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Tmclk

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“How’s the new place coming along, Deb?” Jay asked his sister, who had recently relocated to a large, 3-bedroom townhouse. She had found a good deal on the place, which was a mixture of fixer-upper and nearly new. The house had that “lived in” feel Deb really enjoyed.

“Getting there, getting there” she replied, leading to a request for weekend help. “Need to hang some fan lights this Saturday, but I’m not sure how to do it” she stated, subtly plying for Jay’s offer of assistance.

“Make you a deal, Debs..” Jay began, “You make dinner and I’ll hang the fan lights for you, how’s that sound?” Jay had always loved his sister’s cooking, and, as they hadn’t spent as much hanging-out time together as they were used to, figured the day would be productive on many levels. Deb agreed almost immediately.

“You got it” she replied, “One dinner in exchange for 4 fan lights. Deal, buddy” Deb stated, extending her long-nailed right hand for a deal-sealing handshake. Knowing Jay wouldn’t let her off that easily, the shapely sister sweetened the pot by leaning inward for a quick lip buss. The two had engaged in this sort of lips-barely-touching (yet arousing nonetheless) hello-goodbye kissing activity for some time, keeping such between themselves. They related equally well as platonic friends as siblings.

Saturday morning, 10am. Jay arrives at Deb’s new digs, half-heartedly tapping on the door before letting himself in anyway. Aware her brother was coming by mid-morning, Deb acknowledged his arrival from upstairs, calling out “Hi, hun..I’m up here, in the bathroom. Scrubbing the tub”, prompting Jay to scale the spindle-lined stairs in search of the home’s new owner.

Entering the bathroom, Jay viewed Deb, clad in shorts and an old, ratty tank top that stretched out just above her navel, such that every cleaning motion extension exposed her soft, sensual tummy. If Jay had a favorite portion of Deb’s incredibly well-toned (despite zero participation in exercise) body, it was her midsection. He had always been teased and turned on seeing her in clothing such as this day’s, especially knowing how ticklish Deb was in that, and, other, areas of her body. Mere seconds passed for Jay to put these ideas together and form a game plan of sorts for “having a little fun” with Deb.

“I like the casual, get down to work look, D” Jay commented to Deb as she fully extended to reach an upper portion of the tub’s tile. Even the small of her back was ticklish, a fact Jay would test before embarking on his day’s promised labor. Her back turned to him, Jay took a few steps forward while continuing conversation with Deb.

“Walls look good, Debs” he said, adding “Smooth and clean, like other things around here”, traversing her exposed low back and side-waist with his fingers, resulting in a giggly ‘Ah! Don’t be tickling me!” response from Deb, who should have committed this brief experience to memory. But didn’t.

“Awright, I better get started here..Call me if you need me, k?” Jay apprised his sister, who tried hard to rid her face of the tickle-given smile. “Ok. I’ll be in here for a little bit, then want to do the trim down the hallway” she said.

After an hour or so, Jay had installed 2 of the 4 fan lights, and had worked up a decent sweat, as had Deb, who had been busy cleaning trim and other upstairs-located fixtures. Taking a brief break, Jay found Deb standing on a step-stool, spraying the glass on a hallway light. “Perfect. Just perfect. Look at her” he muttered to himself, planning on enacting his plan at any moment. “Now, while she’s still up there. It’s tickle-time, Debs!”

Pacing towards her, Jay had partially expected Deb to scale down from the step-stool and take a break with him, however, to his delight, she remained in place. Standing in close proximity below her, Jay’s face was parallel with Deb’s exposed stomach, a “dream spot” of sorts for him. Further, since her arms remained raised, a full, direct navel tickling would begin unimpeded.

“Got two done so far” he told Deb, “Now just need to do something else before the other fans” he continued, awaiting the curvy sister’s inquiry as to what that might be.

“Like what?” she asked, unaware of Jay’s intention.

