Low_Roads
4th Level Black Feather
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Many more, Raven! I can see the finished chapter count running into the mid-fourties! Thank you for the encouragement!Another great chapter of your story LBH. Hope you keep it going a lot more chapters.
It doesn't surprise me you spotted Sephie! You have a special connection to her (TR probably knows and understands her better than anyone!) You're quite right... she'll need plenty of allies in the upcoming Bogey War, and Von Smutt is a strong kindred spirit to serve as support! He could help to heal her damaged emotional state too... just as long as no misunderstandings arise. We'll have to see about that...I knew the masked one at the begining was Sephie, don't now how but I knew it. It seems that my friend Sephie has found someone close to her in Von Smutt. Good to know that, because the events are going to get over her.
Thank you! The Mercy/Angie friendship was an element I personally found most appealing, and I was eager that it not dissipate due to their separation. The idea of posting letters was one I really liked, as it connected them while allowing for arial images of Walter to emphasize the distance they've drifted. As Angie's journey progresses, she'll be sending news from exotic foreign localities... her text will help to dramatize these new environs, informing the reader just as she will Mercy.The pannels with the letter between Angie and Mercy are great. You have portrayed a very real friendship between them.
Swillwell, I fear, is in for a rough time. Some devastation is likely inevitable (the main gate's taken a hard blow already!) Happily, its inhabitants are hardy... leveling the town won't be easy, even for bloated Sid and his minions!What will happen with Swillwell now? Hope this nice place won't get destroyed by this attack.
Season's greetings to you, Lee! And thanks so much for your understanding... these chapters are never ready as soon as I'd like them to be (I'd send them a month apart, if I could manage it. Alas, that's pipe-dream smoke!), and it's always a joy to me that each one is welcomed so warmly, and that so little continuity (especially for such involved proceedings) is lost! Especially after a ridiculous gap like the last one... I'll try never to let that happen again!So, I return from my holiday travels to find yet another holiday treat! You say we will be treated to more chapters for years to come. That's great, most series that I enjoy are over way too soon. I'm glad you are able to do all this work. Don't worry too much about timeliness. We are very eager but respectfully grateful.
Thanks for the forewarning! I'll keep my own pitchfork handy, so that if the crowd does materialize, I can melt into its ranks! XD We'll burn down the one of Kalamos' threads instead... he's tough; he can take it!Just don't be late again or risk a rabid, slack jawed, drooling mob of fans, crazed from Low Roads withdrawal, with raised pitchforks and torches, chanting "Chapters or Death!". I'll be in the front, trying to look respectful and grateful, wiping my drool and gripping my pitchfork. 😉
Thanks! Bulking up the attackers with artificial muscles wasn't something I'd originally considered... it sorta developed gradually with ongoing chapter-to-chapter detailing (Klept got his "Sid Cam" in Chapter 14 primarily for intended comedy applications; Klept clobbering Dox in Chapter 15 was a last-minute consideration as I worked out script specifics, etc.). In retrospect, it's all worked out rather happily... Sid's few-score raiders are outnumbered by the Swillwell residents, and need an advantage to seem a proper threat. Making each thug a "super-felon" also provides promising opportunities for action. Now that I've broached this possibility, I better come through!I wasn't expecting an entire Sid-pieces powered army.
Seeing that formidable horde definitely builds suspense and anticipation for the coming melee.
Yeah, I've only done a couple of those so far, and they've both involved bugs! I'll doubtless want more... better come up with a variation next time! I likewise like the idea of some jeopardy attaching to the tickling act... it's a nice counterpoint to the gentler, fun-loving sort or pure torture so often employed (though... what's the worst Gale could expect if she were caught? To be handed over to Sid, most likely... for further tickling? Damned if you're quiet, damned if you laugh out loud!)I too loved the dangerous tickling, this time by insects. Such danger is a favorite of many, as the "Scenes of Desperation" thread attests.
That's very nice to hear, a deeply gratifying sentiment! Maintaining sympathy for these characters is so vitally important... this is a really long, serious, dense story, requiring a huge investment of reader attention, and I doubt anyone would bother with it at all if they couldn't connect to the characters beyond narrow fetish concerns. For you to say that you felt happiness for Mercy and Angie is beautiful music to me... the very response I hope and pray for always!I agree with all the preceding commentary, especially concerning the "air-mail", connecting Angie and Mercy. I felt happy for them. It echos the holiday season of connecting with friends and family.
Thank you Ilohnoh! I'm very glad that resonated with you! I have a subsidiary fetish interest (linked to tickling and to bare feet) in rubber blow-up items, such as balloons, pool toys, inflatable furniture, etc. The squeaky-clean, tight-but-yielding surface tension seems an idealized exaggeration of human touchability to me. While this is the first time I've expressed this quirk in the comic, I'd like it not to be the last... not sure how to work in further instances, but I'll be on the lookout for any opportunity!mmmm... Got to love the chair! Got to love that chair! 😀
Nice one!
You continue to divine and articulate this story's primary themes with a clarity that shames me into inadequacy (I've never managed to express them as concisely as you have!) That anyone bothers about the thematic content at all makes me warmly grateful for the complex depth of our Community... those who'd characterize fetishists as a pack of monolithic sloped-foreheads would do well to take note! While a tickle narrative doesn't necessarily need a world view (to deliver cracking good adventure, memorable characters and alluring sensuality is nobility enough, and one can find tons stories and comix here that do so expertly), one this extended had better delve into developing themes or risk stagnation. I'm particularly pleased that your comments have centered on Sephie... she was imagined as a pivotal character from the very first, and the battle for her persona will be a key concern of the storytelling through to the end chapter!Another interesting installment. The tickling/sensuality metaphor continues to develop. Your point becomes ever clearer (one I happen to agree with) that the danger of obsessive and excessive sensuality (the bogies) is greater where normal sensuality is puritanically shunned, and sick excess looks like the only road to "pleasure." I particularly liked Sephie's scene for that reason: in order to defeat the crazed bogies, she has to wake up to the middle ground of appropriate sensual pleasure -- represented by tickling, in the story (and for most of us here, to some extent in real life). It's all very interesting, so much more than just a fetish toon.
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