Thank you." replied Amy. "Would you like some revenge?" asked Mia. "More than anything." said Amy. "Then so shall it be so. You're in control now. Do as you please." said Mia. Amy grinned, broadly and blinked. Instantly they switched positions, Mia lay immobile, in the spread eagle position, and Amy stood at her feet. She removed her dress, until she was nude. Her body glistened with sweat, as did her red flushed cheeks. Amy stretched Mia's soft and large toes back, making her silky smooth soles completely vulnerable, with her toes spread. "Are you ready to laugh?" asked Amy.

part 3 will be up soon.
 
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Eek! Started to read it, but then saw the paragraphing... Anythin you can do, or shall I go through it as it is?
 
lonelykimiko said:
Eek! Started to read it, but then saw the paragraphing... Anythin you can do, or shall I go through it as it is?

fixed it... i think. just joined everything together and made smaller paragraphs.
sorry, my windows notepad does that for some reason.
 
Wow, this is really good! Really nice imagery in your writing. I can actually picture Amy going through all of that. You also use something I don't think I've seen before: Tickle torture with repulsorlifts. You get bonus points for that. I can't wait to see part 3 😀
 
Sockstickler said:
Wow, this is really good! Really nice imagery in your writing. I can actually picture Amy going through all of that. You also use something I don't think I've seen before: Tickle torture with repulsorlifts. You get bonus points for that. I can't wait to see part 3 😀

thanks! i'm glad you all like it so much. what are repulsorlifts?


lonelykimiko said:
😀 Kimmy likes! 😀

i'm glad you like it. you think i did her justice?

well, more Mia and Amy tickling on the way.
 
I like the story, but its a lot tamer than the last one, as in she likes it right from te start. All in all a damn good story 😀 .
 
lonelykimiko said:
I like the story, but its a lot tamer than the last one, as in she likes it right from te start. All in all a damn good story 😀 .

true, true, but ever think she was into tickling/bondage from the beggining?

i'm glad you liked it, i'm especially proud of it. i'd give anything to stroke her soles with feahers, they're so soft and wrinkly.
 
Here's an article that kind of describes repulsorlifts. Basically, they help things hover.
 
and where's this article?

...you mean something like anti-gravity drives for ships? or just plain magic? yeah, Mia is in her own little world, and can do whatever she wishes.
 
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