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Okies will do. Shall i continue the second story here? This could be the 'working' area 😛
 
“…” he frowned. He did his best not to stare at the nude female Jedi and Ti quickly deactivated the holo for the same reason.
Jedi were still human after all… .
”I see… what are the demands?” Yun asked.
“A hefty ransom” Shaak Ti said.
”I hope the Council hasn’t accepted. One should never submit to such people” he said.
“True. That is why we are heading over there under the guise off paying the ransom… and than we’ll free them” Shaak Ti said.
“Only three Jedi?” he said.
“We’ll be assisted by Republican Security forces” Master Ti said.
“Hmmm…” Yun said pulling a sour face.
“You disapprove?” Master Ti asked.
“Well they managed to capture 2 good Jedi so far…” he said “Sending ‘only three’ seems a bit… overconfident no?” Yun said.
“We’ll act as if we’re going to pay… coming in full force isn’t the solution” she said.
“Perhaps but the Republican Security forces are not that good. You know the rumours don’t you?” Yun said.
“So you’d rather leave Luminaari and Bariss to their fates?” Shaak Ti said.
“I never said that… I just wish we could…”
“Well we can’t!” Shaak Ti snapped.
Yun frowned surprised.
“Master? Are you alright?” Aayla asked.
“Sorry Yun… I… I’ve just been out of things lately” Master Ti apologised.
“Off course… no problem” Yun confirmed.
She held her head a bit. “Tired that is all but we have much to do”
Yun nodded in agreement. He had a hunch that his approaching Knighthood but also the torture of Bariss and Luminaari had something to do with her stressful behaviour.
But the signature serenity of Shaak Ti soon returned as she jumped into her Starfighter.
Yun smiled at Aayla and put a hand on her shoulder.
“Don’t worry about her, Yun” Aayla said. Yun nodded “Don’t worry” he said. His hand caressed the saber that hung at his belt. The cilindric object much larger than the hilt of Shaak Ti’s or Secura’s saber. As a Duelist, he had desired a saber that brought the greatest certainty and thus gave it much work. It had all in double and enabled singlehand or doublehanded use.
Doublehanded if he required very strong blows or parries. One never knew. And a longer hilt made such maneuvers more easily.
Yun jumped into his starfighter “X! Get ready for a mission” he said.
X beeped. The little black and silver astromechdroid sat behind in the ship, head sticking out.
His friend added another beep before starting a diagnostic off the ship.
Unlike most Jedi, Yun always took X with him. The two got along great and he used his techskills though they were not super, to upgrade the little fellow at times.
“Ready Master Ti… lead the way” he said.
“Affirmative. I’m ready too” Aayla’s beautiful young voice came. The blue Twi’lek’s gaze met Yun’s as her fighter stood next to him.
They nodded at each other.
“Good… lift-off!” Shaak Ti said, piloting the most advanced fighter.
The trio lifted off and headed for space.
There their Hyperdrive rings awaited them. These fighter would lock onto them to be capable of hyperspace movement.
Once that was done, they flew towards the small Security Cruiser awaiting them. The Sentinel was a typical Republican patrolvessel, capable of tackling Pirate ships and criminals.
But Yun would have preferred to see the Republic get a strong, loyal and well trained force.
The Outer Rim was lawless and not under firm control of the centralized government.
But he decided not to speech on that. It usually just irritated Shaak Ti. And Aayla would make her typical comments of ‘you sound like Master Vos!’.
He smiled and sighed as after the typical salutes, the vessel and the three starfighters entered hyperspace… heading: Pirate Ship… or so Master Ti claimed…