“This!” Jay exclaimed, grasping hold of her waist and effecting intense tickling upon Deb’s navel, tummy, and ribs, sneaking in several bellybutton licks in the process.

“Ahh!Haaa!!Nooo!NOTAGAINWITHTHETICKLING!” she surprisingly burst with laughter, held in place by her brother’s hands and arms. Trapped, she knew if she wiggled or twisted, she’d hit the floor in the opposite direction falling off the step-stool; Falling forward would place her right into Jay’s arms, and, who knows how much more he’d tickle her if she was under his full control.

“YES, Deb!” Jay teased, “Yes your stomach! And ribs! And boobs!” he laughingly apprised her, swirling his fingers inside and around her dead-center navel and working his way up towards her marvelous 36D breasts. “Lemme see if the top is as ticklish as the tummy, huh?” he spoke, reaching his left hand into her shirt to tickle the soft, white under portion of her boobs, causing Deb to exhale a breathy, sexy laugh/scream.

“Haahh!!Nopleasedontnotinthere!” she called out, begging Jay to halt the tickling so she could at least gain a few breaths of air. “Ahhhh!Mygodmytitsareticklish!” Deb exclaimed, arms holding onto the hallway walls for balance. “I’llgetyouforthis!Ahhaaahaaaholyshitholyshitahhh!”

“No, you won’t, Debs” Jay teased his conquest, “Cuz I know you like this..Say you do and I might stop” he egged her on, not letting up on the tickling intensity. In fact, he had managed to work the snap of her jeans shorts open, leaving only the zipper between himself and a potential naked lower-torso tickle of this hot physical specimen also known as Debs. He knew that would likely put her over the edge.

“NooooIdont..” she sighed, forcing her statement out in mid-laughter, “PleasepleasestopitstopitnowIcantbreathe!” Deb begged, sensing Jay would indeed drop her shorts to the floor and tickle her until she was wet. As it was, she’d felt herself moistening “down there”, and wanted, at the very minimum, leave something for Jay to be denied. After all, she had just unknowingly served herself up for this ongoing tickling, which, if being honest with herself, she’d actually enjoyed. Deb and Jay were no strangers to trading physicality; This little incident simply added to it.

“Come on now, darlin’” Jay suggested, “Sa-ay it and I’ll let up”. Softened by the redness in her face and gleam of her beautiful smile, Jay was prepared to allow Deb to scale down from the step-stool in order to catch her breath. Only, however, if she was prepared to admit she wasn’t as adverse to this impromptu tickling as she’d let on earlier. The smart bets said she would admit to enjoying this little act, as it reaffirmed their “more than just sib” relationship. Besides, Jay was long aware of Deb’s wild, sexual side, so he figured this would feed into that.

“HokayHokay” the statuesque female allowed, “If I say it, you’ve gotta let me down”. Deb was in negotiation phase at this point, but, for a few seconds, did let her guard down. “You know I don’t mind your hands on me, hun” she stated, making direct eye contact with Jay, who had transitioned from tickling her tummy to lightly caressing her midsection and below. The mood had changed from fun-tickling to a calming-down of sorts, with each realizing they’d maybe broken new ground.

“I knew you didn’t, Debs..Just having a little fun with ya” Jay told her, helping her down from her post. “Did it because we get along like we do..And, hey, not for nothing, but, LOOK at you!” he joked, ending with a request for “a good one this time”, referring to the quick kissing they had done in private for so long.

“Ok, ok” the sister stated, regaining her composure and regular breathing, “One good one, then we both get back to work. Little bit, I’ll make us dinner” she apprised, permitting Jay a full-lipped mouth lock. As they broke embrace and paced towards their previous working areas of the house, Deb told Jay:

“By the way, hun” she teased, “You didn’t get to ALL of my ticklish areas. Maybe next time?” With that, Jay was assured of further tickling experiences with sweet Debs.
 
Blech!

