Mmm. I like how you included the background story as how she came to work for you guys and such. It really makes it that much personal. I tend to like tickling people who I'm friends with and more as a fun gesture than anything else, so hearing little things like that really add to the experience for me, at least.
Anyways, she definately sounds like a fun and outgoing person from what you've said. Probably someone I would end up tickling in a real-life situation. ~_^. Anyways, I look forward to hearing more from Jordan.