Ventress smiled as she sat in her commandchair.
On the viewscreen Kor’bayn Ronar had appeared. Clad in crimson armour and with a black vizored helmet, the skilled Mercenary and Bounty Hunter brought out a report and new orders from Dooku.
Unknown to the honourable warrior, Ventress ‘desired’ him.
The stern man did his job to the letter. Dooku paid and he obeyed.
One day she’d have him she had decided. Ones she had almost seduced him. Apparently he was quite kinky. He liked a woman strong. Rumour was it, he was part Mandalorian.
She had noticed that when she had trained with him… forced him more or less to train with her… the offensive advances worked best. He liked his women dominant it seemed. And he had liked her legs… and feet. She already had a cunning plan to get him… when the opportunity arose. But he was halfway across the galaxy… so it would be for another day. He had saved her once. Perhaps that was what made her ‘tick’ for him.
She reprimanded herself for being so mushy. No no… love was beyond her. It was lust… yes she assured herself nothing more.
He was off high calibre even if he wasn’t like Dooku’s main agent… Jango Fett.
With the war only moments away, she had been preparing. She smiled “She’d get the info she required and than… she’d brainwash them all” she looked at the machinery.
Durge was dissatisfied though. The huge hunter was alien and massive. He stood to her right and clad in his silver and blue armour, he reminded people of Jango Fett… not vice versa.
It irritated him. Dooku had refused to enlist him for now. In fact this was a little test run for him. Ever since the alien predator had reawaken from his ‘hybernation’ as he referred to it… he had been waiting… waiting for a chance.
“The Jedi are on their way. They continue to believe they have to deal with pirates. Master Voss was unavailable. But you’ll get Master Ti, Jedi Knight Aayla Secura and Padawan Yun Antares. I made sure they were sent” Ronar’s voice came. The voice ‘seemed’ young but she couldn’t be certain. In any case the voice was a bit warped by the helmet.
“Alright” Ventress said. The whiteskinned, bald woman smiled with her black lips. Standing up, her black leather attire, revealing her arms and most of her legs, creaked a bit.
“Tell Dooku all goes well. We’ll find out what happened ‘there’.”
Kor’bayn nodded “Off course Lady Ventress. Until next time”.
She smiled at him “Off course ‘Kor’bayn Ronar’” she said to the armouclad mercenary.
Had she detected some desire to be with her in his voice? Or was that wishful thinking.
He was so hard to read even when in front of her. Always encased, always stern and spartan.
Jango Fett – Durge – Kor’bayn Ronar…. Three deadly warriors in their own right.
One was the best off the moment wanting to retire, one had been the best in age gone by wanting to be it once again and one was a young rising star.
Ironic.
Personally if it were up to her she’d replace the brutal but cunning Durge with Kor’bayn.
She didn’t like him much. But he did his job well and Dooku seemed to want to keep him around as if planning to unleash him at a set time.
The Dark Jedi… Asajj Ventress folded her pale hands together as the screen faded to black. Time to go visit her two Jedi prisoners… .
She chuckled at the thought of the future.
Having so many coloured feet in the stocks would be interesting indeed.
So many voice to hear giggling and laughing.
Bariss’s pure youthful giggling and squeeling….
Luminaari’s exotic laughter…
Shaak Ti’s mature and steady yipps and and chuckles.
Aayla Secura’s seductive and sweet laughter.
And Yun Antares’s humiliated and heavy grins.
She nodded pleased. This would be fun. And on top she could please her Sith Master, Count Dooku. She slowly walked into the turbolift, followed by the huge Durge.
The doors shut and she headed away from the bridge to the belly of her vessel.