:wooha: Okay I've about had my fill of this brother/sister incestuous stuff. :weird:
I guess some people can look past it but it's about 3 miles from being my cup of tea. You're really into this stuff, eh?
 
nessonite said:
:wooha: Okay I've about had my fill of this brother/sister incestuous stuff. :weird:
I guess some people can look past it but it's about 3 miles from being my cup of tea. You're really into this stuff, eh?

Know what- I have to go along with you here. In another post I thought I understood where this sister "attraction" came from in connection with tickling. This story is sexual lust for your sister. I don't care how attractive my sister was, this is sick stuff. Come on, you can't be that hard up for a female companion.
 
So, which is it? You gave an excellent conflicting opinion. Are you, as you state "going along with me here", or totally against? Keep in mind, too, that this section IS the "story" section, not necesarrily a "recanting of exact experience" section. Additionally, I don't see where a story about a brother-sister is any different than the ones in here detailing tickling a mother's feet (yuck!) or, worse and even sicker, a male-male tickling. Just depends on one's own personal point of view. Similiar to bad tv or radio, you have the ultimate censoring tool: just don't read it.


Tklpro said:
Know what- I have to go along with you here. In another post I thought I understood where this sister "attraction" came from in connection with tickling. This story is sexual lust for your sister. I don't care how attractive my sister was, this is sick stuff. Come on, you can't be that hard up for a female companion.
 
Had I known it was about a twisted brother/sister relationship, w/ them lip-locking and all, I DEFINATLY would not have read it. And wats wrong with tickling your mother's feet? Only reason y you might say eww is if her feet were disgusting. I see nothing wrong in making a parent laugh. after all, they were the ones who introduced tickling into our lives when we were babies. You'd think you'd want to see your mother giggling and squirming from being tickled. well to each his own.
 
Without getting into a whole son-mother Oedipus debate, let me simply state that tickling a parent is to me, as someone else stated, "3 miles from my cup" of comfort. Even stories about it make me uneasy. As for if you had known the general idea of the story before reading it, I would think you would have stopped after finding it out fairly early on when the reader was made aware of the two character's greeting one another with a light little buss (as many people do). Seems like someone felt like being a little more naughty then he or she leads on. If you finished it, how bad could the story have been?


Iluv2btickled said:
Had I known it was about a twisted brother/sister relationship, w/ them lip-locking and all, I DEFINATLY would not have read it. And wats wrong with tickling your mother's feet? Only reason y you might say eww is if her feet were disgusting. I see nothing wrong in making a parent laugh. after all, they were the ones who introduced tickling into our lives when we were babies. You'd think you'd want to see your mother giggling and squirming from being tickled. well to each his own.
 
?You know I don?t mind your hands on me, hun? she stated, making direct eye contact with Jay, who had transitioned from tickling her tummy to lightly caressing her midsection and below.

Are you telling me that lightyly caressing below your sister's midsection is normal, healthy, behavior?
I've got nothing at all against brother sister tickling stories. Nothing against relative tickling of any sort. I'll go even further in my non-discriminatory thinking and say that I don't mind tickling betweeen ANY two people regardless of ages, race, gender, relationship, etc.
But the rather graphic telling of sex play between siblings is no less sick and twisted than had it been a father lightly caressing below his daughter's belt there. 18+ or not.
There are a lot opf things I shared with my brother. Soda straws, ice cream cones...
he joked, ending with a request for ?a good one this time?, referring to the quick kissing they had done in private for so long.
THAT is not one of them!
*barf*
 
Taken in the context of "normal, healthy behavior", what, exactly in this forum qualifies as that? By it's very existence and nature, this forum and story section are focused upon those who practice anything but "normal, healthy behavior". And, please, keep that key word in mind here: "Story". Not confession, not psychoanalysis. Story. As in, intended to generate some form of response. Judging by these last few posts, I'd say such has been accomplished.

