Taking art requests

[TickleHerSilly1]

Well if that's what gets it viewed, I just want feedback on my art so whichever works best for you guys is what I'll do.

 

[AnimeWatcher1]

Ooo la la, vibrating lingerie. :wub Lillia sounds like my kind of woman lol

As for any critique I can give, this one is hard. I actually can't find anything really wrong with it proportion wise. I think the back leg might be a little longer than the front and larger calf-ankle wise in comparison to the front. the rest of the body looks great for its angle. Oh, perhaps a smaller bellybutton indention line too; that large line makes it seem like she has a few inches in diameter right there :stickout Other than that, I'd say this is your best one out of the 3 in terms of anatomical scale. Excellent job.

For a bf name, why not Alexander (Alex for short)? Or Chad. Or Michael aka Mike. Really there is a lot of male names you could pick. -shrugs-

As for your future pictures, like Phoenixfeathers said, w/e is easier for you. If you're going to do requests AND your own characters/stories, it might be better to make two separate threads. This thread seems to be for requests, so posting non-requests and personal experiments could clutter it up without their own dedicated thread. You can wait to do this until you have more requests filled out, so in the meantime just stay the course right now.

 

[ticklish2011]

extra wrinkled soles 🙂

 

[TickleHerSilly1]

@AnimeWatcher If that's the idea the belly button indentation gave you then what I had in mind obviously turned out wrong >_0 I'll have to see to that. And for the BF's name, good suggestions, but I think I want to go for a slightly less common name, something memorable. I've been watching lots of anime and reading manga to try and get a better feel for anatomy, limb length and such, hope to give you guys even better art in the near future!

@ticklish2011 Wrinkled soles, ouch. I know foot tickling is a big thing here, so I'm gonna have to sharpen my detail skills to adhere to your...needs. 😛

Question: When I make a reply to you guys on my thread are you alerted to it, or do you have to check and see?

 

[SupportGunner]

Nice works. I guess your up to you'r ass in requests for the moment, so I suppose I should wait a week or two for you to finish these ones up, If you'l still takes requests then that is.

Welcome to our glorious community by the way, I'l hope you will enjoy your time here 😉

 

[TickleHerSilly1]

@Everyone in thread: I hope you guys are of the patient sort, because right now me and my family are having to prepare to move and it's sort of putting a strain on me both physically and mentally. I will definitely still do all requests but I'm just forewarning you all that should I turn em out at a slow rate you now know why.

@SupportGunner: Yeah I've sort of got a few requests right now, I'll make sure to remember you some space frees up though! 😀

 

[AnimeWatcher1]

Hahaha, you should see how long we've been waiting for updates on Tower of Gargalesis and Labyrinth of Laughter. Yes, we can be quite patient - your life outside these forums comes first, as it always should.

As to the bellybutton thing, I don't think you need to do much. Look around on Danbooru or such and see some of the artworks done and how they do women at that angle. I know what you were trying to show, the contours of the frame along with her bellybutton, but you need something that shows depth.
Either darken the line where her bellybutton is and lighten/taper the contours, draw an additional line that creates a small oval where her button is, or use shading to show it goes inward could all convey the bellybutton easier.
You're actually doing quite well in the learning process so far. Keep studying anime/manga and other art to get inspiration for new drawings and improve your skills 🙂