Bariss sat next to her master in the stocks. Her feet hung out still. As were those of her Master Luminaari. She bit her lower lip.
“I hope they won’t come. If they need to go through the same as us…”
“Shus my padawan. Our friends will overcome their trap. Stop blaming yourself. It is not constructive” she said “Relax, focus on the force”.
”These drugs they inject us with block out the Force master… I feel so… ‘empty’” she said.
Her yellowskinned Master nodded.
Bariss sighed and looked around. “I just can’t see a way out for us… perhaps…” suddenly she shrieked and laughed.
Luuminari looked back as much as she could.
Their arms chained to the ceiling, they were defenceless.
Ventress had tickled Bariss’s sides by surprise.
”Such weak little ribs” Ventress said continue to tickle. After letting Bariss wiggle a bit more, she than started to slide to her hands to her armpits and tickled her there.
“Do you like this Bariss? Do you?” she teased.
“NOHOHOHOHOHOHOOO!”
“Yes you do… you’re aroused by it. You twisted little Jedi!” Ventress teased.
Bariss blushed and moaned and struggled.
She couldn’t defend herself. Ventress moved away and tied Bariss’s toes back.
“Droids… begin!” she ordered.
A trio of droids floated closer. Feathering her tummy, breast and armpits, Bariss squeeled.
But her feet were left alone for now.
Moving to the Jedi Master who looked at her still proudly and defiantly, Ventress grinned.
“Still resisting huh?” she said “I broke you 2 days ago. I can do so again? I bet you’ll beg faster now I know all your weaknesses” she said.
“Bariss has ticklish feet and tummy but her breasts are her weakness” she smiled “For you however… the focus” she tied her toes back. She knelt at the end of the stocks.
“Are…” she began to lick her arch “Feet…” Ventress smiled evilly.
Luminaari bit her lip again. Indeed the licking hounds had been what broke her. A fourth droid meanwhile floated to Bariss’s feet and tickled away. By now Bariss was shrieking.
The droids keeping her on edge but never truly going too far to let her go unconscious.
One feather had even found a very special place…
But Luuminari now faced the full attention of Ajajj who until now had mostly focussed on Bariss while leaving her to the droids.
But now… now Ventress was bent on seeing her squirm under her own delicate but evil touch.
“Tickle tickle little master” Ventress said wetting her lips. “Let the games begin” she said as she ran a long slender pale indec under the mighty Jedi Master’s arch.
Without her powers… Luminaari felt so… powerless.
She surpressed the laughter but soon… soon it would get out. She knew it.
Ventress lowered her head and sucked on Luminaari’s toe, nibbling at times before tickling with both hands.
A little giggle escaped her mouth. A giggle that was nothing compared to the shrieking of Bariss. But she’d soon join in. She knew what Ventress was capable off.
 
Darth Vegeta said:
Okies will do. Shall i continue the second story here? This could be the 'working' area 😛

Yeah, you can continue it here besides I love to see your work.
 
i'm starting on a new story. it has to do with Grievous capturing Shaak Ti and Aayla after Hypori ( from the Star Wars Cartoon). he never actually has had a captive Jedi before. but now that he has two, he wants to make them squirm.
 
darthvader05 said:
i'm starting on a new story. it has to do with Grievous capturing Shaak Ti and Aayla after Hypori ( from the Star Wars Cartoon). he never actually has had a captive Jedi before. but now that he has two, he wants to make them squirm.

Sounds interesting, go for it.
 
is the story you are doing right now, is it set during, or before the clone wars? because i want to contribute a piece.
 
hmmm it's only days perhaps 2 weeks before the Clone Wars. After this story is done it'll enter the Clone Wars era.
I kinda 'bended' the canon realities a bit... but than again the novels - microseries and comics contradicted each other somewhat too on when which chars 'popped' up 😛
But i try to stick to continuity.
 
Very good stories !
are you going to torture Secura in another story !
She got captured and tortured alone ?
 
Story i'm working on or next one (depending on it's length) will have Aayla among the tortured. After this 'mission'. I'll have a story with some playful tickling with Bultar Swan and Aayla involved. You know... 'feel good tickling' to contrast the 'torture'.
After that i plan to go into Ventress, Kor'bayn. And i'm hoping to bring in a few other chars along the road. Not sure who yet.
Perhaps Khaleen and Vos?
 
Yun Antares looked around as his ship left hyperspace. They were at the rendez-vous.
He had suggest to Master Ti to let the Republican freighter go into hiding behind a nearby moon. Leaving hyperspace there.
As usual Master Ti had followed his insights in such matters.
“Scanning surroundings” Aayla Secura said. “This is the meetingpoint but I don’t see a ship”.
“They’ll come” Master Ti said.
”If they’re not already here” Yun noted. He looked around worried. Behind him X beeped.
But his sensors gave a blank.

