c_tickler
3rd Level Red Feather
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CT and Hayley have some scary competition! This old galoot looks mighty tough! And with Cherokee chickadee Vicky at his side, he's really a force to reckon with! Some dynamic story-telling devices in this chapter: a flash-back, a flash-forward and a clever instance of implied action (the last panel; four legs, one human/three equine, deftly indicate Vicky's horse-mounting without the need for a full shot. Nicely turned ankle, by the way!) Plenty of forces vie for high stakes in the upcoming big card game... thing should really start to pop once they collide!
Thanks LBH! glad you liked the last panel - wasn't sure if that would work but it seems to of got the action across - plus a rare glimpse of Vicky's sole 😉
I can't get enough of the tribal tie-up dangling from the stick -as you'll see in part 15 (oppps! plot spoiler!)
And Thanks to you too Bandito, big admirer of your work 😉
I'll try n' keep the storyline continuous and fun - but so much more can be done with this it just keeps going 😉