As for the "rather graphic telling", I'd advise you to read some other story postings in this forum. Mine, by comparison, pale to some others.


nessonite said:
Are you telling me that lightyly caressing below your sister's midsection is normal, healthy, behavior?
I've got nothing at all against brother sister tickling stories. Nothing against relative tickling of any sort. I'll go even further in my non-discriminatory thinking and say that I don't mind tickling betweeen ANY two people regardless of ages, race, gender, relationship, etc.
But the rather graphic telling of sex play between siblings is no less sick and twisted than had it been a father lightly caressing below his daughter's belt there. 18+ or not.
There are a lot opf things I shared with my brother. Soda straws, ice cream cones... THAT is not one of them!
*barf*
 
Sibling tickling is one thing. I support it totally. Sibling sex is another thing altogether. Lip locking? Eww. Crotch carressing? Double eww.
 
Hahus, sweetie, honey,darling, bottom line is, this story is sick. The fact the male character gets aroused from kissing his sister, is quite disturbing. And then he asks for a longer lip lock??? Utterly gross!!! Only reason y I continued the story, was because I was hoping you'd add more tickling, and less touchy-feely sexually. I know YOU think tickling isnt normal, but trust me, it is. I know you say it is just a story, but it is a very disgusting story, with ( I think) tickling thrown in to make up for the sexual relationship between two characters who aren't married. And worse, CLOSELY RELATED If there is a part two, I will not read it.


As I always end my comments....to each his own.
 
I have to say, i have been coming to this forum for some time now and this is a pretty sick piece of work. As others have stated im not against sibling/relation tickling at all, but all the sexual undertones and content in this story make it really quite wrong!
Also, pretty much every other story that hahus has written involves his sister with strong sexual undercurrents, quite worrying really.

Just a thought.........
 
I could write stories about genocide, child molesting, bestiality, etc. It'd still be "just a story" but it would still be sick and wrong and reflect rather poorly on my character.
I think there are other boards out there for people to post incest type stuff. I'd say it's a safe bet that the folks here are not into that whole scene.
And yeah you can go on about how "nothing here is 'normal' anyway" but trust me...90% of the other stuff here is really quite normal even if it's not understood by the generalpopulace. That doesn't make it automatically sick or twisted.
But fantasy about kissing and crotch rubbing your siblings certainly crosses a few lines. It doesn't take a genius to see that it is certainly not on the same level as the tickling on the rest of this site.
 
So, basically, what you are saying is, "what's not right for the few should be not right for all". Thank you, Adolf. And, to the best of my knowledge, I never included, in an story submission, rubbing of anyone's crotch. Not once.

Additionally, many of the stories in here smack of sameness. How many times can someone read "hahahaha" in a few paragraphs? Fine, I get it. Stocks. Feet. Teachers. At least my submissions are a little different from those cookie-cutter tales. You may try to slam my content, but, do not slam the style. Most of the absolute crap in here is the saaaammme stuff one can read anywhere. A little bit of variety wouldn't kill some people. If I changed "brother and sister" to "boss and employee", nobody would be complaining about my submissions. I think some people are a bit on the prudish side, even for a board like this, and need to lighten up. It's a STORY site, folks!
 
If I changed "brother and sister" to "boss and employee", nobody would be complaining about my submissions. I think some people are a bit on the prudish side, even for a board like this, and need to lighten up. It's a STORY site, folks!

You're probably right! So make the change, eh?
People DO like variety! But horse screwing would be variety too! Not all variety is a good thing! It seems fairly obvious that the vast majority of those here find those to be rather sickening so one would think that in the interest of the forum you'd want to refrain from posting things that nobody is interested in.
Hell, I don't care if you write it, post it, have wet dreams about it, whatever. Your choice if you want to engage in incestuous writing. But maybe you should take the feedback as sort of a hint, you know?
 