Durge grinned “Fools. Like we didn’t expect them to come with aid”.
He watched on the screen, the Republican cruiser.
“It was a tactically sound decision but not that surprising. Though Space Pirates would have gone for it… Durge and Ventress were no pirates.
Crossing his steelclad arms, the giant Alien Hunter turned to the captain off the ship.
”Prepare to leave the crater…” he said “And launch fighters on my signal” he said amused.
He was no Battlefield commander but he’d seen many wars and his common sense and cunning made him more than a match for such a pathetic Republican Patrol Cruiser.
Pirate Frigates stood no chance against it except the rarest of Destroyers but his ship was well maintained, manned by elite mercenaries and off a techlevel at par with the Republican ships or the fleets of the most wealthy galactic organisations.
”As you wish Commander Durge” the captain said.
Durge smiled behind his helmet. The savage regenerating alien looked forward to facing the Jedi. Thousands of years ago, he had killed many and had gotten proficient at it. He wondered wether the Jedi still lived up to their ancient counterparts.According to Dooku, they no longer were what they once were. But who knew?
As the bloodlust rose in him, he felt the ship vibrate and lift off… heading out of the crater at high speed… they’d surprise attack the enemy ship. It wouldn’t know what hit them.
“Open fire as soon as possible” he said “And immediately send out the fighters.

The captain of the Republican Cruiser Sentinel, sat in his chair. Where was the enemy?
“Sir?” a young officer said.
“Yes?” the captain said, turning to face him. He ran his index over his moustache.
“I think we have a problem sir…”.
The captain frowned.
“Enemy ship incoming…”
“From where!” he said.
“Below… it appeared from the m…”
The Sentinel received several hits.
“Launch fighters!” he ordered.

Having left their hyperspace rings, the Jedi Starfighters moved even closer to their destination.
“Blast!” Yun said over the comm..
“What is it Yun?” Aayla asked.
“The Sentinel! It’s under attack” he said veering away. “We must go assist them” he said taking lead.
“The plan is ruined… now they can use the hostages against us” Shaak Ti said “The cruiser was meant to spring into action after we liberated the hostages…”.
“The flow off war is beyond planning at times” Yun said.
“You really are enjoying this aren’t you Yun?” Aayla said.
Shaak Ti remained silent. She had to tell Yun something. Reprimand him about his veneration of war and conflict, his philosophy of right to the strongest. But she didn’t have the will… .
And… there was work to do.
The trio of Jedi Starfighters met incoming Fighters off the enemy.
Small oneseaters.
“State of the art Scorpio ships. Tech usually used by Mercs” Yun said having a keen interest in military tech. He dodged fire, barrelrolled and took out a fighter.
“You’re saying they’re not pirates?” Aayla said while taking out one of them.
“I’m saying we’re in trouble…” Yun noted.
Joining up with the Republican fighters, a fierce dogfight began. Calling upon the Force, Yun let it aid him in performing the most drastic and intuitive movements.

However at that moment disaster struck and the Sentinel received a crippling blow.
It’s shields down and it’s energy taken out by Ionbeams, it was helpless to resist… .
”Darn! And they’re blocking all outgoing communications” Yun said.
But the enemy vessel seemed to turn away from the immbolized Republican ship and headed for them.
Taking out another fighter, Shaak Ti gave orders to the other Republican fighters to rejoin the Sentinel.
“Master?” Yun asked.
“They want us… let’s lure them away” she said.
“…” Yun frowned “And give them 3 more hostages? Great thinking” he said venomously.
“Yun!” Aayla reprimanded him.
”No… no Aayla he’s right. But we need to adapt”
“If we had brought more Jedi like I…”
“BUT WE DIDN’T” Ti lashed out. “Just follow my lead” she ordered.
“Yesss Master” Yun said reluctantly. The trio of fighters broke off.

“The Jedi are our priority… I want them immobilized and captured” he said.
Durge smiled “Oh this will be fun” he said. “Pull them into the hangarbay… than deal with the remaining fighters” he said.
”And where will you go Commander?” the captain asked.
“To have some fun…” Durge said with his low voice. He barely fitted in the turbolift.
As the doors closed, he crossed his arms and headed for the belly off the ship… to the hangarbay.
Activating his comm, Durge spoke “Ajajj?” he asked.

