~plot brainstorm~

[Chris31]

Plot brainstorm!

hey so I write tickle-fiction occasionally, and I find myself more and more interested in the specifics behind the plot of stories. Like, I understand the motivating factor for writing the story being that the reader wants someone to get tickled… but what I’m interested in is the “why?”

for example, I’ve always had a fantasy about college girls tickling each other- but that fantasy just seems so incomplete without a plot. Why are they tickling each other?

So I thought maybe it has to do with a sorority initiation… but that’s still so bland! That’s still not a plot…

so I made up this scenario where a girl pledges to a sorority, and they find out that her absolute worst fear is being tickled. So they devise a plan- they invite her to a party and then berate her for not bringing any alcohol. They tell her she has to contribute to help fund the party, so it’s just tradition that when someone shows up with no alcohol that they have to sit in the foot-stocks all night. Harmless enough, right? The poor pledge agrees to the trick and the whole party takes turns wildly tickling her all night long as they record it on their cell-phones.

lol so that’s just one example. I’m not looking for “uh… sorority initiation?” … I’m looking for those details that really give the story juice. Maybe it’s a story about cops and robbers or spies? Maybe it’s a story about a rivalry? Maybe it’s a story about a medieval witch-hunt? Whatever it is… give me your juice!

I mean, ya know, if you want to. =)

(also, I realize that my example was non-con /f which might not be everyone’s taste. I don’t mean to limit this discussion to just one particular genre; I want to hear them all! I want all the ideas! I mean, like, ya know... if you want to give them.)

 

[Primal]

I also enjoy stories quite a bit more when there’s a little extra thought that goes into the details like that. I’ll give an example of a story plot I’ve been saving to write. It also involves college students being tickled.

The story would be set at a large university, beginning at the crowded football stadium. Thousands of students and fans fill the stands before. The game is set to start soon, but there’s a planned recognition ceremony beforehand.

The announcer will introduce 5 female student athletes to a small stage in the middle of the field one at a time. They each are star athletes chosen from other major sports at the university - track and field, soccer, basketball, volleyball, and gymnastics. Each lady is dressed up and looking stunning. They stand on stage for the somewhat rushed recognition speech. But then are rushed off the stage so the field can be cleared for the game to start. It will be televised, so the schedule must be adhered to. The ladies don’t publicly receive their awards that were supposed to be given to them on the stage.

As they are standing off to the side in a small huddle awaiting their awards, they all have a feeling of being considered lesser than because they don’t play the dominating sport at their university. They’re star athletes that nobody seems to really care about.

As they wait, they are approached by a young man who hands them all his business card. The information on the card is a bit vague, but it appears to be some sort of video company that works with models. He confidently introduces himself and gives his sympathies for how the ladies were treated during the small portion of time that was supposed to be designated for them. The women are unsure of what to make of him, but they quickly feel understood. He explains that he runs a modeling company that specializes in making videos of women being tickled. As they recoil a bit from that explanation, he quickly adds that he would be willing to pay generously to have all of them film something where they would compete against one another to see which athlete could last the longest when tickled. The winner would receive an additional payout.

The ladies are a bit stunned, but are now seriously considering his offer. Not only do they all feel downtrodden at the moment, but they all realize how little money they are able to make when they’re spending all their time working toward improving in their respective sports. They practice and compete all the time. They don’t have time to work anywhere consistently. And God knows the university doesn’t pay anything. Sure they have some scholarships, but those don’t put gas in their cars right now.

The man sees they’re on the fence and helps answer their questions about his videos. The ladies are understandably hesitant to be in a tickle video that will get posted on his website. He counters that by telling them thousands of college age women across the country are probably on OnlyFans taking their clothes off or showing their feet and getting paid loads of money. So why shouldn’t they do essentially the same thing, but they would keep their clothes on and go through a legitimate modeling company.