My point here is that there are some people out there, like me, who do not and have not engaged in foot tickling. If that's supposed to be the focus of this forum, then, change the damn thing to "Feet-Only" or "Feet R Us", and don't lead on that other views or varieties are included, which, obviously, they are not.

Any defender of freedom of speech would tell you "I may not like what you say, but, you DO have the right to say it". Further, I do not reply negatively to anyone else's posting out of respect for THEIR views. Personally, I find a lot of the stuff in here to be poorly written, grammatically-devoid offerings (i.e.- is it SO hard for people to determine that "to" does NOT mean "also"? Run the spell and grammar check for God's sakes!).

Any future submissions may, or, hell, may not, include similiar storylines as those being discussed and scrutinized here. Regardless, you have shown me that I, too (hey, I know how to use that word..too, not to) need to over-scrutinize and pick apart anyone else's STORY. Guess respect for other's seemingly sick views will be tossed out the window.
 
Precisely. Look at the buzz this has generated. Think it won't keep people interested in the board? How many do you think have checked in just to see this running, back and forth commentary? The nasty and naughty will beat the common and same-old same-old every time.
 
I doubt many people here are so desperate for entertainment that they would want to sit and watch people bicker back and forth. Something many many people have commented on regarding this forum is the total lack of flames and nastiness. I think discussion on this topic has been exhausted and personally I'm through with it. You want to post more sister-lust them be my guest. But based on the reaction so far don't expect a lot of high praise for it.
 
I want my baby back, baby back, baby back, baby back, baby back ribs. I want my baby back, baby back, baby back, baby back, baby back ribs. Chile's baby back ribs.
 
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The last poster needs to go get something to eat. The one before that needs to understand that receiving praise for offering variety isn't what it's all about. I, myself, happen to be quite tired of this back and forth diatribe, and will no longer respond to moronic commentary. Think what you wish, Nessonite. But let it stay in your own head.
 
I agree with Drew 70 about sibling tickling and having two sister myself I find nothing wrong with a brother and sister giving each other a hug once in awhile. As far as the more intense stuff goes I think you should do that with your wife or girlfriend but for sure not your sister.
 
So, I've read the story myself.
Can't really mind my business, can I? No. Can't. What's the word? Meddler?
Aye, that's me. 😀

First things first. Hahus asked to be judged by style, not contents.
As the first comment went, it is cute. Well written and believably composed.

I'm not that much into tk fiction - I prefer graphical contents, since I draw and paint myself. But I've read awful stories. Full of typos and just plain lame.
Speaking of style, this is not one of them.

So, that's my review.


Now, back to Hahus's words. Well, Benito, where is YOUR tolerance, here? 😀
While comments have been harsh, you've been QUITE direct! 😀


You have plainly stated that most of what is posted on this site is far from being healthy. That's not nice. It means I'm probably unhealthy myself, for instance. 🙂

Secondly, I think you are trying to pass a sib-sex story as tk fiction.
While you are free to write what you like, don't expect everybody to appreciate it. And especially, don't try that old "we are all weird anyway" excuse. Not with me, please. 🙂

Personally, I don't care if you - as a person - have an attraction towards a relative - or you just like to write about it. It's your cup of tea.
Just avoid remarks about other's cup of tea. That homophobic remark about M/M was unnecessary. Really.
And on top of it, you call Nazis those who don't agree with you. That is pure nonsense.


Let's keep in mind this is a TK forum. Not a free for all forum.
I'm not saying you are evil or whatever. THAT is not my business. 😀

But a different reaction on your part would have been more mature.
If I post a pic and people tell me it's sick or scary or anything, I'll take notice and stop posting similar pictures.

It would seem you want to agitate, not contribute.
As it seems you "ram" into those who - harshly - disagree. They might be wrong. But your ways will lead you nowhere.


As far as I'm concerned, you could - should? would? - post more. Just consider your audience. And plan accordingly.


My 2 eurocents.
Reg's.
 
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