Luminaari moaned and closed her eyes. She twitched her toes. Liberated from the stocks after hours of tickletorture, the tonguebath she now received was blisful to her.
Ajajj smiled evilly.
The Jedi Master no longer even felt embarassement as Bariss cuffed to the cold steel wall watched.
Luminaari was a writhing needy mess. “Aaaah” a low moan escaped the beautiful Jedi Master.
The tongue of the whitepaled Dark Jedi, ran over her arches, her heal and the sides of her foot.
At times Ventress nibbled. She gasped. “You are good practice Luminaari. You are proud and stubborn but you broke. And I’ll do the same to Shaak Ti” she grinned. A long lick made Luminaari giggle as Ventress’s tongue ran from the heel to her big toe.
“You want release Jedi?” she taunted “Beg and perhaps I’ll grant it…”.
Luminaari sobbed but resisted. She shook her head. Suddenly the sharp nails of Ventress ran over her feet.
Luminaari shrieked and laughed.
Her nipples were rigid. And strange thoughts went through her head. Arousal was to be banned but being watched by Bariss while Ventress did all this to her… .
She surpressed the thoughts. Torture and humiliation were never arousing.
Ventress, crawled onto her waist.
“Perhaps I should go play with Bariss again? She liked her release… she begged”
Bariss looked away.
Luminaari stared defiantly at Ventress “NO!” and she spat Ventress in the face.
Angered, Ajajj slapped her. “Soon you’ll see things our way. I’ve been preparing some things to make it unbearable on you and our future guests…” she said.
Suddenly her comm went off. Taking the little apparatus, Ventress spoke “Yes?” she said.
“Durge here… come to the main hangarbay… our guests will soon ‘arrive’” he said.
“Hmm understood” Ventress said “And the Republican vessel Kor’bayn notified us off?”
“Immoblized” he replied.
“Well done Durge… I’ll let Dooku know off your… performance”
“…” Durge didn’t reply.
Ajajj smiled evilly “You’ll pay Jedi… but not now… soon though” she said getting off.
She gave her inner thighs a quick tickle making a lustful Luminaari squirm even more.
Her yellowskinned body was all sweathy. Such a gorgeous body she had.
She looked at the chained Bariss who was even more beautiful with her gorgeous thighs, thin waist and beautiful buste.
The young padawan had still not recovered from the previous sessions. Ventress poked her tummy in passing but did nothing more.
Bariss flexed her abs in response.
”See you soon both off you!” she giggled vilely before leaving.
“Oh no” Bariss said “Did you hear… they’ll capture them!”
“Stay calm” Luminaari said. “We’ll find a way out” she said. “They can’t stop so many Jedi… they can’t” she said comfortingly. But she wasn’t all too sure about that claim.
”I hope so master, I hope so” Bariss said. And than Luminaari fell asleep.

As the Jedi Starfighters were pulled in, Yun sighed. Rubbing his temples… things were not improving.
“We’ll need to make a break for it immediately” Yun said.
“Yes. We’ll need to stick together and move forth…” Aayla said.
Shaak Ti spoke “Perhaps but it won’t be easy” she said “Look!”.
Indeed the hangarbay showed them a full compliment of heavily armoured soldiers.
“Mercs” Yun said “Uniformed, organized, well equipped… a private army” he noted “These are NOT pirates” he said. As if reprimanding someone.
Shaak Ti twitched in her cockpit.
For some reason tensions between her and Yun were rising greatly.
She also sensed even greater pride and violence in him than ever before.
“Strange who are those?” he said “I sense a great dark aura from one… the woman” he said.
“A Dark Jedi?” Ti said as the three Starfighters were put down in the hangarbay. “NOW!” he said as he jumped out of the cockpit. Drawing his saber, he ricocheted the blasterbolts directed at him.
Aayla Secura and Master Ti did the same. Experienced as they were they went side to side and advanced.
Sending back the blasterbolts off their foes with graceful skill.
Shaak Ti was elegant, focussed and flowing while Aayla was precise and energetically with dancelike movements.
Yun contrasted with them using a more aggressive style than Ti and lacked the dancelike movements of Aayla. He was efficient and went for the kill… nothing more.
Three completely different ways… .

