Mrs. Muffette

[Celtic_Emperor]

The face is actually the best drawn I've seen from you yet. The expression is pretty good and everything is aligned properly on the face. Her sides are not an issue in this picture either, but two of the main problems still remain: her forearms are too long and her waist is too thin. Because her torso is now more anatomically correct, her lower body is not, in proportion to the torso. Her hips need to be broadened and that will cause her legs to need to be thicker as well. Remember the figure 8 and this will help you. Right now it's sort of like an 8, but with the lower half being thinner than the top half. For the figure 8 approach to work properly, both parts need to be about the same size. Her fingers are a bit too long, also.

The face is really good, though.

 

[Relent<]

I had a feeling that was the problem. I was mainly focusing on the upper-body this go around, and everything else was sort of slapped on.
And thanks for the face compliment ^___^

 

[Iridis_vi1]

Yes, the face is certainly an improvement on how they were drawn before.

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

I had a feeling that was the problem. I was mainly focusing on the upper-body this go around, and everything else was sort of slapped on.
And thanks for the face compliment ^___^

The lesson to be learned then is don't slap things on. 😛

(And you're welcome)

 

[Relent<]

I'm currently working on an /m piece just to keep my skills sharp in that regard, but you'll hear more about it later (not Muffette/Aye related, btw)