shortest tickling story ever! (joke)

[flightless_me]

Once there was a girl, she got tied up and tickled.

THE END!

,MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :wooha: ....LOL.......feeling crazy today lol.

 

[CheshireCatNY]

Simple....to the point....I like it.....😛

 

[Yet_One_More_Idiot]

Simple....to the point....I like it.....😛

I dunno Cheshire - don't you think that maybe there's a few superfluous words in that story? 😛

 

[flightless_me]

lmao! i love ya guys!

 

[LonelyKimiko]

An interesting story, good character development, great buildup to a climatic ending. Superb 😀 😛 .

 

[Darth Vegeta]

Rofl. I sure as hell didn't see that coming miss. (; hehehe.
I bet the sequel will have twice the action and 2 times less plot.

 

[flightless_me]

Rofl. I sure as hell didn't see that coming miss. (; hehehe.
I bet the sequel will have twice the action and 2 times less plot.

ready for sequel???

Once there was a girl who got revenge on the person who tickled her before so she tickled him back.

Everyone laughed and won

the end!

Boom i should write books! be an author...this is gold medal stuff man!

 

[mick88]

Then off course you need to start with poems to go with your story
The ticklee was tied to the bead
were she was tickled and laughed off her head

 

[Killerk]

How about a haiku (5 - 7 - 5 syllabyls?)*clears throat*

Deep in the dungeon
Lay a very ticklish girl
And she was tickled

*prepares self for barrage of rotten fruit!*

 

[Cbarton]

Once there was a girl, she got tied up and tickled.

THE END!

,MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :wooha: ....LOL.......feeling crazy today lol.

I dunno....the special effects are fantastic, but the plot's a little weak.....

 

[LonelyKimiko]

I dunno....the special effects are fantastic, but the plot's a little weak.....

Yeah, you can really see where the budget went....

 

[Kalamos]

Down the sink...

...

Oops. Sorry. Thought this was a PM.

😉

 

[tk22]

lmao, what a great thread

 

[flightless_me]

tickle poems i love it...hmmmm *thinking of a good poem....is at a loss......* oh well what the hey! *tosses feathers at killerk* sorry i got hungry and ate the fruit

 

[Kalamos]

Weird fruit.

 

[flightless_me]

Eck! wait did he say rotten fruit??? I ate rotten fruit!!!!!


*cries* *sniff* hold me :weird:

 

[Random_noob86]

Don't worry, i always eat rotten fruit. Wait, is that a bad thing?

Anyways, i loved the story, but next time please make it a little shorter, and use less complex words. The plot was very hard to follow along, and i'm not used to reading stories this long.XD

 

[GEORGIATKLER]

Next Time I'll Just Read The Cliff Notes............

Hey, I Went To School With That Girl!!! Can You Post A Clip? I Wonder If She's A Member Of Tt Or Tmf? Great Idea And Responses!

 

[XxMystxX]

My feelings for this are the same as the last story of this kind.

Needs more pusher-bots, or robots in general.

 

[Kalamos]

And ninjas.

 

[oceanhead]

with a little effort, i could see this working as a detailed character sketch.

 

[flightless_me]

Hmmm i agree with everyone....

so i made a new story

once upon a time,

the end.

*woaH!* im like a genious...

 

[Sockstickler]

Hmmm, good beginning. Satisfying end. Not too long and boring a plot. Two thumbs up!

 

[flightless_me]

Takes A Bow*