The girls are won over and agree to shoot the video, feeling that it may be a positive experience. He promises that his paying customers will adore them much more than their alleged “fans” that barely acknowledged them at the ceremony. And they really could use some extra money that wouldn’t require them to work tons of hours in their free time they didn’t have.

And then the rest of the story would feature the ladies showing up to the guy’s house to film the video. They would each be wearing their respective sport attire to start, to easily show the viewers what sport each girl represented. Hired ticklers would begin tickling them until they began to give up one by one. The last remaining girl would be awarded the payout and recognized as the best athlete out of the group.

 

[Chris31]

I also enjoy stories quite a bit more when there’s a little extra thought that goes into the details like that. I’ll give an example of a story plot I’ve been saving to write. It also involves college students being tickled.

The story would be set at a large university, beginning at the crowded football stadium. Thousands of students and fans fill the stands before. The game is set to start soon, but there’s a planned recognition ceremony beforehand.

The announcer will introduce 5 female student athletes to a small stage in the middle of the field one at a time. They each are star athletes chosen from other major sports at the university - track and field, soccer, basketball, volleyball, and gymnastics. Each lady is dressed up and looking stunning. They stand on stage for the somewhat rushed recognition speech. But then are rushed off the stage so the field can be cleared for the game to start. It will be televised, so the schedule must be adhered to. The ladies don’t publicly receive their awards that were supposed to be given to them on the stage.

As they are standing off to the side in a small huddle awaiting their awards, they all have a feeling of being considered lesser than because they don’t play the dominating sport at their university. They’re star athletes that nobody seems to really care about.

As they wait, they are approached by a young man who hands them all his business card. The information on the card is a bit vague, but it appears to be some sort of video company that works with models. He confidently introduces himself and gives his sympathies for how the ladies were treated during the small portion of time that was supposed to be designated for them. The women are unsure of what to make of him, but they quickly feel understood. He explains that he runs a modeling company that specializes in making videos of women being tickled. As they recoil a bit from that explanation, he quickly adds that he would be willing to pay generously to have all of them film something where they would compete against one another to see which athlete could last the longest when tickled. The winner would receive an additional payout.

The ladies are a bit stunned, but are now seriously considering his offer. Not only do they all feel downtrodden at the moment, but they all realize how little money they are able to make when they’re spending all their time working toward improving in their respective sports. They practice and compete all the time. They don’t have time to work anywhere consistently. And God knows the university doesn’t pay anything. Sure they have some scholarships, but those don’t put gas in their cars right now.

The man sees they’re on the fence and helps answer their questions about his videos. The ladies are understandably hesitant to be in a tickle video that will get posted on his website. He counters that by telling them thousands of college age women across the country are probably on OnlyFans taking their clothes off or showing their feet and getting paid loads of money. So why shouldn’t they do essentially the same thing, but they would keep their clothes on and go through a legitimate modeling company.

The girls are won over and agree to shoot the video, feeling that it may be a positive experience. He promises that his paying customers will adore them much more than their alleged “fans” that barely acknowledged them at the ceremony. And they really could use some extra money that wouldn’t require them to work tons of hours in their free time they didn’t have.

And then the rest of the story would feature the ladies showing up to the guy’s house to film the video. They would each be wearing their respective sport attire to start, to easily show the viewers what sport each girl represented. Hired ticklers would begin tickling them until they began to give up one by one. The last remaining girl would be awarded the payout and recognized as the best athlete out of the group.

oh wow! this is soooooo juicy lol. i love how convincing this mysterious studio-promoter is- honestly he's got me talked into it (not that i'd be hard to convince hehe) but i also really like the idea of the uh... "friendly" competition lol this sounds like its gonna get downright ugly (in a good way though). you got me all excited to read this now 😉 i'll be keepin an eye out for it lol and thanks so much for sharing!! this is a really great idea and great inspiration fuel!! definitely one that'll end up living rent free in my crazy brain =) thanks again!!!