Stuck #1: Hole in the Wall M/f [BRAND NEW!]

[midnightgreen]

😵
Do not tell me that because her body reacted to the sexual stimuli presented to her, meant she was willingly going to spread her legs apart and let him inside her.

I may be letting a huge cat out of a chain mail bag here, but you are aware that this is a pornographic story, yes?

 

[JackVanderson]

I may be letting a huge cat out of a chain mail bag here, but you are aware that this is a pornographic story, yes?

*facepalm* you obviously didn't read the post I commented too or my whole response. So I will provide them for you.

[*begin listing comments*
(the comment)

I don't think she got raped. She was turned on enough to enjoy it.

(my response)

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Uh no.
The body's natural response to stimuli of a sexual nature and the mental state during such an act are not the same. Do not tell me that because her body reacted to the sexual stimuli presented to her, meant she was willingly going to spread her legs apart and let him inside her. Unless you've seen the effects of rape on someone close to you, you have no idea how much damage it can do.

*ends listing comments*]

As you can clearly see the talk was over the fact that just because she was turned on, didn't excuse the act of rape.

Oh and btw, I love how you cut out the key parts of my quote leaving just the sentences that built off of it to try and make me look like an idiot. Better luck next time.

 

[midnightgreen]

You're trying to have a debate over something in a pornographic story and you're accusing me of trying to make you look like an idiot?

That's fantastic.

 

[JackVanderson]

You're trying to have a debate over something in a pornographic story and you're accusing me of trying to make you look like an idiot?

That's fantastic.

And as you obviously didn't notice, there's not a single indication that this story is a pornographic story. It becomes pornographic the second he starts to remove her pants against her will, then simply deteriorates into a case of rape from there. It's blatently obvious that you're to emotionaly cold to have noticed the implications of rape, or are just some sick twisted freak that loves that kind of thing.

Now I wonder why it is you feel like trolling me? You've made no real point in your posts especially when you quoted me taking out the key parts of the quote. You've made it very clear that you do not intend to hold down an actual conversation but are simply trying to belittle me with every post you make.

Do the boards a favor and return to lurking.

 

[melanie2]

Where in the title of this story does it suggest it's a pornographic story? Jack is right..

 

[midnightgreen]

Sorry, it's my fault. I had assumed that since the story was posted on an adult forum where people gather for the main purpose of jacking off to tickle torture that that was the main point of this story.

Silly me and my impossible leaps of logic.

I'm not trying to troll anyone, but good lord. I see a perfectly good story being ruined by a group of whiners because "oh god, we don't know what happened but the hints make me rage!"

I'll solve this right now: If it keeps your cocks stiff to think the chick got raped, guess what? She got raped. If it keeps your cocks stiff to think something less intrusive happened, guess what? She didn't get raped.

Problem solved, I'm going back to lurking. Have fun writing the doubtlessly amazing smartass comments you'll come up with.

 

[Sir Bombers]

LOL...

Threads like these are funny to me... on both sides of the argument!

The following statement is tongue in cheek!

Of course there was "NO" rape... LMAO...

Eeeeeverything is fine folks. Don't fret!

I mean c'mon... There's nothing wrong with taking the clothes off of an unsuspecting helpless victim regardless of her age or arousal! 😉

Seriously people do it ALLLLL the time...

and suuuure...I would never dream that a man full of lust, a "near aching boner" and a lack of "similar primal pay off," would take off nearly all of his clothes as well in the midst of a vunerable "access" point such as our "butt naked" lilly's. 😉

I can see he has virtually no raging sexual interest in her, you know... by how he gets turned on by muscle tightning from her squeezed/tickled butt cheek or as his "five fingers skate recklessly over what soaking wet mound they could reach."

I definitely can't see any interest in sexual gain at all...no sir...

and what of our ticklee Lilly?

You can definitely see how willing she is for this situation as she screams out, "pursing her lips with sudden surprise and humiliation."

