~plot brainstorm~

[Chris31]

Plot brainstorm!

hey so I write tickle-fiction occasionally, and I find myself more and more interested in the specifics behind the plot of stories. Like, I understand the motivating factor for writing the story being that the reader wants someone to get tickled… but what I’m interested in is the “why?”

for example, I’ve always had a fantasy about college girls tickling each other- but that fantasy just seems so incomplete without a plot. Why are they tickling each other?

So I thought maybe it has to do with a sorority initiation… but that’s still so bland! That’s still not a plot…

so I made up this scenario where a girl pledges to a sorority, and they find out that her absolute worst fear is being tickled. So they devise a plan- they invite her to a party and then berate her for not bringing any alcohol. They tell her she has to contribute to help fund the party, so it’s just tradition that when someone shows up with no alcohol that they have to sit in the foot-stocks all night. Harmless enough, right? The poor pledge agrees to the trick and the whole party takes turns wildly tickling her all night long as they record it on their cell-phones.

lol so that’s just one example. I’m not looking for “uh… sorority initiation?” … I’m looking for those details that really give the story juice. Maybe it’s a story about cops and robbers or spies? Maybe it’s a story about a rivalry? Maybe it’s a story about a medieval witch-hunt? Whatever it is… give me your juice!

I mean, ya know, if you want to. =)

(also, I realize that my example was non-con /f which might not be everyone’s taste. I don’t mean to limit this discussion to just one particular genre; I want to hear them all! I want all the ideas! I mean, like, ya know... if you want to give them.)

 

[Primal]

I also enjoy stories quite a bit more when there’s a little extra thought that goes into the details like that. I’ll give an example of a story plot I’ve been saving to write. It also involves college students being tickled.

The story would be set at a large university, beginning at the crowded football stadium. Thousands of students and fans fill the stands before. The game is set to start soon, but there’s a planned recognition ceremony beforehand.

The announcer will introduce 5 female student athletes to a small stage in the middle of the field one at a time. They each are star athletes chosen from other major sports at the university - track and field, soccer, basketball, volleyball, and gymnastics. Each lady is dressed up and looking stunning. They stand on stage for the somewhat rushed recognition speech. But then are rushed off the stage so the field can be cleared for the game to start. It will be televised, so the schedule must be adhered to. The ladies don’t publicly receive their awards that were supposed to be given to them on the stage.

As they are standing off to the side in a small huddle awaiting their awards, they all have a feeling of being considered lesser than because they don’t play the dominating sport at their university. They’re star athletes that nobody seems to really care about.

As they wait, they are approached by a young man who hands them all his business card. The information on the card is a bit vague, but it appears to be some sort of video company that works with models. He confidently introduces himself and gives his sympathies for how the ladies were treated during the small portion of time that was supposed to be designated for them. The women are unsure of what to make of him, but they quickly feel understood. He explains that he runs a modeling company that specializes in making videos of women being tickled. As they recoil a bit from that explanation, he quickly adds that he would be willing to pay generously to have all of them film something where they would compete against one another to see which athlete could last the longest when tickled. The winner would receive an additional payout.

The ladies are a bit stunned, but are now seriously considering his offer. Not only do they all feel downtrodden at the moment, but they all realize how little money they are able to make when they’re spending all their time working toward improving in their respective sports. They practice and compete all the time. They don’t have time to work anywhere consistently. And God knows the university doesn’t pay anything. Sure they have some scholarships, but those don’t put gas in their cars right now.

The man sees they’re on the fence and helps answer their questions about his videos. The ladies are understandably hesitant to be in a tickle video that will get posted on his website. He counters that by telling them thousands of college age women across the country are probably on OnlyFans taking their clothes off or showing their feet and getting paid loads of money. So why shouldn’t they do essentially the same thing, but they would keep their clothes on and go through a legitimate modeling company.

The girls are won over and agree to shoot the video, feeling that it may be a positive experience. He promises that his paying customers will adore them much more than their alleged “fans” that barely acknowledged them at the ceremony. And they really could use some extra money that wouldn’t require them to work tons of hours in their free time they didn’t have.

And then the rest of the story would feature the ladies showing up to the guy’s house to film the video. They would each be wearing their respective sport attire to start, to easily show the viewers what sport each girl represented. Hired ticklers would begin tickling them until they began to give up one by one. The last remaining girl would be awarded the payout and recognized as the best athlete out of the group.

