I'm a first time story writer so any feedback is welcome. I apologize for some of the spelling and syntax errors. I have big fingers that do not interface very well with a laptop keyboard 🙂 Also sometimes my R key sticks. If I tried to correct them all I'd never get the stories out.
Is there anything people particularly like? Want more of? Less of? Anything I can include?
Some parts are longer than others because I'm trying to keep them as different portions of an interlocking story without over detailing everything. Also many arts start with sub stories, some of which I hope to develop into future stories. While I'm not into celebrity stories I am going to mention a celeb in Part 6 and I have a story idea to develop over her ordeal. I'll give you a hint, her first name is Misty and she's a famous volleyball player 🙂
Two items you probably won't see much of because I'm not into them so much though at least one I'll consider if it fits in with the overall concept of the story.
1: Foot tickling. I'm not into it, though I can add some if it fits. However there won't be a long story simply about foot tickling. Since I'm not into it I can't give it justice.
2: Revenge . Again sorry, not into it and face it, no one is going to get revenge on 12 college girls.
Off To The Races will end after the first night of Rachel and Sammis ordeal which is well into the wee hours of Saturday morning. I am doing this simply to have new victims with new outfits and new games/predicaments most of which I have already thought of. So if you see something in their story about Lena thinking they'll find out about that Saturday evening, it won't be covered in the story.
If the readers don't mind I intend on keeping the core group of college girls in every story.
Is there anything people particularly like? Want more of? Less of? Anything I can include?
Some parts are longer than others because I'm trying to keep them as different portions of an interlocking story without over detailing everything. Also many arts start with sub stories, some of which I hope to develop into future stories. While I'm not into celebrity stories I am going to mention a celeb in Part 6 and I have a story idea to develop over her ordeal. I'll give you a hint, her first name is Misty and she's a famous volleyball player 🙂
Two items you probably won't see much of because I'm not into them so much though at least one I'll consider if it fits in with the overall concept of the story.
1: Foot tickling. I'm not into it, though I can add some if it fits. However there won't be a long story simply about foot tickling. Since I'm not into it I can't give it justice.
2: Revenge . Again sorry, not into it and face it, no one is going to get revenge on 12 college girls.
Off To The Races will end after the first night of Rachel and Sammis ordeal which is well into the wee hours of Saturday morning. I am doing this simply to have new victims with new outfits and new games/predicaments most of which I have already thought of. So if you see something in their story about Lena thinking they'll find out about that Saturday evening, it won't be covered in the story.
If the readers don't mind I intend on keeping the core group of college girls in every story.