Isn't humiliation wonderful! Everybody loves it when it happens to them!

Her willingness continues while she fighting between giggles and the rush of warm pleasure. "neither of which she wanted..."If I may quote directly from the story...

LOL!

Her desperate cries of rejection, consisting of hollered "NOs!" are as inviting as a bounced check!

As you can see...she reaallly wants it by being very "willing" to our friend Dennis' touching methods ...

Yes indeed... noooo rape here i'm sure...LOL :ggrin:


And what's this about a "similar primal pay off" anyway? Lilly had one alright. A primal pay off of intense orgasmic sensations... Could our anxious Dennis want one too?...

Nah, that just caaaaaan't happen...oh noooooo... not with an aching boner and the need to take off his own clothes as well as lilly's underpants...

Rape...sexual harassment?

NONSENSE!

...that's just silly... :laughing:

I'm sure if any of us was stuck in a hole, without any chance of getting out, of course you would want a nearly naked stranger to take your pants and underwear off and begin to tickle your booty and privates among other things to satisfy his own burning lust... 😉

Oy yeeeah... everybody loves that...

I bet no one would be "unwilling" to let some stranger do that to them...

Oh noooo sir....


😀

*Sarcasm over*

Great story BTW. Very well written, with descriptive words and an interesting scenario... the ending parts are a bit...unorthodox.... 😉

 

[lola1341]

Sorry, it's my fault. I had assumed that since the story was posted on an adult forum where people gather for the main purpose of jacking off to tickle torture that that was the main point of this story.

Silly me and my impossible leaps of logic.

I'm not trying to troll anyone, but good lord. I see a perfectly good story being ruined by a group of whiners because "oh god, we don't know what happened but the hints make me rage!"

I'll solve this right now: If it keeps your cocks stiff to think the chick got raped, guess what? She got raped. If it keeps your cocks stiff to think something less intrusive happened, guess what? She didn't get raped.

Problem solved, I'm going back to lurking. Have fun writing the doubtlessly amazing smartass comments you'll come up with.

Although a bit vulgar its honest and I have to agree. This is pure fantasy. I've been lurking around these forums for oohhh....5 years now. I've read everything from aliens, to plants, from college roommates to kidnappers. Not once did I ever see anyone scream OMG RAPE......

I myself have a small fetish for trapped in wall scenarios. No one is screaming advocate for rapist and making excuses for the vile act. Its a fetish story and a fetish sight. Seriously this is nothing compared to other fetishes. Don't start assuming things.

Mantis never meant it as it was interpreted. Though you are more then welcome to your opinion don't be ignorant.

 

[Ninjaboo]

Sorry, it's my fault. I had assumed that since the story was posted on an adult forum where people gather for the main purpose of jacking off to tickle torture that that was the main point of this story.

Silly me and my impossible leaps of logic.

I'm not trying to troll anyone, but good lord. I see a perfectly good story being ruined by a group of whiners because "oh god, we don't know what happened but the hints make me rage!"

I'll solve this right now: If it keeps your cocks stiff to think the chick got raped, guess what? She got raped. If it keeps your cocks stiff to think something less intrusive happened, guess what? She didn't get raped.

Problem solved, I'm going back to lurking. Have fun writing the doubtlessly amazing smartass comments you'll come up with.

*raises hand* Not all of us jerk off to it. I don't have a penis so I can't jerk off... nothing to jerk. :super_hap

 

[FeatherDaemon1]

Sorry, it's my fault. I had assumed that since the story was posted on an adult forum where people gather for the main purpose of jacking off to tickle torture that that was the main point of this story.

Silly me and my impossible leaps of logic.

I'm not trying to troll anyone, but good lord. I see a perfectly good story being ruined by a group of whiners because "oh god, we don't know what happened but the hints make me rage!"

I'll solve this right now: If it keeps your cocks stiff to think the chick got raped, guess what? She got raped. If it keeps your cocks stiff to think something less intrusive happened, guess what? She didn't get raped.

