Incubo Magnifico based on a Musical

[Low_Roads]

Plenty action-packed, this last stretch, with events changing drastically almost from paragraph to paragraph! Which "really, really evil British guys" did you have in mind? I'm not sure the British are any more outstandingly evil than anyone else.

The final exchange sounds suspiciously like a conclusion. We aren't done here, are we?

 

[melanie2]

No matter boy," he said like one of those really really evil british guys, "you won't stop what has begun

lol that line is fantastic...you simply cannot stop now..i'm with Littlebighead on this..it's crying out for a sequel...your humour is so unique, i love it..and all the terrific characters and descriptive actions..never a dull moment..

more more more...

 

[Duke Diablo]

Haven't read the whole thing yet... there sure is a lot of it... but I did like what I read.

So far so great.