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The Self Referential Thread

ticklishangel52 said:
I've been too busy trying to keep up with the demand for mine! I'm sorry 🙁
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Mine is not the best story for the market. This group likes red meat, hot and keep it coming. My piece got plenty of views, but no responses at all.

Anyway, I'll be interested to know what a reader thinks of it.
 
Here are some of the stories I currently have in progress

Tickled for Eternity part 2: Cassie discovers her next tickling adventure in the maze

Cowboys and Angels: A stable hand gets his revenge on the spoiled, wealthy daughter of a rancher for treating him like a servant

Pharaoh's Feathers: An Egyptian ruler submits herself to be restrained and tickled by her servant

The Ticklish Professor part 2: Katie refuses to even look at Keith after their ordeal, and he's had enough
 
You must be immune to writer's block! That's a good place to be.

They all sound intriguing and potentially very satisfying. Far be it from me to criticize the taste at the wellspring. Follow your muse.

Technique, however, is a different matter. Some of us pay no attention even to the fundamentals. Your latest is a huge improvement just in the early paragraph layout. In dialogue, start a new paragraph with each change of speaker. This practice creates a lot of whitespace. This is serendipity, and favorable. Whitespace makes your story more readable. Big blocks of text drive people away before they sample the first word.

There are other reasons to to stop-drop-and-indent. Harder to grasp is the idea of topic. We all love and hate to do exposition. On the one hand, it's an easy way to assert control over the pageful. I try to use dialog to carry some of the exposition. If the author tells you something, it's not strictly fair play. The Word is Given to the extent that the writer is God. When a character tells the reader something, the reader knows that that character at least has to live by his or her words, or be shown to be a liar, if sane.

Stop-drop-and-indent for each new topic, even if it's just a moment of plot upkeep.

("The clock on the wall says three o'clock.")
 
ticklishangel52 said:
Here are some of the stories I currently have in progress

Tickled for Eternity part 2: Cassie discovers her next tickling adventure in the maze

Cowboys and Angels: A stable hand gets his revenge on the spoiled, wealthy daughter of a rancher for treating him like a servant

Pharaoh's Feathers: An Egyptian ruler submits herself to be restrained and tickled by her servant

The Ticklish Professor part 2: Katie refuses to even look at Keith after their ordeal, and he's had enough
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Wow. I can only work on one story at a time. 😀 😛
 
Hi everyone. :hello: Hope you are all well. 🙂 Not sure when I will be on next,as I am working some odd hours. Take care everyone. :peace: :wub: 😀 :bunny:
 
Hello, Angel and Zod. :wavingguy
I'm fine today and hope that both of you are well, too. 😀 😛
 
Hi everyone. :hello: Two major storms are suppose to hit So Cal. starting tonight. I spent most of last night and today trying to get everything prepared. I think now I am going to take a well deserved nap. 🙂 I am not sure when I can come online again. It depends on how bad the storms get. 🙁


Good Night Angel. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night sophilos. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night AmishTickler. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night BengaliGirl. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night Aussieticklegal. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night Helena. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night Raichyll. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night Nemmy. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night seanwoj. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night porcelaindoll2. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night Pulchritudinous. Take care my good friend. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Good Night Everyone. Take care my good friends. Peace and wuv. 😀 :bunny: :wub: 😀

Armada Status:

The Armada has saved Snorphous BlapoMat and several other citizens of the world that lies behind door #444,444 from the Shandrew Tamb Bodecai demons that have invaded that world. Snorphous is taking the Armada to the leaders of world # 444,444 so that this critical world and its vital citizens can be saved.
 
Fingers crossed for your plantings, Kurch!
Sleep easy, Zod.

What say, Angel? :pillowfight: I'm three beers along and not well-coordinated. Just mellow.

:xpulcy::swayparrot:
 
Six weeks out for invasive surgery is not a long time. But it does feel good to take your body in hand, tell it "qUitcherbitchin'", and do what you want to do.

:flex::rockon:
 
Hello, everybody. :wavingguy
I'm fine today and hope that all of you are well, too. 😀 😛
 
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