On The Rack

[janwil78]

waking again

I wake again, hoping it was all a horrific nightmare. Not a chance. To my chagrin, yet to my pleasure, I see all of the fiendish expert tickler's, awaiting my awakening. The ease slowly towards me, preparing their fingers. I scream, as their nails inch closer to my helpless, ticklish body. The instant the first touch is made, I surge with maniacal laughter, and within seconds all of the hands are working at my body. They continue to tickle everywhere that I knew was ticklish, as well as finding new spots, along the way.

 

[thetickleking]

Your screams only seem to fuel their desire to tickle you more intensely, probing deep to find draw every ounce of strength that you have, and transfer it into laughter. Then, all of a sudden they stop. Then, everyone huddles as close together as they can, around your midsection. Screams of ticklish agony erupt from your mouth, as all hands join forces in a concentrated assault on your ribcage.

 

[kis123]

The ticklish sensations hit your body like electricity. You thought you were too tired to take anymore. Your lungs and ribs ache from the laughter, your body in pain from fighting against the restraints. All you can do is laugh, scream, beg, and wait for relief. Yet, no relief is in sight any time soon........

 

[hollywoodhoney]

wow

And then, just when you are at your limit, one of the girls pulls out a knife and chops off your left leg. Baffled by this unexpected behavior, the large amazon woman violently scorns the knife yielding woman. "What in the Fuck are you doing you fool"? Exclaims the amazon! Just then, one of the other women grabs the newly severed leg and uses it to beat the amazon lady about the head, neck, face, and chest. Meanwhile, you lay there writhing in pain wondering how the hell you are going to make it to work the next morning with only one leg?

 

[kis123]

And then, just when you are at your limit, one of the girls pulls out a knife and chops off your left leg. Baffled by this unexpected behavior, the large amazon woman violently scorns the knife yielding woman. "What in the Fuck are you doing you fool"? Exclaims the amazon! Just then, one of the other women grabs the newly severed leg and uses it to beat the amazon lady about the head, neck, face, and chest. Meanwhile, you lay there writhing in pain wondering how the hell you are going to make it to work the next morning with only one leg?

Sorry, but you kinda' lost me here!

 

[thetickleking]

And then, just when you are at your limit, one of the girls pulls out a knife and chops off your left leg...............

Yeah, seriously. What's that all about?

 

[ctft2001]

Okay, lets try and get this story back on track ...

You then wake up realizing that when you were at your limit, you must have blacked out and had this very strange nightmaer about your leg being cut off.

Much to your relief, both legs are in tact. However, much to your horror, you are still tied to the rack and the four ticklers are still all around. One is drawing figure eights on your foot with the tip of a pen while the second is digging her fingers hard into the sole of your other foot. The third tickler is working her fingers in your underarm and the fourth tickler is gently running her finger from your other pit, down to your thigh and then back up again.

You are laughing hysterically and while you are enjoying it, you find it hard to handle and are hoping you might pass out. Then remember your dream, you force yourself not to black out again, but that means no relief from the tickling ...

 

[Abellytickler1980]

Just when you think that things cannot get any worse, here comes a fifth tickler. She is in all-black and ready to make you suffer. She notices that your midsection is safe from tickling, but she is ready to fix that. She comes over to you and starts licking your tummy and the laughter intensifies. You are laughing so hard that you are in tears. Clearly there is no relief in sight.

 

[hollywoodhoney]

Oh My

When just then, the fifth women rears up and violently rips through your ribcage embracing your heart in a death grip from hell. You are stunned that the amount of pain involved with this action is less than you would have thought probably because you are in shock. The lady suddenly rips your heart from your chest cavity and hoists it in the air still beating and spurting its last drops of precious blood everywhere. You realize that you are still somehow alive and then come to realize that your last pathetic boyfriend was actually not far off when he called you a heartless bitch.

 

[kis123]

When just then, the fifth women rears up and violently rips through your ribcage embracing your heart in a death grip from hell. You are stunned that the amount of pain involved with this action is less than you would have thought probably because you are in shock. The lady suddenly rips your heart from your chest cavity and hoists it in the air still beating and spurting its last drops of precious blood everywhere. You realize that you are still somehow alive and then come to realize that your last pathetic boyfriend was actually not far off when he called you a heartless bitch.

What is this about? It's supposed to be about a tickling story, not blood, guts and gore.

 

[ctft2001]

When just then, the fifth women rears up and violently rips through your ribcage embracing your heart in a death grip from hell. You are stunned that the amount of pain involved with this action is less than you would have thought probably because you are in shock. The lady suddenly rips your heart from your chest cavity and hoists it in the air still beating and spurting its last drops of precious blood everywhere. You realize that you are still somehow alive and then come to realize that your last pathetic boyfriend was actually not far off when he called you a heartless bitch.

Is this really the type of thing that appeals to you Hollywood, or the type of story you find erotic and/or exciting? I truly am curious. I thought maybe the first post was a joke, or your humor (just in terms of it being posted in a tickling story on a tickling thread and it containing no tickling) and tried to bring it back to what I perceived to be the true nature of this post. Your second post, however, leaves me thinking otherwise.

 

[kis123]

Is this really the type of thing that appeals to you Hollywood, or the type of story you find erotic and/or exciting? I truly am curious. I thought maybe the first post was a joke, or your humor (just in terms of it being posted in a tickling story on a tickling thread and it containing no tickling) and tried to bring it back to what I perceived to be the true nature of this post. Your second post, however, leaves me thinking otherwise.

If this is what appeals to him/her, maybe he/she should write their own story and not mess with this one. This is supposed to be a tickling fantasy story, not some vicious, violent horror story.

 

[Abellytickler1980]

I think for the sake of this story, Hollywood's parts should be removed so as not to change the purpose of this story. Let him/her write their own horror story elsewhere and stop tampering with this one.