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Tickle Toy of Mary-Kate and Ashley (F/m)

God, guys, please put this into perspective. This is a fictional story, a story about something that can never happen in any place or time, calm down.
 
hey milagros just wanted to say i love your story and the spanking you added in made it even better and as for featherfeet he needs to shut up and quit being so mean and critical all because he didn't like the story he had no right to begin with because you did indeed put a disclaimer on there explaining what the story was about and if he didn't like then he never should've read it in the first place in stead writing what he said about the story.
 
mila gros i just want to say i love the story but was wondering if you could recreate the story and have me as the person being tickled please write back the instant you come back by the way my name is dez and i'm a guy despite what the gender thing says (i messed up on that lol!)
 
I have to say this was the single BEST tickling story I've ever read. Ever. The whingers in this thread shouldn't complain: it was labelled, you knew what it contained, and you read it anyway and THEN complained about it. That's like a movie reviewer who hates action movies reviewing "war of the worlds". If you don't like this genre, yo're not in a position to comment on stories within this genre.
 
can you make a story for me

hey milagros just wanted to say i liked your story and was wondering if you could makea story just like that for me my name is dez and if you want to write back my address is [email protected]
 
this... was horrible... if not for the basis, for what happened

Orange MARMELADE? The guy'd be DEAD after only 2 weeks! Processed suger is NOT enough to support human life mate. And the torture they put him thru... after only 20 whacks his arse would be raw, after 50 it'd be BLEEDING, and after 200, he'd have PERMANENT scarring. The human rump is NOT that tough because, let's face it, HOW OFTEN does it get truely hurt?

Oh, and by the end of the third day of something like that, he'd be truely insane. After a few days, he wouldn't react anymore at all. After a month, he'd not even feel anything.

I agree with what was said.. this is like... tickle rape
 
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This story generated a lot of controversy, many people liking it, but many people hating it because of the non-consensual nature of it and the corporal punishment that was in it along with the tickle torture.

For those who really liked it:

I have written an even longer fiction story, over 50,000 words, that is now available as paperback book or as a download. It is 144 pages as a paperback book.

Warning: It is of a non-consensual nature and it contains severe F/m domination and corporal punishment, far beyond what was in the story above.

If you are interested, you can buy it here:

http://www.lulu.com/content/798153
 
Kittamaru said:
this... was horrible... if not for the basis, for what happened

Orange MARMELADE? The guy'd be DEAD after only 2 weeks! Processed suger is NOT enough to support human life mate. And the torture they put him thru... after only 20 whacks his arse would be raw, after 50 it'd be BLEEDING, and after 200, he'd have PERMANENT scarring. The human rump is NOT that tough because, let's face it, HOW OFTEN does it get truely hurt?

Oh, and by the end of the third day of something like that, he'd be truely insane. After a few days, he wouldn't react anymore at all. After a month, he'd not even feel anything.

I agree with what was said.. this is like... tickle rape
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... and you know what else? I was watching that Lord of the Rings movie. You know what I realised? There's no such things as Hobbits. I mean if there were, we'd have found them by now. Am I right?
 
I wonder if hobbits are ticklish. Do their furry feet offer any protection? 😛aw:
 
The story is highly erotic and is a good detailed fantasy. Since all the women are adults in the story it should have included at least a bit of sexual play. There are few women who wouldn't be aroused by tying up and tickling a young, tiny, cute, highly ticklish guy, and it would have added some spice to the fantasy. I did read it all the way through, even though it became quite dark and ponderous in the last paragraphs. Lots of us think of the Olsen twins as cuddly with a touch of mischief, but it's a reach to believe they would be into heavy S&M at 18. But...it IS a fantasy, and I'm sure some people "got off" on it, even though not one of the girl ticklers was horny enough to give the little guy a long, screaming orgasm after hours of tickling, (something that should have "delighted" the young Olsens!).
 
Whoa.

I think you have a record for longest post on the forum. That was soooo long! I really enjoyed the verbal teasing and the kissing on the forehead really turned my crank haha! That's a birthday wish I will look into some day. :drool

Not a fan of the spanking or torture so much, but that doesn't discredit your ability to write! Nicely done sir.
 
I am astonished that somebody has revived this thread after more than three years. I"m glad that you enjoyed the story, player x2020.

Yes, it is very long, Ishaansh33 and player x2020. When I'm writing something, I just let it go until I've told the whole story.

My newer work is available for sale here:

http://mtjpub.com/mtj02_publications.php?author=33
 
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