Oh my god... a thousand apologies, Moonknight! I don't know how I managed to overlook your post (like overlooking an elephant in the kitchen! Your usual glory of generous commentary!)... yet I've managed the unmanageable! So sorry for this late reply!
Not at all! Apparently we were posting at about the same time and missed each other in the fog. I always assumed this to be the case and never once felt 'slighted'. I'm not as self-important as all that!
I've been snubbed on here before, but never by you. You're far too tactful for that. (And incidently, snubbing doesn't phase me in the slightest...I still get to download the snubbers artwork for free!!!
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At any rate, no need to apologize at all! I'm just grateful for your kind and thoughtful replies to my commentary.
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My grateful thanks! Sparrow's exploratory interest seemed a good lead-in to the more involved tickling scene between Angie and Fiona. Second fiddle: the disadvantage of being a tyro! Not for long, though... when one aches to walk on the wild side, one can't gripe when things turn wild! In a series concerned with personal growth, Ms. Hall will not be immune. She'll soon have a chapter that's essentially all her own... much mischievous play to experience after that, too!
Sparrow is indeed destined to get her just desserts; and you, my friend, will have the best seat in the house! I plan this scene for Chapter 15, which (if I'm diligent) won't be very far away!
Well, as you say, I can't imagine her remaining a novice for too much longer! She seems anxious to get her feet wet...or tickled as the case may be. What an atomic eruption elicited by the entirely unintentional tickling of a trio of bluebottle flies! I imagine that if Tabor County had car alarms, she'd have set them all off with that one! She may be one of the most ticklish maidens in the book! Or at least the one with the most explosive reactions!
And as always, I'm extraordinarily grateful for my impending cameo, however undeserved it may be.
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Thanks so much! I'm very happy to hear you say that... I was afraid the encounter might come across as staticy, since little happens in it outside of the tussle (generally, I like to sow plot exposition into the fetish scenes, so they fulfill a dual purpose. The Angie/Fiona scene has rather less of that). The series' fetish action will gradually veer away from bondage and "forced" enjoyment (though never entirely... non-consensual tickling provides far too much verve to totally abandon). That's thematically important, as Mercy and Angie become increasingly empowered by the tickling milieu, the series' paramount aim. It becomes necessary, then, to devise alternate scenarios which deliver equal drama. I've worked out enough such situations for five or so chapters... after that, I gotta get creative!
Thank you! I wanted Fiona to appear to be a wild child, receiving and offering pleasure in an uninhibited, instinctual way, impulsively and free from any hint of guilt. There's literally something feral about her, a hidden aspect which future episodes will reveal.
Although I realize that this wasn't technically Fiona's debut, she certainly came into her own in this episode, and I for one found her quite appealing. The tussle scene may not have been expository in terms of the plot, but it certainly spoke volumes concerning the character of the girls involved. Fiona was everything you wished her to be, and Angela's 'taking better than she gave' also spoke to who and what she is as a voluptuary.
You really outdid yourself this time, and that's not an easy thing to do.
I can't wait for the next few installments. Thanks once again for sharing this gift with the community.
MK
