The Break In

[SlaverTickler]

That was great!

I really like how you mentioned "Dave" forgetting to take his shoes off, a little bit of silly/funny in a ver sexy story.

 

[isabeau]

I really like how you mentioned "Dave" forgetting to take his shoes off, a little bit of silly/funny in a ver sexy story.

thanks hon.. i thought a bit of humor would be a nice touch, and in his hurry to climb on board , so to speak, he forgets his shoes.. hehe just like in some movies. glad you enjoyed it.

 

[maniactickler]

Good thing i read the exclaimer first. this was rated XXX. i had no choice but to touch myself numerous times.

 

[isabeau]

Good thing i read the exclaimer first. this was rated XXX. i had no choice but to touch myself numerous times.

uh gee thanks lolol..i suppose you touched your head to shake those stupid thoughts of flatulence away?? hehehe.. anyway thanks maniac..

 

[DannyMc]

Great story Melanie , just keep more of them coming !!!

 

[thx10050]

This story reminds me a lot of Laughter_n_Love's 'Bedroom Games' story, posted over in his section. Any influence?

 

[isabeau]

This story reminds me a lot of Laughter_n_Love's 'Bedroom Games' story, posted over in his section. Any influence?

i loved that story, but no, no conscience influence.. thanks

danny thanks xoxo

 

[isabeau]

Another late compliment to send out.

Great story, we are all so glad you decided to get into writing. Continue with the awesome work.

thanks James..always nice to get other writer's opinions..