 

[Chris31]

I also enjoy stories quite a bit more when there’s a little extra thought that goes into the details like that. I’ll give an example of a story plot I’ve been saving to write. It also involves college students being tickled.

The story would be set at a large university, beginning at the crowded football stadium. Thousands of students and fans fill the stands before. The game is set to start soon, but there’s a planned recognition ceremony beforehand.

The announcer will introduce 5 female student athletes to a small stage in the middle of the field one at a time. They each are star athletes chosen from other major sports at the university - track and field, soccer, basketball, volleyball, and gymnastics. Each lady is dressed up and looking stunning. They stand on stage for the somewhat rushed recognition speech. But then are rushed off the stage so the field can be cleared for the game to start. It will be televised, so the schedule must be adhered to. The ladies don’t publicly receive their awards that were supposed to be given to them on the stage.

As they are standing off to the side in a small huddle awaiting their awards, they all have a feeling of being considered lesser than because they don’t play the dominating sport at their university. They’re star athletes that nobody seems to really care about.

As they wait, they are approached by a young man who hands them all his business card. The information on the card is a bit vague, but it appears to be some sort of video company that works with models. He confidently introduces himself and gives his sympathies for how the ladies were treated during the small portion of time that was supposed to be designated for them. The women are unsure of what to make of him, but they quickly feel understood. He explains that he runs a modeling company that specializes in making videos of women being tickled. As they recoil a bit from that explanation, he quickly adds that he would be willing to pay generously to have all of them film something where they would compete against one another to see which athlete could last the longest when tickled. The winner would receive an additional payout.

The ladies are a bit stunned, but are now seriously considering his offer. Not only do they all feel downtrodden at the moment, but they all realize how little money they are able to make when they’re spending all their time working toward improving in their respective sports. They practice and compete all the time. They don’t have time to work anywhere consistently. And God knows the university doesn’t pay anything. Sure they have some scholarships, but those don’t put gas in their cars right now.

The man sees they’re on the fence and helps answer their questions about his videos. The ladies are understandably hesitant to be in a tickle video that will get posted on his website. He counters that by telling them thousands of college age women across the country are probably on OnlyFans taking their clothes off or showing their feet and getting paid loads of money. So why shouldn’t they do essentially the same thing, but they would keep their clothes on and go through a legitimate modeling company.

The girls are won over and agree to shoot the video, feeling that it may be a positive experience. He promises that his paying customers will adore them much more than their alleged “fans” that barely acknowledged them at the ceremony. And they really could use some extra money that wouldn’t require them to work tons of hours in their free time they didn’t have.

And then the rest of the story would feature the ladies showing up to the guy’s house to film the video. They would each be wearing their respective sport attire to start, to easily show the viewers what sport each girl represented. Hired ticklers would begin tickling them until they began to give up one by one. The last remaining girl would be awarded the payout and recognized as the best athlete out of the group.

oh wow! this is soooooo juicy lol. i love how convincing this mysterious studio-promoter is- honestly he's got me talked into it (not that i'd be hard to convince hehe) but i also really like the idea of the uh... "friendly" competition lol this sounds like its gonna get downright ugly (in a good way though). you got me all excited to read this now 😉 i'll be keepin an eye out for it lol and thanks so much for sharing!! this is a really great idea and great inspiration fuel!! definitely one that'll end up living rent free in my crazy brain =) thanks again!!!

 

[Daniela.Feet.79]

Bueno, la verdad que tengo varias ideas en cuanto a historias (la mayoría me involucran a mi y mí grupo de amigas como víctimas), una de esas ideas tienen que ver con un grupo (ya sea de la Mafia, Narcotraficantes, etc), al ser gente de ese estilo normalmente "limpian" a las personas y ahí es donde entramos mi grupo de amigas y yo, ya que estaríamos en el lugar equivocado en el momento equivocado, siendo testigos de cómo se deshacen de una persona, por lo que usamos ir a la policía. a hacer la denuncia sin saber que la propia policía está implicada, entonces poco a poco cada una de nosotras (aclaro que somos un grupo de 6) es capturada por esta "organización", siendo interrogadas y torturadas.

