STRANDED II (comic, F/M, F/F)

[Ilohnoh1]

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Time is ticking for Priëlla and Dora and they just found out that they were on the wrong track. Can they find and rescue Santa Clause before time runs out...?

Stay tuned!

Ilo.

(next up: the picture Mashcot won)

 

[Ilohnoh1]

WHEN they see a Demon in Heaven... of course they all want to check that out, and to touch.

Why wouldn't they?

This is Priëlla tickle tortured in Heaven drawn as a special request for Mashcot.

For a moment I thought of making it a small animation but that would have been too much work (and it's good that I made up my mind on time), but instead I have added extra colours (shades that you don't see in the comic) and published it at a much larger size than normal.


Enjoy!

Ilo.

PS: Mashcot may have a much better description or story with this picture, if you do, please share. I just made the above up myself. Anyway, I thought this was a really nice scene because of the contrast 'Demon tickled in Heaven' and since you're not going to see Priëlla in Heaven in the comic... this here is your chance on seeing that.

 

[Mashcot1]

This is fantastic, Ilohnoh! I really like the look on the red-haired angel's face, it's like she's malicious and curious at the same time! And the detail...wow!

I didn't really have a story in mind myself, just the role reversal of the good guys being the torturers. That was a good introduction to the image.

The only thing that gave me pause was that Priella's one eye was open. Though that may be just because closed eyes are the norm in generic tk art, and I'm used to it.

Again, great job and thank you!

 

[Ilohnoh1]

This is fantastic, Ilohnoh! I really like the look on the red-haired angel's face, it's like she's malicious and curious at the same time! And the detail...wow!

I didn't really have a story in mind myself, just the role reversal of the good guys being the torturers. That was a good introduction to the image.

The only thing that gave me pause was that Priella's one eye was open. Though that may be just because closed eyes are the norm in generic tk art, and I'm used to it.

Again, great job and thank you!

Thanks, Mashcot, glad to hear that you like it!

The eye (she does have two, but the other is hidden behind the hair, only revealed ONCE so far, during Stranded in Hell)... I'm not always drawing eyes closed during tickle scenes because eyes are important parts of the face and even expression can be changed by them... drawing them closed may however give the impression that the tickling is extra aggressive or effective... but if that is what you want... it's literally under 5 minutes work to change that.

Presto. 🙂

 

[Ryuk1]

Hi Ilohnoh,

thats a very great comic style. Love the concept! I agree, that Eyes are one of the most important part of pics. I think they give us more expressions and intenseness as closed eyes, but thats my opinion. I really fell in love with Priëlla. Such a nice character! Hope you make more with her, maybe one with a foot tickling scene?! But it seems like i have to check your Archive, i have noticed, you draw a lot! Maybe there is one with Priëlla, too?!

Ryuk

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Hi Ilohnoh,

thats a very great comic style. Love the concept! I agree, that Eyes are one of the most important part of pics. I think they give us more expressions and intenseness as closed eyes, but thats my opinion. I really fell in love with Priëlla. Such a nice character! Hope you make more with her, maybe one with a foot tickling scene?! But it seems like i have to check your Archive, i have noticed, you draw a lot! Maybe there is one with Priëlla, too?!

Ryuk

Hey Ryuk,

Yes, I draw a lot and have quite an archive.

The story you just tuned in to is a sequel, and there's a LOT more of Priëlla (and Dora) in the original story, which can be found here: Stranded in Hell. It's a 30 page long story, all pages can be found in that same thread and I made an index in post #1 so you can track them down easily if you don't want to scroll through the entire thread.

Unlike this current story (Hell on Earth), Stranded in Hell does contain a certain amount of foot tickling and even Priëlla does not escape this treatment.

Ilo.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

PAGE 8
has arrived!

Beware! Contains some violence and blood


Priëlla and Dora are on the right track now, at least as far as they can see. But time is running out. Less than 2 hours to find and rescue Santa Claus... and if they don't make it they either have to abandon their mission or get stuck on Earth for a whole month (to ride the next v-shift).

... maybe they don't have a choice... ?

Stay tuned as the tide turns...

 

[10 armed tkler]

hhhhmmmmm. Bad people that die recently go to heaven....hhhmmmmm.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

hhhhmmmmm. Bad people that die recently go to heaven....hhhmmmmm.

Could be. Could be. If what you're thinking is the case, better hope that demons are welcome in Heaven, now don't you think? 😉

The pages on this comic are running out. A big TK scene is coming up (biggest of the comic). The conclusion is real near... and more... but more about more later. 😉

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(and I got an easy time on colouring for a chance. Ahhhh =) )

 

[zpoiu]

Awesome keep it up please

 

[Ilohnoh1]

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Time is running out... and it looks like the options are running out as well...

3 more pages wraps up this story and the ending is probably not what you'll expect.

But first things first...

 

[bluemoose]

hey just wanted to say that demon character you made is really cool, i like your art, well done : )

 

[Ilohnoh1]

hey just wanted to say that demon character you made is really cool, i like your art, well done : )

Thank you. 🙂

It turns out a lot of people like Priëlla a lot. But she is of course a really cute and actually a pretty nice demoness. 😛 Yeah, I like her too.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

PAGE 11

Aaaaaaaand!

This page may look a lot like the end of this story, but there's still 2 pages coming up... and each of both have a big surprise. So stay tuned!

Ilo.

 

[Abadon XXX1]

Talk about serendipity ^^

 

[Ilohnoh1]

PAGE 12

Welcome to the story's grand finale. One more page follows, with another big um... revelation?