Shaak Ti disarmed a group of soldiers, pulling away their weapons with the force.
But than was forced to suddenly parry a duo of red lightsabers.
”Who?” Ti said, facing Ventress.
Aayla Secura came to her aid and the two Jedi faced off against the Dark Jedi who received aid from concentrated blasterfire from her minions. She grinned evilly “Two little Jedi in my web and the third…” she looked away a moment than grinned at Ti “Falls to the big bad bear”. She had seen Durge… he had picked who to play with ‘alone’. While she and some soldiers would deal with these two. It suited her fine and Durge needed some fun.

Cutting himself a path suddenly a fist hit him, Yun was slammed back and rubbed his cheek.
Almost dizzy, he had to shake off the pain.
He looked up and faced the overtowering form off Durge. Yun backed away a bit.
The blackclad Jedi, twirled his blade.
Though he didn’t bear the title, he knew that he was the equal of a Knight already. And when it came to combat he was far ahead off many Knights.
Regaining focus, he took in the heavilyarmed warrior before him. This giant twirled two blasterpistols, holstered them and than drew them again. They were huge weapons.
“I am Durge Jedi… and today you are my prey…”.
”…” Yun took on an offensive pose “And I am Yun Antares… and I have only one thing to tell you”.
“And that is?” Durge asked.
“Cry Havoc… and slip out the dogs of war!” he roared and attacked. Once again a strange darkness seemed to beckon him but he surpressed it’s call. He had the power he needed. Ti would never forgive him for giving in to the Darkside. Nor would Bultar or any of the others.
He jumped up but Durge flew back with his jetpack and opened fire just as Yun landed.
He could only block the blows in the nick of time.
This would be tough. Durge was experienced and a lot more than a mere brute. He’d need to think fast.
Besides the place was still filled with heavily-armed goons.
He quickly glanced around and saw Aayla and Shaak Ti face off a paleskinned woman in black wielding two redbladed lightsabers… the Darksider he had sensed.
He quickly returned to look at Durge who started to fire at him.
He blocked the blows and sent them back but the few hits that got to him were negated by his powerful armour.
He moved fast and his aim was perfect.
Yun had to close the distance fast.
Calling upon the force… he relaxed his mind and summoned forcespeed… .
With lightningspeed… he rushed forth, preparing to spear Durge… .
But Durge flew up and dropped small explosives. They exploded nearby and he only just jumped away.
Landing crouched he send a forcepush towards Durge. He was hit and slammed to the ceiling, landing crouched himself.
”Gooooood Jedi… very good. This will be fun” he grinned.

Shaak Ti and Aayla fought against the Dark Jedi. She was good. Very good but it was unclear wether Ventress could have stood against Shaak Ti, let alone her and Aayla.
But the mercs were a nuisance, forcing them to block a lot.
Ventress continued to taunt them. This was all a game… and separated from Yun, they just fought here in the hangarbay. This was not constructive… . They needed a plan Master Ti knew.
 
Hmmm i'll try to work more on the story the coming week. But exams are coming my way slowly so the next few weeks i'll be rather busy.
Also requests, ideas, types of tickletorture you'd like to see etc etc plz do submit them and i'll see what i can do. The better explained... the more chance i'll integrate it in this or a later story.
 
hmm...
Aayla Secura should be interrogated with feathers on her feet.^^
I would love to read it.

well done^^

May the force be with you.
 
Well i'm planning on having them all together in stocks 😛 A nice colourful palette 😛
 
OOC: little bit so far. Exams approach... .

IC:

Shaak Ti lashed out at Ventress. The fight was taking a lot of her. More than she had expected. The constant irregular firing of her enemies made duelling Ventress very hard.
Suddenly however a shot went off behind her.
The stunbolt hit her in the back. “Aaagh!” she said as her nervous system shut down and she fell unconscious onto the floor.
Aayla let out a yell “Master!” her blue blade parried a double blow from Ventress. Kicking back the Dark Jedi.
Cursing Ventress Force Pushed Aalya back.
”Now stun her!” Ventress ordered. Aayla wanted to jump up, but too late… several stunbolts hit her…. Too many to block or evade… .