Problem solved, I'm going back to lurking. Have fun writing the doubtlessly amazing smartass comments you'll come up with.

The point that is being missed is that a proper description of the story would have cleared all this up.

 

[melanie2]

Sorry, it's my fault. I had assumed that since the story was posted on an adult forum where people gather for the main purpose of jacking off to tickle torture that that was the main point of this story.

Silly me and my impossible leaps of logic.

I'm not trying to troll anyone, but good lord. I see a perfectly good story being ruined by a group of whiners because "oh god, we don't know what happened but the hints make me rage!"

I'll solve this right now: If it keeps your cocks stiff to think the chick got raped, guess what? She got raped. If it keeps your cocks stiff to think something less intrusive happened, guess what? She didn't get raped.

Problem solved, I'm going back to lurking. Have fun writing the doubtlessly amazing smartass comments you'll come up with.

Don't go back to lurksville..you brought up some interesting points..however i don't think this entire theater is made up of pornography..the clips i view don't usually have nudity..True i prefer non-consensual stories..but i've never actually considered it porn..and the idea that the ending was up to your imagination, well...it was rather well-thought out on TickleMantis's part..i mean he never did imply that rape actually occurred..

Anyway..don't lurk..you did have some intelligent remarks to make..i felt..

 

[wildangels13]

Yes that is a great story, i love that idea as well, would love to see a story of someone falling throught the floor and getting stuck with their lower half hanging from the ceiling on the floor below.

 

[TickleMantis]

Yes that is a great story, i love that idea as well, would love to see a story of someone falling throught the floor and getting stuck with their lower half hanging from the ceiling on the floor below.

There is fantastic story called "Theater Laughter" by the very talented TQLR about that very thing, but I'm afraid I can't find it anywhere.

Why did I only get the automatic e-mail about all these responses now? Oh well.

You'll have to forgive me for not getting involved in the whole 'rape or no rape' thing again, I said my piece. But it sure is interesting either way, just don't nobody go getting to angry with eachother, we're all pals...plus I don't want to get in trouble for insighting a riot 😉

 

[Derrick17]

hey buddy, i agree with you... I love these stories when girls accidentally get stuck and get tickled. Im not going to lie. Im kind of getting tired of girls forcefully being tied up, gagged, and tickled. Nice to have something different for once where the girl accidentally gets stuck. Great Job!

 

[Zaq!]

Hey Mantis,

Since no one else will step up and say so, let me just say that I enjoyed your story, and am looking forward to subsequent "Stuck" adventures!

^^ Way back last year, I said the above. ^^

Will you be doing any more of the 'Stuck' series anytime soon?

If nothing else, you know you might just get a few pages worth of controversy out of it... :rolleyes

 

[TickleMantis]

Thanks for the kind words chaps.

I am working on another Stuck story, although it's going slowly...but it's definetly going. I can take or leave the controversy lol

 

[tidoman61]

Hiya!

I must say that

"I've always been a big fan of situtations where beautiful women get accidently caught, trapped, bound, held...stuck and then (naturally) tickled ruthlessly. This new series is set to revolve around this singular theme. I've been wanting to do this for a long time and I'm pretty proud to finally be getting it started."

has always been my #1 tickling fantasy and that you rock for writing this. Please please please right more, I'm no writer but i have a million ideas for stories...PM me somtime!

 

[FAMILydude]

Great job

Wow first time I have been to this website and I read a really great story, keep up the good work mantis

 

[midnightgreen]

There is fantastic story called "Theater Laughter" by the very talented TQLR about that very thing, but I'm afraid I can't find it anywhere.

This?

http://www.ticklingforum.com/archive/index.php/t-27681.html

 

[TickleMantis]

This?

http://www.ticklingforum.com/archive/index.php/t-27681.html

That's the one! I highly reccomend TQLR's work, he's one of my favorite tickle-writers, if not my all time favorite.

Thanks for the kind words lads! 🙂