Otra idea tiene que ver con un "cosquilleador en serie" (tomando como base la idea anteriormente mencionada de la universidad), un estudiante común y corriente que por giros inesperados pasa de ser ese "alumno ejemplar" a ser uno de los 10 prófugos más buscados por sus crímenes

Si no es mucha molestia pedir que alguno de los dos (Chris31) o (Primitivo) llevarán a cabo estas ideas, los invito a mandarme un mensaje privado para charlar al respecto

 

[Titillating 2.0]

All these ideas sound really good and well-driven by a strong plot. One idea I’ve been toying with recently is more of a consensual story where a kinky 38 year-old fitness instructor runs her own private gym where she seeks out girls on certain sites who share a ticklish fetish and uses that as her main selling point. She convinces these girls that tickling is a great way to keep in shape and indulge their kink craving— IF they’re willing to go through torture. Still debating if it’s more fun to try a multi/F or F/multi-F but that’s the plot

 

[BlueLine7045]

I have a lot of story ideas in my head, but they never end up making it to this site. My wife is a cop, so I have actually been trying with a few cop story ideas. They've probably all been done before, but hey, so has basically every single movie plot/concept in Hollywood, so what can you do, right?

Anyway, I was thinking the story focuses on a female Hispanic cop. Short, but tough, no nonsense. Anyway, there is a serial tickler in her city who has a fetish for tickling cops, and several female officers over the past couple months have been abducted by this person and tickled beyond their breaking points. They have also given up a lot of confidential information which is causing the department a lot of problems.

As such, the department mandates a female officer specific training over the course of two days. In addition to hands on self-defense training, the female officers have to go through a few hours of tickling resistance training in order to prepare them and help them build up resistance in case they find themselves captured by the serial tickler.

Being the incredibly tough, strong, and stubborn woman she is, our main officer is able to go the entire first day without cracking or losing her cool. This annoys her training officers, who up to this point, have been able to break every other female officer there relatively easily. As such, they team up on her and go out of their way to make her crack without any luck. She goes home, smug and confident, while the training officers are pissed.

They brainstorm and come up with an idea. For the second day of training, our female officer remains confident she will easily breeze the second day of training similar to the first. Unfortunately for her, her trainers had other ideas. Whereas they were tickling her the previous day, they contacted her relationship partner (boyfriend, fiancee, husband, etc. In my head, it's based off of myself, but if you're into f/forums, I guess it could be a gemale partner as well). Anyway, our officer's relationship partner is there at the training and will be tickling her today. Unlike the training officers yesterday, the relationship partner knows all of our officer's spots and the techniques to drive her crazy.

Our officer whines about how this is cheating and isn't fair but relents and is determined not to give into the trainers' sneaky tactics. Unfortunately, things don't go her way. She tries to hold out as long as she can, but her partner is just too good and knows her too well. She eventually cracks, but it doesn't stop there. The relationship ship partner also shows the training officers how to properly tickle the officer and get the best reactions. She ends up being gang tickled by several people and pushed way beyond her breaking point.

Figure if the story did well, there could always be a part 2 where she gets captured, either alone or with a partner, by the serial tickler.

 

[Bluedash9317]

I think setting the scene is so important when writing good tickle erotica. It really helps encaptulate the reader and keeps them hooked in the sequence of events that leads to the tickling.

Typical I like to start with;

• Location and time in history (when and where is it)
• Describe the characters (age, looks, personality)
• Slowly build the plot that leads to the tickling (back story if needed)

I did this for my first two stories and it worked well. My stories are mainly around more older women (50+ ISH) getting well deserved revenge on younger women (18+).

As for scenario ideas, I'm kinda off writing for now but some plots I had planned;


-A group of Village wives get revenge on an OnlyFans girl for manipulating their husbands to send money
-A young cleaner is caught stealing jewellery from the residents of an old people's home, and they extract some karma
- A couple of troublesome girls vandalise a village market, and get deservedly lead to the town stocks

My ideas are endless though and mostly just sit in my brain lol

 

[lois333]

Well it really depends on what you want your story to be. You can have a plot as an excuse to a scene, or actually write something more consistant with scenes along the way.

In the first case, yeah just information for context and visualisation are enough, there's no greater motive or it's just a simple trope needed.

But if you want to write something richer, then you have to follow the same codes as in any constructed narrative :
-Who are the characters ? What do they want ? Why to they do that ? And finally how did the scene impact their overall dynamic and psyche.
-Is it an ordeal toward a goal ? Then is that a test of resistance ? Something to overcome ? Did they fail ? succeed ?
-Is there a villain ? What's his motive ? Just another tickling or something darker ? Do his actions actually have impact on something, someone ?
-Is this an exploration, like a lovely couple trying, exploring or just loving tickling ? Then the goal is pleasure (wether it is physical, emotional through domination or light play etc), and the chapter can be centered around that.

It all comes down to the what you want the story to convey imo