Yun smiled meanwhile, jumping onto the higher level. Taking the high ground, Yun looked around. Holding his lightsaber, he breathed heavily, the fight had been hard so far.
And the inhuman Durge didn’t seem to have put much effort in it. Than again they were playing by his roles.
Walking forward, he looked around. The soldiers below didn’t move.
And Durge was nether on this level of stairs near the exit nor in the air.
Something was amiss… but what?
Suddenly Durge burst through the metallic floor itself, slamming Yun at high speed against the ceiling. Grabbing his booted foot, Yun was swung around and smashed onto the ground.
Knocked out after a flash of pain… all went dark for Yun.
Durge landed nearby. “That was fun, not bad for a young one” he grinned poking the jedi with his foot.
“And alive still… good” he said with his heavy voice.
Ventress approached him. The ivory skinned young woman looked at him furiously “I told you… to be careful. He might have died!”.
“But he didn’t” Durge merely answered “So don’t complain… now you can have your fun” he said.
Ventress looked at Yun, ignoring the huge Bounty Hunter.
She looked at the female Jedi, still sedated and being cuffed by her men and than at Yun.
’Yes… this will be fun’ she thought. ‘A real… laugh’.

Aayla woke up startled. Sudden. She looked around. The room was dimly lit. She made out several humanoid forms strapped to tables and one to the wall like she. If it was a wall.
She felt… cold. Chilly. Her head still dizzy from the stunbolt she soon realised she was entirely naked.
 
very very well written !
i´m open for more
youre the best star wars writer i know !
 
Darth Vegeta said:
OOC: little bit so far. Exams approach... .

IC:

Shaak Ti lashed out at Ventress. The fight was taking a lot of her. More than she had expected. The constant irregular firing of her enemies made duelling Ventress very hard.
Suddenly however a shot went off behind her.
The stunbolt hit her in the back. “Aaagh!” she said as her nervous system shut down and she fell unconscious onto the floor.
Aayla let out a yell “Master!” her blue blade parried a double blow from Ventress. Kicking back the Dark Jedi.
Cursing Ventress Force Pushed Aalya back.
”Now stun her!” Ventress ordered. Aayla wanted to jump up, but too late… several stunbolts hit her…. Too many to block or evade… .

Yun smiled meanwhile, jumping onto the higher level. Taking the high ground, Yun looked around. Holding his lightsaber, he breathed heavily, the fight had been hard so far.
And the inhuman Durge didn’t seem to have put much effort in it. Than again they were playing by his roles.
Walking forward, he looked around. The soldiers below didn’t move.
And Durge was nether on this level of stairs near the exit nor in the air.
Something was amiss… but what?
Suddenly Durge burst through the metallic floor itself, slamming Yun at high speed against the ceiling. Grabbing his booted foot, Yun was swung around and smashed onto the ground.
Knocked out after a flash of pain… all went dark for Yun.
Durge landed nearby. “That was fun, not bad for a young one” he grinned poking the jedi with his foot.
“And alive still… good” he said with his heavy voice.
Ventress approached him. The ivory skinned young woman looked at him furiously “I told you… to be careful. He might have died!”.
“But he didn’t” Durge merely answered “So don’t complain… now you can have your fun” he said.
Ventress looked at Yun, ignoring the huge Bounty Hunter.
She looked at the female Jedi, still sedated and being cuffed by her men and than at Yun.
’Yes… this will be fun’ she thought. ‘A real… laugh’.

Aayla woke up startled. Sudden. She looked around. The room was dimly lit. She made out several humanoid forms strapped to tables and one to the wall like she. If it was a wall.
She felt… cold. Chilly. Her head still dizzy from the stunbolt she soon realised she was entirely naked.

what i want to know is, will Asajj get tortured in this story?
 
Hmmm (rubs chin) Possibly at the end of the story. I plan on having some tickling involving Ventress and Ronar in the next story.
But i hadn't really thought that much about it yet.
You would like that? Anything in particular regarding Ventress?
 
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