Incidentally you also find out the importance and relevance of the events on page 1 of this comic. 😉

Enjoy,

Ilo.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

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... which concludes this story.


It is probably not the end you were expecting, nor hoping for... I'll warn you that it's a little sad...



But I hope you enjoyed the story.

(comments, reactions are welcome of course!)

Ilo.

 

[Low_Roads]

Hell freezing over… a darned effective cliffhanger and setup for the third part of this series! There's been plenty to like throughout… the fondness between Dora and Priëlla comes across as touchingly genuine, and their investigation takes a number of twists while treating us to a variety of scenic locations! The bureaucratic nature of this afterworld includes a number of surprising components, most startling of which is that Santa Claus should be such an integral part of it. Then again, with his "naughty/nice" responsibilities, I suppose he's tailor-made for the job! The arch angel, too, is a rather daunting figure, his deus ex machine function and featureless white purity adding elements of cold austerity to his otherwise positive role. Above all, I appreciate those elements of storytelling which wear their heart on their sleeve: it's unusual for a fetish entertainment to dwell on deeply-held friendships, shattered familial bonds or the angst and joys of pregnancy, but such themes add immeasurable depth to this narrative and free up the tickling for the diversionary purpose it most profitably fulfills! I particularly enjoy those moments which explore the mutual affection between your protagonists… I found their parting on page 11 ("Be good, Priëlla!" "Be happy, Dora!"), as they fly back to their opposing realms, to be an especially moving moment! Augustina and Frank's struggles to conceive bracket the tale quite nicely, additionally adding a quotient of confounding complexity to any sequel! The countdown structure of the tale supplies tremendous suspense (though I'm a little dubious of the 5 minute gap between the scar-faced thug's "fat guy" slip and Dora/Priella's recognition of the fact [page 11]!) And one must feel deep empathy for Priëlla… her extreme discomfort in any landscape other than Hell sets up the third part of this series in cataclysmic fashion! Must say, I'm most intrigued by what you plan next! It's nothing I'll successfully anticipate, I imagine!

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Thanks for the great review, LBH!

Hell freezing over… a darned effective cliffhanger and setup for the third part of this series!

Hehe, indeed. Moreso the fact that Priëlla can't go there. More than the end of the first story (Stranded in Hell) this one is screaming 'sequel!'

Above all, I appreciate those elements of storytelling which wear their heart on their sleeve: it's unusual for a fetish entertainment to dwell on deeply-held friendships, shattered familial bonds or the angst and joys of pregnancy, but such themes add immeasurable depth to this narrative and free up the tickling for the diversionary purpose it most profitably fulfills!

I like a little drama and scenes about love (not to be mistaken for sex scenes, I don't do porn). Also, what I haven't told, this story isn't really written to entertain the tickle fetishists (to me tickling isn't really actually a fetish, I think tickling is fun and I like this community in general so it's fun to post here and participate) - it's the story that drives me and it's at the same time suitable and probably quite enjoyable to the readers here. The same counts also for the upcoming sequel: It contains tickling, but mostly because that is in Priëlla's nature, it is logical. But the setting is also really different. (well, it has to be... seeing that Dora is gone.)

I particularly enjoy those moments which explore the mutual affection between your protagonists… I found their parting on page 11 ("Be good, Priëlla!" "Be happy, Dora!"), as they fly back to their opposing realms, to be an especially moving moment!

Oh yes, and that line is a "signature moment" throughout the trilogy. You see this same thing on the last page in "Stranded in Hell", it's when Dora leaves to Heaven, when they separate for the first time. You will, HALF of it, see again at the end of the final chapter. This is part of the theme and runs through the story like a red thread. 😉

Augustina and Frank's struggles to conceive bracket the tale quite nicely, additionally adding a quotient of confounding complexity to any sequel!

*nods* it gives the story an extra dimension, as well as being really important for everything that still follows in the upcoming sequel.

The countdown structure of the tale supplies tremendous suspense (though I'm a little dubious of the 5 minute gap between the scar-faced thug's "fat guy" slip and Dora/Priella's recognition of the fact [page 11]!)

That's because they are seconds, not minutes. 😉 The format is "HH:MM.SS". I think the duration of the v-shift has not been exactly specified anywhere, except that it happens only once a month. In fact they have a day time to do all this and luckily for them they can travel around pretty much instantly or they could have not done it.

And one must feel deep empathy for Priëlla… her extreme discomfort in any landscape other than Hell sets up the third part of this series in cataclysmic fashion! Must say, I'm most intrigued by what you plan next! It's nothing I'll successfully anticipate, I imagine!

Yes. Whereas you might have felt sorry for Dora during the first story (while she was undeservingly in Hell and being tortured over and over again) it is now Priëlla's turn to fall into despair. She may be in bigger trouble however, seen as there's no knowing how long before she can go back to where she wants to be - if indeed she even can! She soon finds out that she can't reach Dora anymore, of course... so... where to go from there?

Priëlla will also go through changes (again, and this is also almost a constant in the story). In the first story she had less impressive wings and smaller horns, she was just a minion. When she got promoted her appearance changed with it. She got taller horns, bigger wings and more body patterns. This time, as you can see in the sneak-peek of my banner, she has to adjust to the climate on Earth. Whereas she had been equipped with a bra for most of the current story, she's going to want actual clothing to stay a little warm this time around. And she did something with her hair, you can now actually see her second eye (which you only saw once in the original story), which I think is pretty cool.